i'm going to post the next bit now since I probably won't be able to update next week with school and everything
anyways heres part 2!
CHAPTER 2:
Denal regained consciousness after bane left with his armour.
'frak, I gotta get out of here'. He muttered. He staggered to his feet and picked up Koho's lifeless body.
'You deserved more than to just die on this ship by the hands of scum like bane.'
Denal knew he had minutes before the frigate was destroyed, as alarms were ringing everywhere.
With nowhere else to go, he made a run for the escape pods.
When he reached the pods steam was bursting out of the ships walls, and the ship was tearing itself apart.
He jumped into one of the last pods and blasted it out of the ship. Seconds later, the ship exploded.
The explosion and it's debris slammed into Denal's pod, cutting his engines and sending him on a crash course to the plannet that was closet to the explosion: Devaron.
Denal fought for control over the violently spinning escape pod, but there was no use.He saw the ground getting closer and closer, but all he could do was brace for impact.
WHAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The pod slammed into a river and started to slide up its bank. eventually it stopped. but there was no sign of life inside it.
Ooooohhhhh, cliffhanger!!! but don't be angry,heres chapter 3 'cause I'm that nice lol
CHAPTER 3:
'This is just my day' Denal grunted as he shoved a piece of metal off him. He looked at the pod's control panel. It was completely fried, no chance of salvaging anything from it.
'There has to be another way to contact the republic'. Denal thought. Then he remembered.
'Ganch'.
Denal and Rex had been close friends with Ganch, Bolla ropal's commander who worked in devaron, and even though Bane surprize attacked them, Ganch was tough, and was probably still out there.
That was his plan: find ganch and get back to where he belonged, the 501st. but there was something he had to do first.
Denal kicked the back of his pod open, and discovered where he actually was, the south devarionian wastelands. A baron place, with no population except veracious wild animals, that could kill you with one hit.
It was a living hellhole.
He had heard stories of pilots who had crashed here, but never stories of them surviving.
But no matter where he was, he needed to bury his friend.
Using the piece of metal that nearly crushed him, he dug a grave for Koho, took off his armor, and put him inside.
'Rest in piece,brother'.
Denal needed Koho's suit to protect himself from whatever was in the wasteland,and It was a way of remembering his fallen friend.
Leaving the pod, the one thing he could call 'shelter', Denal headed out into the wasteland, to find Ganch.
Hours past, and he had no idea where he was going or how long a distance he had covered already. Every step seemed to get harder and harder. it was so hot, he could barely breath.
Soon he was at a crawling pace, and his eyes were getting bleary. This was it: he was going to dye in the wasteland, and there was nothing he could do about it.
Before he fell completely unconscious, he saw a v19 torrent flying down and landing close to him.
For a brief moment a flicker of hope sweeped his mind, but then...he blacked out.
WOW! hope you enjoyed that doubly whamey of awesomeness!!! lol just kidding, post your feedback below. ps: anyone who has read act on instinct should know about Ganch. if you don't, go read it
