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X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2012, 04:51:09 AM »
Oh wow! What a suspensefull chapter! Great story telling Jules and the graphics are stunning as usual. The new ships are very cool as well! Long live the Azzmeen's!
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2012, 07:47:23 AM »
wow !  i loved this chapter mate   10/10 :)
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2012, 12:37:48 PM »
Wow, this chapter had everything. Daggone but I like a happy ending. Loved the text when Viraxo found out his loot was gone. Superb Jules. I like the story a good bit, and some of you graphics just have me scratching my head about how you did it. I really like how you use the vertical frame of the forums to continue your comic book style. It just flows so well and I find myself focusing on a new graphic or text area even as I am scrolling down so no momentum is lost. Thank you for sharing this with us. Of course this update is on the fp.
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2012, 01:00:45 PM »
I just think your story lines are awesome. great job
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #5 on: May 14, 2012, 08:32:04 AM »
Jules,

What can I say? Another great chapter! Visually stunning, great story writing, excellent suspense - everything we've grown to expect from your Graphic Fiction. Reading this chapter and looking at the different angles of the ships, you've either got a HUGE library of photos or you have some sort of 360 degree visual library of each ship.

I like the plot twist that Thomas and Galin could be alive.

I must say that I think the line from this chapter that stole the show was the "fart" line!! "If you so much as fart..." I literally "laughed out loud"!! That was great!!

Can't wait to see what's up uncle Anton's sleeve. Keeping us on the edge of our seats! Great work!

Jason
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Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 21 "Payback"
« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2012, 06:10:26 PM »
Awesome work, Jules!! If you were to decide to create your own setting, you'd have to charge for this level of awesomeness!
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