Just got a chance to read this and man was it worth the wait! I've said it before, but I would be remiss not to once again note how well you capture the feel of the CW in its prime. The characterizations, visuals, and editing are all simply magnificent!
I love Lady Zym (but that may just be the pheromones talking
), what an interesting character! The idea of Balmorra working to undermine the Clone and establish itself as the Republic's military supplier of choice, is so engaging. That feels like such an authentic concept and unique to my knowledge.
Its a crime your series doesn't get more attention, as it is genuinely a professional level production. I cannot express how much I enjoy reading it and feel privileged to be afford such an opportunity. Looking forward to more, as always!