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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #15 on: June 02, 2010, 04:09:10 PM »
cool!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #16 on: June 02, 2010, 06:15:48 PM »
A very interesting concept in terms of style, and I like the timefame.

Keep up the great work!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #17 on: June 05, 2010, 08:33:48 AM »
nice
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Part 8 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #18 on: June 05, 2010, 12:38:11 PM »
                                                                                                                        Inside the main tent.
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Ordo: I still want to know how you escape the imperial prison.  

Jedi: Have you not notice the red soil. This place was once a wastes dump. Until the jedi came to cleans this place. Thousand of droids remain under this spot.

Ordo You still haven't answered my question. How did you escape.

The jedi punches the ground. four super battle droids clime out of the soil.

Jedi: Do you under stand now. All the droids are help together by my will. Without me the droids would fall apart.

Salvo: My leg would explode to.

Jax: You mentioned something called the "never ending Darkness". What is that.

Jedi: That would be the Sith that inhabit this planet. In a weeks time this place will be destroyed. I and my forest are leaving this place forever.

Kad (to Ordo): I think this guy is a few bolts short of a droid.

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #19 on: June 05, 2010, 05:46:20 PM »
cool!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #20 on: June 06, 2010, 12:50:46 AM »
nice liking this story!

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Part 9 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #21 on: June 07, 2010, 02:53:16 PM »
                                                                                                                        Inside the Clone trooper tent
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Salvo: I just heard back from the jedi. Apparently he is going to blow up the planet.

The member of Shadow Squadron laugh until the realize that Salvo is dead serious.

Ordo: I told he was nuts.

Jax: I thought he was going to kept his forest alive.

Salvo: He is making the forest a mobile space ship. His droids are setting the charges as we speak. The rest of the planet will lose the atmosphere and all living     thing will die.

Kad: This is plain crazy.

Salvo: He wont do it i f we can eliminate the Dark Jedi here.

Ordo: That won't be hard at all.

Kad: even with the Jedi we don't get the easy jobs.

Jax: Better eat a big breakfast tomorrow boys. We'll have a big day ahead of us.

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #22 on: June 08, 2010, 07:57:56 AM »
cool,,,,,more please.......

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Part 10 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #23 on: June 08, 2010, 03:03:24 PM »
                                                                                                  
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Jedi: The force walkers will take you to the out side of the forest. they will fall apart then. May the force be with you.

Kad: I hope these rust buckets work.

Four exploitations rip apart the landscape behind them.
 
Madalorain: we got four star destoyers on the north side.

Ordo: does anything go as planed.

Jax pulls his Dc-17 pistol from his belt.

Clone trooper: We have stormies in bound in the south.

Jedi: I'm sending the droids to counter attack the Stormtroopers.

Salvo: I'll take shadow squadron back to protect the main tent area.

The squadron moves towards the main tent area.

Jax: Incoming.

Seven LAATs land around the squadron.

Pilot: Surrender or face Lord Vader.

Ordo: Face my blaster rifle.

Ordo lets out a volley of blaster bolts on the pilots of the LAATs.

All most all of them explode.
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #24 on: June 08, 2010, 03:17:29 PM »
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Part 11 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #25 on: June 12, 2010, 07:16:32 AM »
                          
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Ordo: "More stormies coming in hot!"

Ordo swings around to shoot a stromtrooper in the eye!

Mandalorian: "I need a medic!"

One medic trooper trys to help the mandalorain but is shot before he can make it.

Kad: "We need more droids or we're toast!"

More LAATs come in to drop of more stormtroopers!

Jax: "Those gunships have snipers on them!"

Seven Scrap Guard come into the battle field.

Salvo: "Any chance we can get our men into those ship!"

*Explosion*

Kad: That was one of there AT-TEs maybe we can use the metal to make a barricade"!

Jax: "Look out!" (pushing Salvo out of the way of a sniper shot)

Ordo: "We need to get those LAATs out of the sky or else we're dead!"

Four jump trooper land around them!

Jump Trooper: "Hands up!"

Kad: "Never!" (cuts off the heads of the Jump Troopers)

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #26 on: June 12, 2010, 07:21:35 AM »
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #27 on: June 12, 2010, 09:03:42 AM »
nice
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #28 on: June 12, 2010, 05:53:30 PM »
cool!

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Part 12 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #29 on: June 17, 2010, 06:42:40 AM »
                                                                            One Week Later
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                                                                                   Inside the Main Fort
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Jax runs to a metal shelter!

Jax: "Four more Stormtrooper have been seen on our border."

Salvo rubs his temples .

Salvo: "Is the LAAT ready yet?"

Kad runs in. Ash covers his face and armor!

Kad: "Our perimiter has been breach!"

*Four explodtions*

Salvo puts on his new mandalorain helmet.

Salvo: "Any sign of those AT-ATs?"

Ordo rushes in.

Ordo: "We are losing men out there!"

Kad puts on his new helmet.

Kad:" Vode an."
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                                                                          On the front line

Clone Trooper: "Incoming!"

A V-Wing bombs on the fort!

A mandalorain rushes to help!

Stormtrooper: "Stop in the name of the Empire!"

 Mandalorain (torching the stromtrooper): "Can it metal face!"

The mandalorain is shot is shot by a Stormtrooper!

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                                                                                        Inside the Main Shelter

Jax'es image flickers as he spoke.

Jax: "We need help! Our men can't take much more!"

The holo image flickers as a explodtion rips though the speakers!

Salvo: "What was that!"

Jax: "Those AT-ATs are riping us apart!"

The holo image flickers away!

Salvo turns to a clone trooper.

Salvo: "Are the LAATs ready yet?"

Clone Trooper: "They are, sir."

Salvo: "Send them to Jax'es sector."    

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Kad rushes to Jax!

Kad: "We're being hammered out there!"  

A LAAT flys right past them shooting at the AT-ATs.

Jax: "Tell every one  to charge on my command!"

Kad: 'Yes sir."

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                                                                                                     Inside the Star Destoyer Excel   

Storm Commander: "Our spy says they now have LAATs under there command."

A Grand Moff steps towards the commander.

Grand Moff: "Tell our spy to kill Salvo."

Storm Commander: "It will be done."
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                                                                                                                                           Inside the Main Shelter

The Storm commander image flicker.

Storm Commander: "You have orders to kill Salvo."

Ordo: "It will be done commander."

The holo image turns off.

Ordo: "Time to kill the commander."  
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