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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #30 on: May 16, 2010, 02:19:07 PM »
wow cool!!
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Part 12 Light and Darkness
« Reply #31 on: May 16, 2010, 04:09:45 PM »
                                                                                                                moments later
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Darth Magnon was in a daze as he walk through the streets of the imperail city

Darth Magnon: How did they find me.

Darth Magnon notices a Squad of Firestorm troopers walking towards him.

Firestorm Trooper: Sir we have orders to arrest you. Resistance will resulted in more punishment.

Darth Magnon ignites his red lightsaber.

Darth Magnon: I've lived more than a thousand years. I will not die now.

The Firestorm troopers take aim.

Darth Magnon: So be it.

Darth Magnon lifts his hand. Dark energy forms a pool under the men.

Darth Magnon: tell me how it is in the Dark Abyss.

The Firestorm troopers fell in to the hole screaming.

Darth Magnon leans into the hole.

Darth Magnon: Is this how are great Imperial army acts under pressure. I expected better from the men who wipe out the jedi.

Darth Magnon closes his hand and the hole disappears.

Maybe he should of jumped into the hole with the men. It may have been a kinder fate than what he had in sort.

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Part 13 Light and Darkness
« Reply #32 on: May 17, 2010, 02:21:53 PM »
                                                                                                            four hours later
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Darth Malton: Master Bane I have grave news. Magnon is back and he appears to have a clone officer under his control.

Darth Bane: I am surprised he did not escape sooner.

Lord Bane turns a dark alter.

Darth Bane: No matter we shall soon deal with him for good.

Darth Malton: How we can not imprison him in a tree as we did before.

Darth Bane: Simply.

Lord Bane sends force lighting onto the alter.

Darth Bane: We shall send his soul to the depths of the thought tome.

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                                                                                                                        two hours later
                                                                                                                       on the street
Darth Magnon: I wonder if its still here.

He presses his hand on a brick on a ramshackle house.

Darth Magnon: ( I open the gates of darkness.)

The crumples inwards to reveal stone stairs leading down.

Darth Magnon walks down into the darkness.
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                                                                                                                         Further inside The Tree of the Sith
Darth Malton: He is coming master.

Darth Bane: Go To the training field I will join you shortly.

Darth Malton runs into the darkness.

Darth Bane: He will be here shortly.
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Part 13 Light and Darkness
« Reply #33 on: May 18, 2010, 02:15:47 PM »
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Darth Magnon: Hello Bane. Its been a long time hasn't it.

Darth Bane: Not long I'm afraid.

Darth Bane ignites his lightsaber.

Darth Magnon draws his own lightsaber.

Darth Magnon: Going back to the old ways are you?

Darth Bane: No you will duel your apprentice. The winner will sit beside.

Darth Magnon: So be it.
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Darth Bane: You both know the rules. The winner shall live and the loser shall be banished to the depths of the thought tome.

Both Sith lords ignites their lightsabers.

Darth Bane: Begin.    

  

  
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #34 on: May 18, 2010, 04:03:22 PM »
excellent !
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #35 on: May 18, 2010, 04:14:15 PM »
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #36 on: May 18, 2010, 05:29:20 PM »
Cool
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Part 14 Light and Darkness
« Reply #37 on: May 19, 2010, 03:51:07 PM »
                                                                                                                  on the training field
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Both men ignite their lightsabers.

Darth Malton: Is the master letting the apprentice go first.

Darth Malton sends a ball of dark energy to the sky.

Darth Magnon: Don't get cocky.

Darth Magnon charges at his apprentice.

Darth Malton: I have had hundreds of years with your master.

A rancor fell from the ceiling.

Darth Magnon: Impossible.

Darth Malton jumps on the rancor.

Darth Malton: Darth Bane taught me everything he knows.

The rancor slashes Darth Magnon across the chest. Everything goes black.
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Darth Magnon finds himself on  the rubble of a house.

Darth Magnon: Where am I.

Little Boy: Sir have you seen my father.

A man steps from the smoke Darth Magnon realizes its Darth Bane

Darth Bane: No I'm afraid I haven't.

Father's voice: Cade, Cade where are you.

Cade: Daddy is that you.

A man runs from behind a shattered wall.

Father: Cade im so glad I-

Darth Bane sends a force storm over the man. He is incinerated.

Darth Magnon soon realized that the man was his father. His master killed his father.  

The scene fades away.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #38 on: May 19, 2010, 04:07:22 PM »
awesome mate!
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #39 on: May 19, 2010, 04:09:40 PM »
thank you. the story is not over yet.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #40 on: May 19, 2010, 05:31:24 PM »
Awesome!
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Chapter 2 Light and Darkness
« Reply #41 on: May 20, 2010, 03:55:17 PM »
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Darth Malton: The deed is done my master. Darth Magnon will never leave his prison.

Darth Bane walks to the dark alter.

Darth Bane: Let's make sure.

Darth Bane draws his lightsaber from his belt.

Darth Bane: All traitors die.

His lightsaber cuts the alter in half. Forever sealing Darth Magnon inside.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #42 on: May 25, 2010, 12:12:32 PM »
nice

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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #43 on: May 31, 2010, 05:25:54 AM »
Quote from: MandaloriansRule1 on May 25, 2010, 09:00:34 AM
awesome!

Thanks for all the support on this one.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #44 on: May 31, 2010, 10:41:24 AM »
Firestormtrooper  ;D ;D ;D

great novel btw
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