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Offline willywonkaMusic13

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willy present: Brother's & Villians
« on: July 03, 2010, 07:06:16 PM »
My  1st novel, enjoy guys.

Section 1:The Only Easy Day Was Yesterday

Mygeeto 0700 location Juliet Charlie 
As every movement of my footsteps count for the safety of my comrade & mine, we move silently, but quickly. Enemy target 829 yards, wind speed 10mph SW. Take the shot... Enemy personal down. let's get the hell out of here. My name is Lt. Hence (CC-4357), & I just killed Cad Bane. I was with Sgt. Clix (RC-3526). This is my days in the Clone Wars.

Palpatine: Lt.  Execute order  29
Hence: Yes my lord it shall be done
Palpatine: Do not fail me Lt.
Hence: Clix get your gear we're moving out
Clix: Alright, what's our objective?
Hence: Order 29 has been issued
Clix: I'll get the pilots
Hence: In my mind right now I am thinking that will this be the day of a new republic?
Clone Wars Day: 138
Hence: Here we are in Felucia again
Clix: Well let's hope this ends in a happy ending
Hence: Pilot land there
Pilot: Yes Lt.
Pilot: Have fun down there
Hence: Lets split up. I will go to the south entrance & take out the security. You'll go to the underground sewer. Blow up the door above you when you reach the target, wait for my signal to go on. We'll meet at the village watch out for the natives, they get real nasty when it comes to republic. Good luck out there.
Clix: Alright then you too.
Hence: As I' m  through the thick jungle full of lush plants. From what I here the plants can eat you alive. There's the gate, hm no guards? I better be careful then...
Clix: This is what I get for being a clone. Doing all the dirty work. Wait what is that? A clone brother?! This looks way to old be a clone. Huh? What the?! Ahh!
Hence: Knock, knock, tap. Clix blow up the hole. Clix do you read me? Bzzz bzzz Hence bzzz being hel bzzz hostage bzzz commun bzz tions bzzz offline bzz located at cell bzz 244 bzzzzzzz. Clix do you read me?! damn.
Native translator: Now clone where are your buddys now? ha ha ha.
Clix: AHHHH!
Native translator: Now where is your supply's going? I wont ask again.
 Clix: (spit)
Native translator: tisk tisk tisk. (speaking in native language)
Clix: Ahh! (cough)
Hence: (walking silently, knifed enemy's throat) you know kid I wouldn't come here if you didn't had the explosives.
Clix: Well at least you're here right?
Hence: yeah lets cut you loose.
Clix: well back to the mission
Hence: ok time to move to the village
Clix: Explosives charged & ready to detonate.
Hence: Let's move
Hence: We're at a safe range. Do it.
Boom! Boom! Boom!
Hence: call in the gunships I'll cover you
Clix: LAAT 362 do you copy over
Pilot: We copy over. What's your location?
Hence: Clix you better call that LAAT because we got some unwanted friends
Clix: We're at the village hurry!
Hence: TAKE COVER!
Hence: Where the hell is that gunship
Clix: LAAT 362 Where the hell are you?!
Pilot: we're coming in hot. Dropping ropes now.
Hence: Lets go lets go
Vroom Vroom
Hence: that was to close
Clix: at least we're safe
Papatine: Lt. was your mission a success?
Hence: yes sir
Palpatine: good

Section 2: Friend or Foe
Cantina,Tattoine
Hence: Can you believe that we are living with jedi scum
Clix: I know soon we will get rid of them
Hence: I know
Announcer: Lt. Hence & Sgt. Clix report to the jedi temple
Hence: what are thee odds of that announcement
Clix: little, but we better be going now
 Jedi Temple
Cmdr. Thire: hey its the bad boys. Haven't seen you since the training
Hence: Well I gave up that long ago, so what are we doing now
Thire: You boys are given an assignment to protect an elder jedi
Hence: why us?
Thire: Palpatine told me just to say it, hey I don't know anything about this either, I'm a messenger.
Hence: who's the jedi?
Thire: jedi master kan dyeas
Hence: Great. This is going to be a fun one
Clix: What do we do babysit?
Thire: in terms of that, yes.
Hence: great
Thire: But do not speak of your rank, identity or any other things
Hence: Alright then, lets go clix
Kan Dyeas: Oh hello there
Hence: hello
Clix: hello
Bing Bing...Bing Bing
Hence: Sorry I to take this
Hence: This is Hence
Palpatine: I see you met Kan Dyeas
Hence: yes my lord
Palpatine: When he takes you far away kill him & take his light saber
Hence: It will be done my lord
Endor
Kan Dyeas: this has been a fun time
Hence: Do it
Clix: roger that
Beew beew beew
Clix: lets get of here
Hence: wait...What! he's not here
Kan Dyeas: of course you fools you have match against a sith. How does like to be chock.
Clix: i...er...Bang
Kan Dyes: now time to die soldier
TO BE CONTINUED....

We are here to execute, not to order.

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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2010, 07:23:20 PM »
Good read, WWM13!
As do I. It is our lot in life, Master. Shall we find something to kill to cheer us up?
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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #2 on: July 03, 2010, 07:40:52 PM »
thanks man
We are here to execute, not to order.

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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2010, 07:42:41 PM »
That was a great read, and it's about time you started posting here WW!

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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2010, 07:51:41 PM »
i didn't how to post
We are here to execute, not to order.

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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2010, 11:38:18 PM »
excellent story mate
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Re: willy present: Brother's & Villians
« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2010, 08:45:38 AM »
i didn't how to post

LOL!  That's a shame, Willy.  In the future, if you ever have any questions, email or PM the staff here and we'll get you worked out!