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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #15 on: May 15, 2010, 05:18:31 PM »
awesome


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Part 6 Light and Darkness
« Reply #16 on: May 15, 2010, 05:52:05 PM »
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Darth Vader watches as the shards of the helmet fall to the ground.

Darth Magnon: Poor commander Fi never stood a chance.

 Lord Vader: What did you do to him.

Darth Magnon smiles.

Darth Magnon: i squeeze the life out of him. Isn't that right Commander Fi.

Another figure comes from the darkness. The armor may be batter but Darth Vader can sill make out the blue paint of Commander Fi.

Commander Fi: I tried my lord.

And with that Commander Fi fell over dead.

Darth Magnon:  Shame he wa-

Commander Dracks had witness the whole thing from a far. This was his time to dye. He took out his blaster and fired.

Commander Dracks: Run Lord Vader I can only give so much time.

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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #17 on: May 15, 2010, 05:57:50 PM »
sweet!!!

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All the chapters of Light and Darkness
« Reply #18 on: May 15, 2010, 06:05:55 PM »
                                          Intro
                                                                                              The planet Drakutar moments before order 66.
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Emperor Palpatine: Commander Fi the time has come execute order 66.

Commander Fi: It will be my lord.

Commander Fi pulls out his comlink.

Commander Fi: Get me three firestorm troopers! Order 66 has been issued!

large explosions.

Jedi Master Kro-Magn: Get me medic.

Commander Fi and his firestorm troopers rush to  the jedi master.

Master Kro-Magn: Don't just stand there get me a medic.

Commander Fi pulls out his blaster.

Master Kro-Magn: What are you doing.

the firestorm troopers take aim.

Commander Fi: My orders.

the firestorm troopers  fire causing a slow and painful death.
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                                                                                                     Two days later
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Lord Vader: Have you found the padawan yet commander. I am growing impatience.

Commander Fi: no we have not lord Vader. My best men are on the case.

lord Vader: I do not except failure commander.

Commander Fi: I will no-

 Lord Vader's  red saber is stabbed into Commander Fis chest.

Lord Vader: you will not be so lucky next time.

Darth Vader force pushes Commander Fi into a group of medics.

Lord Vader: put him in a bacta tank. Bring me  Commander Drachs immediately.

Clone trooper: he is on his way my lord.

Commander Dracks rushes into Darth Vaders tent.

Commander Dracks: you summoned me my lord.

Lord Vader: I assume you have heard about Commander Fi. he was a disappointment to me I hope you will not be the same.

Commander Dracks: Yes sir.

Lord Vader: I will join you in the hunt. This padawan may be formidable opponent.

commander Dracks: Yes sir.
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 3 days later
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An imperial drop shuttle glides right above the trees of the planet Drakutar.

Lord Vader: we are nearing the drop site commander are you ready to launch.

Commander Dracks: I am my lord.

A large explosion knocks both me off balance.

Clone pilot: We're hit. i can't get this ship to go-

Another explosion kills the pilot.

Lord Vader: Time to drop Commander.

Darth Vader and Commander Dracks jump from the burning vessel and into the forest below.

Commander Dracks: What was that sir.

Darth Vader levitates a rock.

Lord Vader: That was the power of a strong force user.
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 2 hour later
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Lord Vader: We are getting close. I feel the dark side. Anger, hate  an-  

A tree rips itself  from the ground!

Commander Dracks: Look out!

Darth Vader lifts a hand and the tree shatters.

Lord Vader: We are nearing the force user.  Failure could me death for us both.

Twin spears fly towards the armored men. Darth Vader is quick to shatters them.

Lord Vader: I can feel the hate. It fills the air.

A yellow lighsaber glows bright. Both men are surprised to see a child no older than ten holding the end of the saber.

Commander Dracks: Whats you name kid.

Lord Vader: careful commander this child may-

Twenty spears shoot from the darkness. Each one is aim for the Commander. Not even lord Vader could stop them all. three of them hit Dracks in the leg.

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                                     moment later
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Lord Vader: what is your name?

Dark force user: Darth Magnon. You will soon fear that name.

Lord Vader: Has the humble padawan fallen so far. I thought jedi resisted the dark side.

Darth Magnon: Only the weak choose the light. The strong follow the dark path.

Darth Vader  ignites his red saber.

Darth Magnon: So be it Vader.

Darth Vader slashes the youth in two. He turns to leave.

Darth Magnon: Hello Vader.

Darth Vader turns to see Darth Megnon standing there with out a scratch.

Darth Megnon: You thought it would be that easy. Shame-

Darth Magnon reaches into the darkness and pulls out a clone helmet!

Darth Magnon: i was hoping for a better toy.

The helmet shatters.
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       moments later
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Darth Vader watches as the shards of the helmet fall to the ground.

Darth Magnon: Poor commander Fi never stood a chance.

 Lord Vader: What did you do to him.

Darth Magnon smiles.

Darth Magnon: i squeeze the life out of him. Isn't that right Commander Fi.

Another figure comes from the darkness. The armor may be batter but Darth Vader can still make out the blue paint of Commander Fi.

Commander Fi: I tried my lord.

And with that Commander Fi fell over dead.

Darth Magnon:  Shame he wa-

Commander Dracks had witness the whole thing from a far. This was his time to dye. He took out his blaster and fired.

Commander Dracks: Run Lord Vader I can only give so much time.

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that is the part 1 though 6 of light and darkness.
Long live Darth Magnon!
 

                                                                                                                                
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #19 on: May 15, 2010, 06:15:43 PM »
what an explosion of creativity we have on the yards at the moment!
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part 7 of Light and Darkness
« Reply #20 on: May 15, 2010, 06:45:39 PM »
                                                                                                                            three days later
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Darth Magnon stands over the body of Commander Dracks.

Darth Magnon: its time for the true Sith to rule again.

Dark  energy flows from the finger tip of Darth Magnon.

Darth Magnon:( My body is weak but my soul is strong. May my soul leave my body to enter the next!)

Darth magnon soul leaves his body and enters Commander Dracks. His old body disappears  

Darth Magnon: This is more like it.

Darth Magnon yanks the wooden spears from his leg.

Darth Magnon picks up his lightsaber.

This is the beginning of the true Sith.

Darth Magnon smiled.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #21 on: May 15, 2010, 06:55:33 PM »
nice!! this is a great read PD, keep em coming... i like this Magnon dude..

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Part 8 Light and Darkness
« Reply #22 on: May 15, 2010, 07:18:43 PM »
                                                                                                                 Four days later
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Four days of hiking had allow Darth Magnon to escape his prison. He was now on the outskirts of an imperial city.  

Clone trooper: sir can I see your I.D.

Darth Magnon: 

A large blast of dark energies engulfed the clone trooper. A flash and he was gone.

Darth Magnon: I can feel your pain. Your suffering makes me strong.

Darth Magnon continued on his way.

He walk in to the nearest bar.

Time to meet the locals.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #23 on: May 16, 2010, 06:12:52 AM »
ohhhhhh ahhhhhh

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part 9 Light and Darkness
« Reply #24 on: May 16, 2010, 06:36:39 AM »
                                                                                                            moments later
                                                                                                                                            inside the bar.
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Bartender: Get out we don't  serve your kind here.

Darth Magnon lifts a hand and chokes the bartender. Bartender falls on the ground gasping for air. 

Darth Magnon: Can a normal clone do this.   

Darth Magnon  force pushes the bartender on to the wall.
 

Darth Magnon: Are there any swoop gangs here.

Bartender: No the-

Darth Magnon pushes harder.

Bartender: There it is right below us. I'll take you please don't hurt me.

Darth Magnon: Weak but useful.

Darth Magnon turns to see a crowed of people staring at him. Darth Magnon Unleashes a storm of force lightning killing them all.

Darth Magnon: the Same will happen to you if you a lying.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #25 on: May 16, 2010, 06:43:48 AM »
Cool!
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part 10 Light and Darkness
« Reply #26 on: May 16, 2010, 01:14:29 PM »
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Darth Magnon: Are you ready.

Bartender nods.

the bartender walks to a table only to pull out a blaster pistol.

Bartender: die Sith scum.  

Dark energy flows around the dark lord.

Darth Magnon: I should of known.

A blast of Sith magic kills the bartender.

Darth Magnon: so die all traitors.

Darth Magnon turns to leave his kama swaying in the breeze.

This was not over not by a long shot.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #27 on: May 16, 2010, 01:25:42 PM »
theres some superb stories doing the rounds at the mo
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #28 on: May 16, 2010, 01:29:43 PM »
wow interesting

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part 11 Light and Darkness
« Reply #29 on: May 16, 2010, 02:02:33 PM »
                                                                                                              moments later
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Darth Magnon walked the streets of the imperial city.

Beggar: Got a cred it for a poor old man.

Darth Magnon: No i don't.

beggar: Is that so Megnon. No spare credit for your old apprentice.

Darth Magnon is startle and takes a few steps back.

Darth Magnon: Malton how did you survive.

Darth Malton: Master Bane has more than a few tricks up his shelves.

Darth Magnon draws his saber. Darth Malton pulls a small vile from the folds of his cloak.

Darth Malton: We will be waiting Magnon. You can't hide from us.

Darth Malton smashes the vial. Smoke appears and shrouds Darth Malton.

When it did clear Darth Malton was gone!
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