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Offline Irish Ninja 97

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #30 on: June 17, 2010, 09:14:29 AM »
*Gasp* A twist! Ordo is a traitor! Good read PD!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #31 on: June 17, 2010, 10:12:43 AM »
nice read man!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #32 on: June 17, 2010, 01:03:22 PM »
why ordo he was my favorite!
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Part 13 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #33 on: June 18, 2010, 02:31:57 PM »
                                                                                   Inside the Main Shelter
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Ordo walks into Salvo personal chambers.

Ordo: "Salvo, I need to talk to you."

Salvo hears the hiss of a knife being drawn from its sheath!

Salvo: "When did you betray us to the Empire Ordo?"

Ordo lunges at Salvo knife in hand slashing where Salvo once stood.

Ordo: (Slashing again) "I always have been a spy."

Salvo pulls out a knife of his own!

The two circle each other!

Salvo: "You are going to betray your brother to the Empire?!"

Ordo lunges in a furious rage! Salvo is hit millimeters from his eye!

Ordo: "You are the one betraying them! This mission of yours will get them killed!"

The blood from Salvo wound trickles into his mouth.

Salvo: (Avoiding another lunge) "And you think bombing them will!"

Ordo begins a savage attack on Salvo!

Salvo: "Why are you doing this Ordo?"

Ordo's attacks slowly become more desperate!

Ordo: "I do this because Vader will kill me and my vode!  I can't let him do that!"

Ordo falls over two darts are sticking from behind his back!

Commander Torch steps from behind the door way.

Salvo: "Thanks."

Torch: "That all I get for saving your life."

Salvo uses the time to bind Ordo using the cloth from his bed.

Salvo: "What else do you want."  

Torch: "Good point."
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                                                                                                            On the front line

Salvo: "Jax I think there is some thing you should know."

The Holo image of Salvo face flickered.

Jax: "What is is Salvo?"
  
Salvo: "Ordo has betrayed us to the Empire."

Jax: (voice cracking) "Are you sure its him?"

Salvo: "He just ried to kill me!"

Jax turn the the Holo image off.

His own vode had just betrayed his brothers to the Empire!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #34 on: June 18, 2010, 05:12:11 PM »
Good read!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #35 on: June 19, 2010, 05:58:47 AM »
very nice!!!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #36 on: June 19, 2010, 06:29:32 AM »
Awesome story P-D
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #37 on: June 19, 2010, 08:40:54 AM »
another great chapter man!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #38 on: June 19, 2010, 09:26:16 AM »
thanks

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Part 15 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #39 on: June 19, 2010, 09:45:39 AM »
                                                                                          On the Front Line
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Shadow Tail: "Sir this sector lost!"

This knocked Jax from his train of thought.

Jax shots at an incoming Stormtrooper.

Jax: “How many LAATs do we have left?!”

Shadow Tail: “Only Four sir!” 

Jax: “Evacuate everyone no matter what the cost!”
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                                  On board the Star Destroyer Desolation


Lord Vader: “Have you destroyed the rebel clones?!

Grand Moff: “We have not ye- (Being choked by Vader)

Lord Vader: “I will not allow this mission to fail.”

Grand Moff: (Voice muffled) “We are trying everything we can my lord!”

Darth Vader forces Desolation to go down towards the planets surface!

Grand Moff: “What are you doing?!

Lord Vader: “You are a failure. I will destroy the clones no matter what the cost!”

Grand Moff: “Please Vader.”

Lord Vader: “Those who ask for mercy are not worthy of it.”

                                              Inside the Main Fort

Clone Trooper: “Sir you better see this.”

The Head Clone Trooper walks over to the screen.

Clone Trooper: “There sending an entire Star Destroyer at us!

Head Clone Trooper: “We need to evacuate this planet! When that thing hits there are going to be no survivors!”
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #40 on: June 19, 2010, 10:06:46 AM »
this is great man!
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Part 16 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #41 on: June 19, 2010, 12:40:35 PM »
                                                On board the Star Destroyer Desolation
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The Grand Moff’s limp body hovers before Darth Vader!

Lord Vader: “You have shown weakness. You are unless to the Empire!”

Grand Moff: “Lord Vader please.”

Darth Vader lifts both of his hands. Using the force he snaps the back of the Grand Moff.

Lord Vader: “You were never fit to be a “Grand Moff”.”

Darth Vader force pushes the Grand Moff’s body out of the Star Destroyer.
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Inside the Main Fort

Salvo: “How much time do we have?”

Head Clone Trooper: “Three hours at best.”

Salvo: “Do we have enough LAATs for a full scale evacuation?”

Head Clone Trooper: “No.”

Salvo: “Contact all the Commanders. Tell them to get all the men that they can fit into those LAATs. We will meet up on Tatooine.”

Head Clone Trooper: “Yes, Sir.”                                                 
                           
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                                                                                     Two hours later



Jax: “We don’t have enough room. Some of us will have to stay behind.”

The burning Star Destroyer seems to be on top of them.

Shadow Tail: “I’ll say behind sir.”

Jax: “No, I will. I need you to tell Ordo- (Shot by Shadow Trooper)

Shadow Tail: “Its an ambush!”

Not one clone leaves the battle!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #42 on: June 19, 2010, 12:57:04 PM »
Cool dude!  I wish I didn't have writer's block.....  :P :P :P :'(
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #43 on: June 19, 2010, 02:31:49 PM »
a very good read!
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #44 on: June 19, 2010, 03:22:10 PM »
very well writeen will
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