Kualan, your comic deserves much more attention, it is a remarkable piece of work.
You have paced the writing perfectly, moving between scenes as if it were a movie, creating a story that is exciting to read as well as look at. You have created a style all your own, using game graphics works so well, the different locations are wonderfully rendered, as a re the characters.
The dialogue is totally authentic, and is a joy to read.
I applaud you on such a slick creation, you are a wizard story teller and digital artist and a true fan....This piece of work is a wonderful addition to this forum, please can you create a post with the whole of this first Volume from beginning to end. Post it on this forum and after a week or two I'll move it into the completed works Forum...
It deserves to be displayed in it's entirety!