Kesselrunimports,
Really superb, a well written and polished production, I really loved the presentation method. I loved the Padme costume dialogue, adding humour in that way was very clever.
The way you presented the novel reminded me very much of Niktoms work, and it was his style above all others that influenced me to produce my own piece of work. Your story telling was another highlight, it read like a Clone Wars Episode, I could even hear the character's voices in my head. You really have done a wonderful job of creating excitement and suspense and it is the key to a great photonovel.
I really cannot offer any criticism's it is the effort and imagination that is the important thing, especially as I am fully aware of the amount of work involved in producing a photonovel. Everyone who goes to all of the effort to write, build, customise, photograph and edit a photonovel deserves support from the wider community.
As I said before, having a new face in the photonovel forums is very exciting for me and I hope it will inspire more people to try their hand at it.
Well done on a fantastic first chapter and I really hope to see more.
All the best,
Jules
