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The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« on: August 05, 2010, 11:16:24 AM »
Hey guys. With little to say really here is the fourth installment to my web comic. Enjoy.


































Thanks for reading. Please post comments and feedback.
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 11:22:00 AM »
That was cool.  The story is nicely done.  Good job and keep it up.
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 01:46:03 PM »
Squire, and excellent photo-story. You have put in some excellent details, I especially liked the hand picking up the light sabre!

I can see that you've made a lot of effort with this, the customs and sets all go together to make a wonderful piece of work...it would be great to see more.

Jules
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 01:51:16 PM »
Quote from: hangarbay94 on August 05, 2010, 01:46:03 PM
Squire, and excellent photo-story. You have put in some excellent details, I especially liked the hand picking up the light sabre!

I can see that you've made a lot of effort with this, the customs and sets all go together to make a wonderful piece of work...it would be great to see more.

Jules

Don't worry Jules. Chapter 5 is already in the works. I've got to sqeeze two more chapters in before school starts so it won't be that bad of a slow down. Once freshman year hits it may be just one every  month if I'm lucky. Thanks for the compliments.
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 01:56:40 PM »
Freshman year?

Whippersnapper!
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 03:51:07 PM »
Yeah I'm just in High School.
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 04:57:01 PM »
Squirepec, that was phenomenal!  Jules will be most proud!
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2010, 05:45:47 PM »
HIGH SCHOOL!!!


I thought you meant college.


Now I feel really old.
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #8 on: August 09, 2010, 08:17:43 AM »
Well done Squire!
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Re: The Chronicles of Orion Company: Chapter 4 "UNINVITED"
« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2010, 02:39:20 PM »
Squire, I also read this over at Yakface, and I will leave a comment there also.

I can sum up your creative work in one word....Remarkable!

I love the story idea, it's so simple, but had the potential to go in so many directions. I love your characters as well. I know how hard it is to write a story from scratch, and to produce artwork, dioramas, Photoshop editing and photography on top of that is a mammoth task. You have done so well, this really is a Remarkable achievement.

I am so looking forward to seeing more of your work. You should give yourself a huge pat on the back for this...

Jules
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