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Offline darth neo

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the life of .......
« on: June 15, 2010, 12:27:23 PM »
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boba fett 19 yrs old
iviin'yc fett
frah resglee
tal dakansal

He ran through the raging storm damp and cold it was hard to rain in a blinding hot desert but Boba thought it must be winds from the north. Boba dared to look back but when he did he regreted it as the stagnat killer had a long, blood stained Blade, weilded in his right hand . now he could see the hutt, its door was unlocked as the door was open ,there was a chair outside with the clothes in. He ran in the hutt closing and locking the door behind him . Breathless he turned and looked in the hutt but he did'nt expect a knife jabbed in his stomach between his armour plates .......

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Re: the life of .......
« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2010, 08:04:07 PM »
Good Start!
As do I. It is our lot in life, Master. Shall we find something to kill to cheer us up?
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Re: the life of .......
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2010, 12:19:55 PM »
cheers but gamma squad is way beteer!!!

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Re: the life of .......
« Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 12:24:23 PM »
Ah, don't say that. To me, its just like any other story on this board. Have confidence in your story and yourself!
As do I. It is our lot in life, Master. Shall we find something to kill to cheer us up?
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Re: the life of .......
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2010, 10:45:42 AM »
nice read is this the one your saying making a vid with me and john in it ?