Jt,
You have really amazed me, that is a superb effort, movie photonovels is definately the way to go...
Suggestions:
Try not to use a flash, use lighting instead, you should find your images become more lifelike.
Grammer, mine is bloody aweful, but you my friend need someone to proof read your work (that's what I do) you'll find that the more you write the better your grammar gets, so keep on going.
Really, I over looked all of te above while watching the vid, because the sets and layouts were so beautiful....
You should post this in the Photonovel Forum you will be a most welcome adition to a small band of brothers!