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Stark (RIP?)
Hak
Sonny
Blitz
Flicker
Rosk Tak'ka
Sho-Tex Fai
Negi "Nagi" Springfield
Jonathan "Jonny" Wa'lerc
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #45 on: June 15, 2010, 01:00:53 AM »
great read  IN97
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« Reply #46 on: June 15, 2010, 10:31:49 AM »
Gamma Squad Part 16!

Nagi: Guys, I remember a space port town northeast of here. If we go there, we might be able to buy a ship.

Blitz: With what?

Nagi: Well, I have some Republic Credits that I've saved up with me.

Hak: How much? A good ship costs over forty-thousand.

Nagi: Well I have um, sixty-thousand.

Sonny: What!

Flicker: How the heck did you get that much!

Nagi: Well lets just say that I saved up and that being a Republic Agent has high pay.

Stark: Yeah, we'll just keep it at that.

Sonny: Well, let's go! That ship isn't gonna buy itself!

*In the town*

Nagi: We're here! This town is like  Mos Eisly, but on Taanab!

Stark: Looks like there is a guy selling ships over there.

Nagi: I'll go talk to him. *Walks towards the starfighter seller*

Rodian Trader: What do you want?

Nagi: I'm looking for a starfighter.

Rodian Trader: Then you came to the right place! We have all different types, like the Z-95, the PTB-625, oh, and this CloakShape fighter is very, very nice!

Nagi: Yeah. I think I'll take that one. It looks brand new.

Rodian Trader: Ah, you a nice guy! I tell ya what, I'll charge ya 50,000 even though the ship costs 60,000.

Nagi: How kind of you. Here's 50,ooo credits. *Hands the credits to the Rodian Trader*

Rodian Trader: Thank you very much! You're ship will be in hangarbay 73!

Nagi: 73!

*Walks back to Gamma Squad*

Stark: Didja get a ship?

Nagi: Yup. But um, you guys are gonna have to stay down here until we get a gunship down here.

Flicker: What!

Stark: Stop whining, whoever you are!

Flicker: I'm RC-1277, also known as Flicker!

Stark: OK! Now I know.

Blitz: Nagi, we'll be fine!

Sonny: Yeah!

Hak: You can count on us!

Nagi: Thanks guys, for everything. My ship should be ready, so I'll be leaving. See ya soon!

*In Hangarbay 73*

Nagi: Ah! There's my ship.

*Enters the ship*

Nagi: Okay, engines primed, ready for take-off!

*Ship takes off*

Nagi: Alright! Here we go!

*Enters Taanab space*

Nagi: Ah, man! There are five Separatist Cruisers and only three Republic Cruisers! I have to help them and send a gunship down for Gamma Squad!


Separatist Cruisers attack the Godspeed, the Justice, and the Tranquility! Will Nagi and his new CloakShape Fighter save the day? Will he destroy the Separatist Cruisers in time? Will the rest of Gamma Squad on Taanab get bored to death while waiting for Nagi?

Flicker: Yeah.

Blitz: Maybe.

Find out in the next installment of Gamma Squad!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #47 on: June 15, 2010, 12:36:10 PM »
Irish Ninja, another great chapter... I like the choice of Starfighter!

You are obviously enjoying writing this and I am really enjoying reading it, what I like most is that is it in easy to digest chunks. You seem to find me sitting at my desk at just the right time. Work done, cup of tea in hand...I sit back and am thoroughly entertained, thanks Irish Ninja!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #48 on: June 15, 2010, 08:09:59 PM »
Jules, I've heard good compliments about my story, but I've never heard someone thank me for making this story. I should be thanking you for taking the time to read the story. And yes, the starfighter choice was good in my opinion as well. I spent about twenty minutes on wookieepedia trying to find some ships that were used in the Rise of the Empire Era. Once again, thanks.

P.S, You can call me Jack. Being called by my username makes my skin crawl.

Jack
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #49 on: June 15, 2010, 10:20:29 PM »
You've waited about... um, 1,2,3,4... 11 hours for part 17 of Gamma Squad! So I'll just shut up and let ya read!

Nagi: I've gotta get to the Godspeed and make sure everything's alright!

*Flies towards the Godspeed*

Nagi: Crap! I've got Vultures on my tail!

* A turret on the Godspeed shoots at Nagi's CloakShape fighter*

Nagi: *Into Radio* Republic Cruiser Godspeed hold your fire!

Jedi Master Tak'ka: Who is this?

Nagi: This is Republic agent Nagi Springfield!

Tak'ka: Nagi Springfield... oh yes! The young man who I ran into in the halls! What are you doing up here?

Nagi: The mission was a success. Prisoner 627 was Stark!

Tak'ka: Stark!? He died!

Nagi: Apparently not. I'll have Stark explain it to you. But they need a gunship to pick them up!

Tak'ka: We've been trying to send a gunship down to the surface. The ones we send out keep getting shot down!

Nagi: Then we're gonna have to take out those cruisers... do me a favor... send out Thunder Squadron.

Tak'ka: But the leader of that squadron is currently in the medical bay!

Nagi: Then I'll be the leader!

Tak'ka: OK. Good luck!

*Y-wing Squadron Thunder exits the hangar*

Thunder 2: Thunder leader, we're all set!

Nagi: Alright boys! Follow me, attack pattern Theta! Concentrate on the Seppie cruiser to the left!

Thunder Pilots: Yes sir!

*The Y-wings fly towards the cruiser, turrets start shooting at them*

Nagi: Take evasive action!

Thunder 7: We got vultures right behind us!

Nagi: Thunder 4, 9, 11, and 14 come with me! We'll take those vultures down!

*Nagi and the other Y-wings turn around and shoot at the vultures*

Thunder 4: Yeah! Suck it clankers!

*Vultures destroyed*

Nagi: Good work! It looks as though the rest of  Thunder Squadron took down the cruiser! Thunder Squadron, focus on the Cruiser to the right!

*Thunder Squad heads to the cruiser*

Nagi: Wait... wait... wait... Now! All wings, launch torpedoes!

* Y-wings fire torpedoes and the cruiser falls apart*

Thunder 13: Good call, Thunder Leader!

Thunder 8: Hey look! That's Flame Squadron taking down that other cruiser!

Clone on Godspeed: Thunder squadron, we'll take it from here, thanks for the assist!

Nagi: Alright boys! We're headed back home! How many did we lose?

Thunder 2: 4 wings, sir.

Nagi: Alright!

*Laser fire comes out of nowhere*

Thunder 2: Sir, we just lost half of the unit!

Nagi: What?!

Thunder 2: We've lost Thunder 6!

Nagi: Thunder Squadron, get back to the Cruiser, I'll take care of this!

Thunder 2: Alright!

Nagi: Kellic, come out! I know its you.

Kellic: Hello Nagi! I told you that you would see me again!

Nagi: Would you just shut up and fight me?

Kellic: With pleasure. *Opens fire on Nagi's CloakShape fighter*

Nagi: *Flies the CloakShape out of the way*

Kellic: You can run but you can't hide! *Chases Nagi*

Nagi: Come on! Your aim is better than that! Or is my CloakShape faster then your Mankvim-814?

Kellic: I'll make you eat those words, Springfield! *Fires at Nagi*

Nagi: *Dodges* You missed!

Kellic: Grr. *Fires again*

Nagi: *Dodges again* You're to slow!

Kellic: Grrrrrrrrrrrrr. *Fires again*

Nagi: *Dodges again* My goodness! That almost hit me! Oh wait, it wasn't even close.

Kellic: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! I WILL KILL YOU!

Nagi: Really? *Goes at full speed away from Kellic*

Kellic: *Goes full speed after Nagi*

Nagi: *Heading towards Separatist Cruiser* Wait... wait... wait... now! Flashbang! *Fires a flashbang and flies away from the cruiser*

Kellic: Ah! My eyes! *Regains vision* Uhh. *Looks up and sees he is headed right toward the cruiser's bridge* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Crashes into the ship's bridge and destroys the cruiser*

Nagi: Take that! A real Black Baron indeed!

Tak'ka: Nagi? This is Jedi Master Tak'ka. We saw the Separatist Cruiser explode. We're sending down a gunship for Gamma Squad.

Nagi: Thank you, Master Tak'ka. I will be entering your hangar.

Tak'ka: Good. Once you do, come to me, there is something I must tell you.

Nagi: Alright! See ya soon!

Victorious! Not only did Nagi lead Thunder Squadron, he also killed the infamous Black Baron! Jedi Master Rosk Tak'ka needs to tell Nagi something. What could it be? Find out in the next installment of Gamma Squad!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #50 on: June 16, 2010, 07:44:54 AM »



Ahhhhh Gamma Squad!!!

Really excellent chapter Jack...

You've been Hangarbay'd!!!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #51 on: June 16, 2010, 08:59:26 AM »
That is TOO cool, Jules!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #52 on: June 16, 2010, 09:39:50 AM »
YAY! I've been Hangerbay'd AND front paged even though I didn't make a custom, YAY!

Thank you so much Jules! Everything is just amazing! Thank you once again! I love the comic book stlye cover

P.S, $3? What a ripoff! lol

Jack
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« Reply #53 on: June 16, 2010, 09:52:33 AM »
now that IS an honour!
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« Reply #54 on: June 16, 2010, 09:58:51 AM »
Yes Jay, it is quite an honor!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #55 on: June 16, 2010, 11:06:55 AM »
Part 17!

Nagi: Engineer, would you repair the tail fin of my ship here? It got a bit roughed up on those attack runs.

Clone Engineer: Well, CloakShapes weren't really made for space combat. I'll fix her right up!

Nagi: Thank you. *Starts to walk away*

Clone Engineer: Does she have a name?

Nagi: I'm sorry?

Clone Engineer: Every good ship needs a name. Ya know, like General Anakin Skywalker's ship, Twilight.

Nagi: Hmmm, How 'bout Stormcloud?

Clone Engineer: Hm. I like it. Well then, I'll fix Stormcloud right up!

Nagi: Thanks! *Walks away*

Sonny: Hey Nagi!

Nagi: *Turns around* Sonny! Hak! Blitz! Flicker! Stark!

Hak: We were told about you leading Thunder Squadron and defeating the Black Baron!

Blitz: We even saw some Seppie cruisers explode!

Flicker: It was a very good fireworks show, if I say so myself.

Stark: Well done Negi! I mean, Nagi!

Nagi: Thanks! But I can't really talk now. Master Tak'ka needs me.

Stark: Then, we'll see ya later?

Nagi: Yeah. Bye!

*Walks to Master Tak'ka's quarters*

Nagi: Master Tak'ka.

Tak'ka: Ah, Nagi! Why are you here again?

Nagi: You were to tell me something.

Tak'ka: Yes, that's it. It seems I am becoming forgetfull in my old age. Where did you get that lightsaber?

Nagi: I built it on Ilum.

Tak'ka: Who took you there?

Nagi: A merchant who let me go with him to Coruscant so I could be a Republic Agent. Something was wrong with the engine, so he had to land his freighter and repair it. The merchant said that we'd be staying here a while, so he sent me to go find shelter. I found a cave filled with many crystals of all different colors: blue, green, orange, yellow, purple all those. The merchant came and saw the cave and then he left to get some metal. When he came back, he gave me the metal and told me to put a crystal inside of it. I took the metal apart, put the crystal in a proper compartment, then pieced it together. When I did, the saber activated. It's green glow lit up the cave.

Tak'ka: Well, how did you put it together? With you're magic, Negi?

Nagi: Yes.. wait, what?

Tak'ka: I know that you are ten, Negi. I also know you're a mage.

Nagi: *Snaps his fingers and transforms into his ten year old self* Seems as though I'm found out. Please don't let my secret out.

Tak'ka: I don't plan to. But Negi, you didn't put the lightsaber together with your magic.

Negi: What do you mean?

Tak'ka: Negi, you put the saber together with the Force.

Negi: What!?

Tak'ka: Believe it or not, you are Force sensitive. Your parents were Jedi. They didn't want you to be a Jedi; they wanted you to live a normal life. So, they let your cousin Nekane raise you. You were still a baby at the time, so when you learned to talk, she said she was your sister. As I said before, you are Force sensitive.

Negi: But...but, my magic?

Tak'ka: Was powered by the Force. You are not a mage, Negi. You only thought you were. You were really using special abilities activated through the Force. Powers like these have not been mastered since the time when Revan became a lord of the Sith.

Negi: But, I'm to old. I can't train to be a Jedi.

Tak'ka: True, but that doesn't mean we can't use you for something. You see, you've already achieved such skill with the Force and a lightsaber without Jedi training. For example, you defeated General Grievous! Many skilled Jedi have fallen in duels with him. Few were even lucky to get away. Very few actually defeated him, but he always seems to get away. You see, you can't train to be a Jedi, because you already are one.

Negi: What?

Tak'ka: Think about it. You're patient, kind, not easy to anger, wise, - a Jedi has these traits. It was Master Yoda who said,"A Jedi uses the Force for knowledge and defense, never for attack." You've used the Force for knowledge by studying these so called "spells" when you were really studying Force powers that no one has seen in nearly three thousand years. You also used the Force for defense when you built a lightsaber to protect yourself and others.

Negi: You're right. But, no one will accept me as a Jedi.

Tak'ka: Master Yoda has. Obviously, someone has been watching you and reporting back to the Jedi Council. They said that they would be honored if you would join them.

Negi: Master Tak'ka, I am deeply honored, but, my place is with Gamma Squad.

Tak'ka: The members of the Council also said you can serve with Gamma Squad.

Negi: Really! Then yes! I accept!


Who would've thought it!? Nagi, or I should say Negi, finds out he is Force sensitive! The Jedi have even accepted him into their ranks! What new adventures will he embark on with Gamma Squad? Find out by reading GAMMA SQUAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #56 on: June 16, 2010, 10:11:16 PM »
Part 18 of Gamma Squad!


Nagi: Alright, assault craft on board, troops assembled, ready for drop!

Captain: Roger that! Hunter one-six this is Zulu six-one-niner ready for drop! Kryo, bring up boarding ramp!

Kryo: Roger, bringing up boarding ramp!

Captain: Yeller, prep engines!

Yeller: Copy that, prepping engines!

Captain: Hunter one-six, this is Zulu six-one-niner, release the coupling on my mark. 5...4...3...2...1... mark!

*Republic Heavy Assault Multi Altitude Transports, or HAMAAT's, drop from the Republic Cruisers, carrying troops and armor  to the surface of the ice planet Toola*

Captain: Gentlemen, we may be experiencing some turbulance once we enter the planet, so hold on tight!

*Ships enter the system*

Yeller: Captain, the snowstorm is strong. We have at least 9 minutes to unload the soldiers, the AT-TE's, and the AT-AP's.

Captain: That's plenty of time!

Yeller: If you say so! Beginning landing cycle!

Kryo: Distance to ground, 170 meters!

Mare: Initiating landing gear!

*HAMAAT's land*

Kryo: OK! Safe landing!

Captain: Good. Nav, get a sit rep on the surrounding area.

Nav: Yes sir.

Captain: Kryo, keep the engines running I want dustoff in 4 minutes.

Kryo: You got it!

Nav: With our special "Droid Detector" I'll see if any of our clanker friends showed up. Hm. Perimeter clear up to 500 meters.

Captain: Good. Get some numbers for the armor to Mare's comp now!

Nav: Sending numbers!

Mare: OK. AT-TE 3, go 213.

AT-TE 3: Copy that, going 213! *Leaves drop off zone*

Mare: AT-TE 7, go to 361.

AT-TE 7: Copy, going 361! *Leaves drop off zone*

Mare: AT-TE 1, go to 323.

AT-TE 1: Copy, going 323. *Leaves drop off zone*

Mare: AT-TE 9, go 145.

AT-TE 9: Roger, going 145. *Leaves drop off zone*

Mare: Recon team Beta, go 422!

Recon team Beta commander: Copy that, going 422! *Leaves drop off zone*

Mare: That's all, sir!

Captain: OK. Kryo get us out of here!

Kryo: Got it! *HAMAAT heads back to Republic Cruiser*

Meanwhile...

Sonny: Someone tell me why we're with the 12th Cold Assault Corps again?

Blitz: They needed all the help they can get.

Nagi: Cut the chatter, boys. OK. The Separatists have taken this planet. Their fleet is gone, but the ground forces are as powerful as ever. We're outnumbered, but we have armor and swift tactics. Now, the droids have set up bases all around this sector, and its our job to take them down. Got it?

All troops: Yes sir!

Nagi: Good. We get dropped off in 30 minutes, so get your weapons, ammo, anything that you'll need ready.

30 minutes later...

AT-TE 9 Pilot: This is the drop off point!  All troops, prepare for drop off.

*Back of the AT-TE opens and the troops come out*

Nagi: Alright men, let's go. The first base is northeast.

*Soldiers move forward with Nagi*

Sonny: Ya know, these snow suits are pretty comfortable!

Flicker: Really? I feel like all stiff, like a protocol droid.

Stark: Be quiet will ya? You never know if a Clanker patrol is watching us now.

Hak: Sir, my power sign detector dosen't show any signals...wait a minute... I'm counting 20... no... I'm counting at least 45 signals headed right towards us!

Nagi: Commander!

Snowtrooper Commander: Yes?

Nagi: I need some binoculars.

Snowtrooper Commander: Here you go. *Hands Nagi binoculars*

Nagi: *Looks in binoculars* Ahh, yeah. I see a lot of droids moving in on our position. It looks as though they don't know we're here... get behind those snowbanks, move! *All troops get behind snowbanks* The droids are moving in. On my mark, you all fire at the droids. Ready? 3...2...1... mark!

*Snowtroopers fire at the droids*

Droid Commander: Wha?! We're under attack!

Nagi: Keep firing! Don't let up!

*After a few more minutes the droid patrol is flatlined*

Nagi: Good work men! Now let's find that base...

Hak: Sir. I found it.

Nagi: Where?

Hak: To the northeast.

Nagi: *Looks through binoculars* Yeah. There it is. The enterance is heavily defended. Stark.

Stark: Yes sir?

Nagi: You think Gamma Squad can do a little 'breaking and entering mission' while we distract the droid guards out here?

Stark: You don't even have to ask, sir. We'll have one wrecked base in no time.

Nagi: Good. Go ahead.

Stark: Yes sir. Gamma Squad, move out!

Gamma Squad makes a move to destroy the Separatist base while Nagi and the 12th Cold Assault Corps. distract the droid forces! Will Gamma Squad succeed in there mission?

Blitz: Don't we always?

Sonny: I mean, we've been successful in all our past missions.

Sonny and Blitz do have a point there. Anyways, log in next time for Gamma Squad!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #57 on: June 18, 2010, 09:35:26 AM »
Hello, yarders! Part 19 should be up tomorrow because I'm a bit tired from seeing Star Wars: In Concert. In my opinion it was absolutely amazing, I've never seen anything like it before. If any of you guys have seen Star Wars: In Concert, you might remember the part when Anthony Daniels, AKA C-3P0, introduced the piece of music when the Rebels would destroy the Empire once and forever. Well, after he said that, my Uncle Geoff yelled out, "That's right!" and everyone in the building heard him and they were all laughing. So, yeah it was very fun.

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Gamma Squad: Part 19!
« Reply #58 on: June 19, 2010, 09:16:57 AM »
Part 19! This may be a bit cut short because me and my family are headed to the bay area for a trip. So, yeah.

Stark: *Jumps down from an air vent* OK. It's clear, come on down.

Hak: *Jumps down from the air vent* Well, that was fun.

Sonny: *Jumps down from air vent* My plans always work.

Blitz: *Jumps down from air vent* Sorry, but I don't agree.

Flicker: *Falls out of air vent* Ow! *Gets up* I'm OK.

Stark: We didn't really ask. Anyways, follow me.

*Gamma Squad walks down the hallway and come up to a command center*

Stark: OK, squad. On my go, we take out these clankers. Ready?

All: Ready.

Stark: OK...go! *Gets out of cover and fires at the droids*

Droid Commander: Wha! Get to cover! *He and a Droid Sergeant take cover* How did they get in?

Droid Sergeant: How the heck am I supposed to know?

Droid Commander: Oh, well. Keep firing at the intruders!

Blitz: Now there shooting back. This is gonna be fun! *Shoots a droid's head with his sniper rifle*

Stark: *Takes out a grenade* Heh, so long, clankers! *Throws grenade*

Super Battle Droid: Oh, no. *Grenade explodes*

Stark: Yes!

Flicker: *Shoots and kills a droid* I got one!

Sonny: *Fires anti armor attachment* I got three!

Hak: EMP! *Throws EMP grenade*

Droid: *Grenade sets off* Ahhh... *Shuts down*

Stark: OK. Hak, check these holo maps for the location of any other bases and then mark them on your datapad map.

Hak: Yes sir.

Stark: Sonny, see if you can find anything that you can set charges on. We need to wreck this base.

Sonny: Got it, sir!

Stark: Blitz, Flicker, you guys make sure no droids that I don't see on the security cameras make it through to this command center.

Blitz & Flicker: Yes sir!

Hak: OK, let's see here. Base 2, latitude 73, longitude 34. Base 3, latitude 86, longitude 21. Base 4...*Continues recording base locations*

Meanwhile...

Sonny: *Humming Vode An* Huh, what's this? *Walks up to sign* Liquid Tibanna storage. Hmmm, I'll set charges there! *Walks into Tibanna storage* OK, just set some here, another here, oh a few more here... that should do it! *Prepares to walk back to the command center*

Droid: Freeze!

Sonny: No, you freeze!

Droid: *Sees droidekas roll up* Haha!

Sonny: *Sets Anti Armor attachment* Haha! *Fires at the droids and destroys them*

Droid over loudspeaker: Attention all units! We have intruders that are stationed in the command center! Nearby squads are ordered to attack the intruders! 

Sonny: *Gets back to the command center* Guys, I'm sorry! It's my fault the alarm went off, you see I fired an anti armor-

Blitz: It wasn't your fault. It was mine. I let a droid get away and he reported us.

Sonny: Oh.

Stark: Well, we gotta get out of here! Clankers will be coming in on all sides of us!

Sonny: The air vents! *Stands on a table and climbs inside of an air vent*

Stark: Alright then. Squad, follow Sonny into the air vents, double time!

*Squad enters the air vents and then put the cover back on*

Droid: We've got you now! *Runs into the command center* Hey! There's no one here!

Meanwhile...

*Gamma Squad is outside of the base*

Sonny: Guys, get clear of the base! *Picks up comlink* Nagi! This is Sonny! Move the troops away from the base!

Nagi: Copy that! All units fall back! *Nagi and his unit fall back*

Sonny: *Gets away from base* Alright! Fire in the hole! *About to press down on detonation device*

Meanwhile...

Droid: I've got the worse job in the entire droid army: Checking the Tibanna storage. It's highly explosive, so you have to be careful with it. *Walks into Tibanna storage and sees the charges on the Tibanna tanks* Oh, no.

Meanwhile...

Sonny: Fire in the hole! *Presses detonation device*

*The base explodes, and the range was far enough to take out the droid defences, the base was completely disintegrated*

Blitz: Sonny, what did you set the charges on?

Sonny: Liquid Tibanna tanks.

Hak: And how many charges did you set?

Sonny: Uhh, fifteen, maybe sixteen.

Stark: Oh, well it did the job. Let's get back to Nagi.

*Gamma squad walks back to Nagi*

Hak: Sir, I have the coordinates to the other bases. All I have to do is patch them through to the Republic Cruisers and they can take them out with an orbital strike. Do I have your permission to do so?

Nagi: Permission granted. Also tell them to send the HAMAAT's back down to pick us up.

Hak: Yes sir. *Into radio* Godspeed, Godspeed, this is Hak! We need an orbital strike on these coordinates: latitude 73, longitude 34.

Clone on Godspeed: Roger that, firing on those coordinates!

Hak: Tranquility, fire on latitude 86, longitude 21.

Clone on Tranquility: Copy that!

Hak: Justice, fire on latitude 81, longitude 25.

Clone on Justice: Copy that! Firing for affect!

Hak: Godspeed, send down the HAMAAT's, we need a pick up.

Clone on Godspeed: Sending them down!

A victory on Toola! Thanks to Gamma Squad and the Guns of the Republic Cruisers, the Separatist bases on Toola  have been destroyed! Tune in next time for Gamma Squad, part 20!
As do I. It is our lot in life, Master. Shall we find something to kill to cheer us up?
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #59 on: June 19, 2010, 11:20:55 AM »
IN97, please slow down....I don't want to miss anything but everytime I check back you've posted 2 more chapters....you might also be losing readers by adding stuff too fast....

Not a criticism, it's just I'm really enjoying this!