Whe..hel, what do we have here....THAT IS REALLY GREAT! Please don't be intimidated by my stuff, I love what you've done. I especially like the way you have produced a story that moves like a camera following the characters, very unique. I love the shot of the shuttle on the landing platform on Coruscant.
Gosh with the editing skills you have already you could do some really cool stuff, and the idea of the clones now up against Imperial Troops is fantastic.
Thanks for adding your flavour to this forum. Although I know how time consuming making a novel can be, maybe you could start something up again?
Jules