Clone Commander, this story is a continuation of the existing timeline, in effect making it Chapter 13. I will be adding it to the web comic later on, and it will kick.off season 2.
After reading Pat's writing I quickly came to the conclusion that his words needed to be shown in full, rather than take out all of the good stuff. As Pat is a guest writer the format seems appropriate. Both Pat and I are seeing how this one goes, I'm hoping that this collaborative format can continue as Pat is an excellent writer. I also really like this picture book format, I don't recall seeing.anyone produce a story on any of the forums in this way before, it allows for more creative writing and for full images to be shown without talk bubbles...
I'd be interested to know your opinions on this format too!