Author Topic: X-Wing Alliance - SEASON ONE - Chapters 1-12  (Read 61270 times)

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #165 on: September 04, 2010, 09:04:45 AM »
Very nice Jules. Star Destroyers against a nebula backdrop is now my favorite thing!


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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #166 on: September 04, 2010, 12:11:35 PM »
that is an amazing chapter, indee the star destroyers looks really cool!
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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #167 on: September 04, 2010, 12:15:20 PM »
Hey Jules, I noticed in one frame you referred to the Corruptor as an SSD instead of an ISD, its a small thing but I noticed it. :P


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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #168 on: September 04, 2010, 12:47:00 PM »
Yes, I've also noticed another typo...I'll go back over it and repair the damage tomorrow. Thanks for going through it and pointing these errors out!


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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #169 on: September 05, 2010, 03:42:20 AM »
the typo's and errors mentioned have been corrected!!!

You'll also find the comics new home here: http://x-wingalliance.thecomicseries.com/
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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #170 on: September 05, 2010, 09:27:28 PM »
Jules, yet another smurfing great web comic. I'm gonna use the word  'smurf ' any time I would say something that may be offensive or questionable to sensitive readers.
I don't know if you've ever seen or heard of the U.S. television show that aired as a cartoon back in 1981, but the characters changed common words to ' smurf ', like your work is smurfing amazing, or I smurfed all in my pants when I see your work.....You get the idea.
I swear, my creative-loving smurf triples in size every time you put out one of these brilliant pieces of art. I nearly smurfed all over myself when I saw that you had posted new work, and it broke my smurfing heart when someone lost their life. Didn't smurfing see that coming.
All in all, I was smurfing blown away....Again!
I once dated a girl years ago, and she could really smurf a smurf, if you know what I mean. She'd let me smurf all over her smurf, and she was always eager to smurf my smurf. Holy smurfing smurf!
After a few dates with her, I noticed that she was always scratching her smurf, and then I noticed that my own smurf started itching, and even though I had contracted multiple Smurfally Transmitted Diseases from her, I still kept smurfing the smurfing smurf out of her.
Then, she said that she had a little smurf on the way, and I realized that it was time to get the smurf outta there, so I hauled smurf as far away from that smurf as I could. All I could think about the situation was "Smurf that !"
Long story short, she caught up with me, and now I'm officially smurfed in the smurf.

Love the smurfing smurf outta your work, mate.
Smurf yeah!

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #171 on: September 06, 2010, 07:36:33 AM »
Pffttt!!! ROFLMSmurfing@$$off!! Good one Barry, good one!!
Loved the smurfs as a kid i use to live 3 houses from school, yet i was late every day...

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #172 on: September 06, 2010, 08:03:33 AM »
holy smurf!   that was smurfing awesome(this could catch on, i used to collect the smurf figurines) jule's  work never ceases to make me smurf myself .......oh well time for a new pair of boxers......
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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #173 on: September 06, 2010, 08:05:36 AM »
Every installment seems more beautiful to me than the last. /Wicked action in this chapter, Jules. Just stunning work.

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #174 on: September 06, 2010, 08:36:16 AM »
that was a great, action packed chapter, Jules!  The visuals were awesome, as was the story itself.  Your cadre of CGI modelers are really pumping some graphical ammo into this as well! 

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #175 on: September 06, 2010, 09:19:36 AM »
Pat, Clint, I really appreciate your comments, and I am very grateful for your continued readership!

R1....WTS (What the Smurf!)

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #176 on: September 06, 2010, 11:44:09 PM »
wow, just broke down and read this chapter, first in the series for me.
personally really dig the way you've combined all these elements with
such style.

i'll not comment on the climax, its a real breath of fresh air to
see a story about a young hero on his way up. taking his
first steps into a larger world..to quote Obi-wan.

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #177 on: September 07, 2010, 01:16:17 AM »
DD, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comment! as one of the core producers of SW fan novels your opinion means a lot, thanks so much.

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #178 on: September 07, 2010, 05:36:24 AM »
thanks man;

i'm actually in the early stages of writing work on the
11th episode of memoirs, i must admit your classic
approach of dealing with young heroes has caused
me to use this when dealing with this younger
verison of  Cas-Lo Vont. whom was quite
moody and frankly easily mistaken for a
bad guy in my Sequel Trilogy series.


anyways; one can only wonder at what will
happen with the next chapters of your series.
personally i hope to see your band of heroes
have something to do with the plans of the
second Death Star. (i.e the many bothans whom die
would need a transport.)

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Re: X-Wing Alliance - Chapter 11. REBEL RENDEZVOUS - 04/09/10
« Reply #179 on: September 07, 2010, 12:46:23 PM »
DD, that is so weird, I was thinking of taking the story down that exact route, I even had that statement about the Bothans running through my head the other day.

It would be interesting to see the young Vont, and see where he came from. He is a mean dog of a fella with no fear, something must have made him that way.