MUCH better, great job getting more coverage.
sten is right, you need to invest in some good quality detail brushes. I try to have at least one for every main color I use. OR try to have one detail brush of each size for each of these categories:
1 special brush for JUST WHITE
1 of each brush for dark paint
1 of each brush for light paint
1 brush of each for black
and a good way to keep up with which brush is for what is to dip the handle end of your brush in the bottle and then let it dry so that you have a good visual for which brush to use on what.