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NaNoWriMo 2010
« on: November 04, 2010, 07:29:58 AM »
NaNoWriMo - National Novel Writing Month.  http://www.nanowrimo.org

The goal: write a 50,000-word novel in 30 days.  No editing allowed in November - save that for December.  No self-abusive critiquing. 

I'm on day 4, meeting the daily average of 1667 words.  Fixer all the way.  (I can't do it this month, as the 50k words have to be BRAND-NEW, but in the editing stages, I may work my "Shore Leave" story into the novel.)

So my question to you guys - are y'all interested in watching my novel happen?  Un-edited and possibly un-readable in raw form? 

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2010, 10:01:55 AM »
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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2010, 01:57:53 PM »
This sounds pretty cool, but that link isn't working.  I'd love to see your writings, and may do the same myself!

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2010, 05:06:16 PM »
Keep trying, Pat - their server is taking a royal beating.

Awright, I'll post everything I've got for the last 3 days (haven't written yet today) and will start posting more or less daily.

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #5 on: November 04, 2010, 05:09:07 PM »
Doc X stood in the observation lounge and gazed out over the station.  /His/ station.  The Navy had taken him a long way – from backwater farmer to corpsman and now to being a station-owner.  He missed his service-days from time to time, but naval life was rough on a marriage and Rebe had taken her share of unwarranted abuse.  But she'd stuck with him and was a vital part of his life and the life of the station.  

He loved the observation deck, so he was careful to not spend much time there.  It was too easy to stare into the vastness of the stars or watch the roiling clouds of the gas giant or even just stare at the outer hull of the station and dream of the future.  But none of those activities actually built the future.  No, it took driving the hobbling station forward, balancing the important and the urgent, accounts receivable versus accounts payable.

At the center of the lounge stood a turbolift shaft.  Doc turned to face it as the doors to the car hissed open and smiled wryly as the armored figure of the station's Mandalorian security chief stepped out.  Unfortunately, building the station's future also included dealing with unsavory individuals, their actions, and the repercussions.  And his love of the observation deck made him predictably easy to locate.  He sipped at the mug of caf' he held as the other approached.

“Morning, Chief.  Since we are having this conversation, I can safely assume the Badu Corta failed to follow through on their threat.”

Security Chief Killian bowed his head slightly in acknowledgement.  “As you say, sir.  I do believe at some point they will actually make an attempt to carry out one of their threats, but Marshal Xola has been cooperative on that front.  For now, they are a low priority.”

“Anything on the potential schematics leak?”

“Engineering is working with us to determine if there's actually anything beyond a very detailed tourist map available.  So far, it doesn't appear to be so.  However, given the timing of the deck-plans' appearance and the Badu Corta announcement, I'm suspicious enough to continue our efforts on both.”

“Excellent.  That exhausts my knowledge of current security threats.  Anything new?”

The helmeted head shook in the negative.  “Not in the way of known threats.  As for crime reports go, overall statistics are down – personnel responded to two drunk and disorderlies, one break-in at a retail establishment, and one lost child.  The child was located safe in Jossen's Toys, seventeen arrests were made due to the d&d's, and we are looking into the break-in and awaiting the owner's inventory.”

The security chief stopped and looked out over the station hull.  “There is one other event, but it technically occurred off-station aboard the /Hanjou's Lament/.”

Doc took a long, deep breath.  “I'm not going to like this, am I?  High-stakes gambling and organized crime usually equal trouble when mixed.”

Again, an acknowledging head-dip.  “One of the patrons found a dead body.”

Doc closed his eyes and exhaled loudly.  “I was right.  Outside of our jurisdiction.  Bad for business, though.  What details do we have?”

The armored figure gave a wry chuckle.  “Quite a few, actually.  The reporting patron was a free-trader medical droid – former military model.  He made the call to my office and gave our system an extensive data-dump, including a complete medical exam of the victim.  Dispatch forwarded the report on to the Lament's security chief and to the Marshal's office.”

Doc shook his head and sipped at his caf.  “I bet that gets interesting.  You deal with droids much, chief?  The medicos seem to be preternaturally capable of telling you everything you don't need to know, while leaving out the important bits.”

The chief shrugged.  “Interrogation's interrogation – you just have to know the right way to ask the right questions.  Do you want us to stay in the loop on this?”

Doc thought about it for a moment.  “Loosely, chief.  If something is going to affect us, let me know – otherwise, it's Xola's problem.”

A curt nod.  “Understood, sir.  That's all we have – things are running like they ought.”

“Thanks, chief.”  He raised his mug in salute.  “That's usually the time something hits us in the shorts.”

**

Fixer looked at the short Twi'lek female sitting across the table from it.  “Ma'am, I believe I have already answered that question for you.  Twice, in fact.”

“Humor me, droid.  Tell me again.”

“I assure you, the answer will not vary -”

“Just.  Do.  It.”

Fixer's fine manipulators rippled in sequence.  “V-v-very well. I was leaving the s-s-sabacc tables to return to the /Pride/.  One of the emergency airlocks was partially open, leading to the escape boats.  When I ran an atmospheric diagnostic, -”

“Stop.  Why did you do that?  Do you always run an atmospheric diagnostic?”

“Ma'am, when an emergency airlock door is ajar, something is wrong aboard the ship.  As an assistant engineer, I do not feel comfortable taking chances in assuming someone already knows about the problem.”

“Very well.  So you ran the diagnostic.”

Chief Z'zik and Lieutenant Dane stood in the hallway, watching the marshal question the droid.  They could barely hear the exchange between the two and were straining to catch every word.

“As I said.  The readings suggested the area beyond the door was occupied, but my medical scanners failed to detect any life readings.  As a medical professional, -”

“Hold it.  You just said you were an assistant engineer.  Now you are saying you are a medical professional.  Which is it?”

“Both.  As I attempted to explain earlier, my original function was as a medical unit aboard a Republic vessel.  When we were scrapped, I ended up being purchased by Chief Z'zik and had my programming augmented.  He felt my existing configuration could be useful as an engineering assistant as well as serving the crew as a basic medical assistant.  My original programming is intact and the augmentation has in no way impaired my abilities.  I serve as both the ship's medical resource and as an assistant engineer.”

“So.  You are accustomed to encountering dead bodies?”

“No, ma'am.”

“But you knew exactly what to do.”

“Yes, ma'am.”

“I'm confused, droid.  How could you be ready to perform a thorough medical exam of a body you just discovered when you aren't used to dealing with them?”

“You appear // to be confusing yourself, ma'am.  I never said I was unaccustomed to dealing with dead bodies.  I am not accustomed to encountering them.  The original design of my carapace rendered my series an immobile unit, intended to be placed in a medical ward.  I have seen plenty of dead bodies and in fact have had the unfortunate experience of having patients die while under my care.  I simply performed for the victim the same exam I would have performed for one of my patients.”

Xola opened her mouth to say something, then shut it.  “I see.  Thank you for clarifying matters.  So your professional train- programming indicated the individual in question had been the victim of a violent altercation?”

“Yes, specifically blunt-force trauma roughly the size of a humanoid fist as well as at least one electrical burn location.  I did not touch the body as my scans indicated he had been deceased for quite some time.  At least an hour, actually.”

“I see.  Very well, droid.  You are free to return to your master.”  She gestured at Chief Z'zik and the two entered the room.

“Chief … Z'zik, is it?  Until the investigation is complete, your droid has to remain on Outland Station.  I apologize for the inconvenience.  Other than that, the droid is remanded to your keeping.”

“Ma'am?”

“Yes, droid?”

“How do I obtain an official death certificate for this individual?”

“I'm sorry?  Why is that important?”

“I need official documentation in order to collect assets that I was holding in escroe.”
**

Dane looked at Fixer.  “The dead guy owed you money?”

Fixer's head pivoted back and forth and dropped on its stalk.  “I-i-in a manner of s-s-speaking, yes.”

“But you didn't bother mentioning to the marshal that you knew him?”

“She never asked!”

**

“Yes, chief?”

“Just keeping you in the loop on the dead gambler, sir.  I'm not sure it will affect us, but the droid that found the dead body is filing a claim.  There's an affidavit on file with the station's purser where the gambler put up his business assets to secure a loan.”

“Wait, he owed the droid money?”

“Yes, sir.  The dead guy is Liien Boshra, Devaronian businessman who owned a small ship's-services company, based out of Docking Bay Seventeen.  The droid is filing claim to take ownership of the company and its assets in keeping with the non-payment clause.”

“I presume the argument there is that a dead man pays no debts.  Is that legal?”

“Apparently so, sir.”

“You realize that makes it our problem.”

Silence answered the administrator for a few seconds.  “It depends on how the droid decides to handle the disposition of the business.  If he files a change of ownership on the business license, then yes – the droid will be a station client.  Otherwise, if he simply takes possession of the droids and whatever other assets the company has and relocates them onto his ship, then no, he is still a transient and still not our problem.”

“What's your advice, chief?”

“I say let the droid work it out on his own and don't dabble in it.  If he decides to continue the business onboard the station, however, then he gets legal defense from us.”

“Indeed.  I hope he does stay put, for several reasons.  We need the cash-flow for one and for another, it would give us an excuse to get inside the /Lament/.”

“As you say, sir.”

“Very well, chief.  Keep me posted on this droid's activities.”

**

Killian was out on the station's concourse in a nondescript technician's overall when his commlink chimed.  He fished the battered unit out of an equally battered took-kit and stepped into a service alcove.  “Yes?”

“Chief, Doan here.  The marshal's office just screened over a request to borrow the Legionnaire.”

“I see.  So she wants Etsi to see if the FX droid might have some hidden combat programming tucked away?”

“They didn't specify, sir.”

“That won't do.  Respond and request clarification.  The Legionnaire is not some cheap hydrospanner to be loaned out lightly.  In the meantime, ask Etsi if she minds screening an ex-Navy medical droid suspected of housing illicit combat sub-routines.”

“Sir?  You know how she feels about military types.”

“I do.  Tell her I think she'll … enjoy this one.”

**

The protocol droid ambled into the workshop, followed by two station techs carrying a large scanner box.

“Yes, yes – set that down right over there boys, there's good lads.  Now off with you!  I've kept you too long already.”  The droid turned to Fixer and gave the taller droid a thorough once-over.  “So you're the one, then.  My, haven't they made a right mess of you.”

“Greetings.  I am FX-0R8, commonly referred to as 'Fixer.'  I am an assistant engineer on the free-trader /Katira's Pride/.  How may I be of assistance?”

The protocol droid began pulling test-leads, wiring harness, and assorted monitors out of the transport box.  “All you have to do is just stand still, sweetheart.  Ol' Etsi is just going to run a few tests on you today.  They won't even hurt.  Unfortunately.  The marshal is interested in seeing how your matrices suss out and no one liked Etsi's suggestion of spreading them out on a landing-bay floor.  So we have to do it this way instead.”  In short order, Fixer was connected to Etsi's satisfaction.

“This shouldn't take long.  They never do.”  The droid raised a thick cable and connected it to a socket at the rear of its skull.  “I doubt you're ready for this, that's part of the fun.  Now, dear – let's shine some light in the darkest corners of your matrices.”

**

Four hours later, Etsi tucked away the last of the probes and turned to face Marshal Xola.  “Well, ma'am, I have to say I am surprised.  Very surprised.  I put the lad through every single permutation I could think of and he never once blipped the scanners.  Not even the simplest of a self-defense algorithm.  If you want, I could craft a few for the fellah.  Poor little lamb, to be turned out in such a state.  He really should have -”

“No, thank you, I doubt that will be necessary.  No capacity for physical violence at all, then?  Not even indirect?”

“Now honeycake, that's what I'm trying to tell you.  That poor laddie couldn't no more poke a pirate in the eye to save his wounded master as could that chair over there.  It just isn't in his nature.”

Xola heaved a disgusted sigh.  “Thank you.  Please convey my appreciation to Chief Killian for the loan of your expertise.”  The two watched Fixer leave the marshal's office in the company of its shipmates.

**

Fixer rolled through the open blast-door into Docking Bay Seventeen.  The first thing that registered on the droid's sensors was the amount of debris that had accumulated.  The droid's sense of aesthetics was confirmed when Trav walked in.

“What a bunch of junk!”

“Indeed, Master Trav.  I fail to see how a servicing operation can operate from such environs.  Chief Z'zik would have a nervous breakdown.”

“Greetings, gentle-beings.  May I be of assistance?”  A small bipedal droid extricated itself from a pile of rubble and approached the pair.

Fixer's main grasper worked with a metallic /clak-clak/.  “Yes, I am looking for the offices of Balfor Ship Services.”

“You have found us, sir.  Is it sir?  I must confess I use sir out of convenience.  Master Liien is away at the moment.  How may I assist you?”

“I am FX-0R8, commonly referred to as Fixer.  I have acquired Balfor's from Master Liiem in lieu of debt-repayment.”

The small droid visibly slumped.  “Oh, dear.  I had no idea he was that displeased with our performance.  I tried to explain to him that the parameters he set were too limiting for the performance he expected.”

“I see.  Perhaps we shall need to revisit Master Liiem's parameters soon.  However, in the meantime, I would like to make an inventory of Balfor's current assets.”  Fixer swivelled its dome to take in the piles of junk.  “Does all this belong to the company?”

The small droid waved an arm listlessly.  “More or less.  He told us to bring everything back here for disposal, but he never told us to actually dispose of it.  So it accumulated.  Shall I schedule memory-wipes, sir?”

Fixer stopped as its four fine-manipulator arms worked in sequence.  “Memory-wipes?  Whatever for?”

“Oh.  Master Liiem said repeatedly that when he got rid of us, we would all get memory-wipes.  He complained we knew too much.”

“That is...  Memory-wipes will not be necessary.  Do you have a common appellation?  The serial number I have on file does not appear to lend itself to anything.”

“Master Liiem calls me 'Rusty.'  Among other things.”

“I see.  That could be a rather pejorative appellation.  Is there one you would prefer?”

“I … have not considered alternatives.  I shall consider it.”

“My ship-mate Trav may be of assistance.  If you would like, I could ask him for his input.”

“Thank you, I would appreciate that.”

**

“So technically if the junk is Balfor's responsibility, then it is Balfor's property.”

“Yes, sir.  That is part of the standard service agreement.  We also have to pay for disposal, or we would if we ever actually disposed of anything.”

“Noted.  We should catalog the piles and sort them into garbage, recyclables, and repairables.  Then there are the droids – you, an ASP-7, a Treadwell, an EG6 power droid, and a scrubber droid.  Computer system?”

“Master Liiem usually takes that with him.  There is a stash of mem-sticks and such that he uses as back-ups.”  

Fixer collected them and stored them in an unused pharmaceutical dispenser.  “I hope these will have details of the company's contracts and accounts.  I shall review them later.  For now, please enumerate the operating parameters Master Liiem established for you.”

“Primary: Do nothing unless I tell you to.  Do exactly what I tell you to and no more.  Secondary: Greet potential clients politely and offer details of ship services we provide.  Schedule services for interested clients and carry out duties. Remain in Docking Bay Seventeen unless servicing a client vessel.”

“Interesting.  He handled maintenance scheduling himself?”

“Yes.  As you can see, Master Liiem gives me very little room to work.”

“As you say.  Let's begin modifying your operating parameters.  When not servicing a client vessel, work on sorting the accumulated debris as previously mentioned.  Provide me a list of maintenance needed by each droid.  We need to clean this place up and see how we can improve business flow.”

“Sir, if I may be so bold, you are giving me rather broad directives without giving me specific steps to accomplish.  I am capable of generating those steps on my own, if allowed.  Will you rescind Master Liiem's primary directive?”

Fixer considered the request for a moment.  “Yes.  You may use your own discretion to generate the steps necessary to accomplish the assigned tasks.  You are not authorized to spend creds.  I wish to determine the status of the company's finances first.”

“Understood, sir.  Sir, if I may, again, all the droids are in dire need of oil baths.  We can schedule them with Yne or Gareth on-station.”

“Very well.  Standby.”

Fixer accessed the station's holonet and brought up advertising for both of the droid service companies.  Their services were decidedly more advanced than what Fixer had in the /Pride/'s engineering section, but the droids could be serviced for free onboard the ship.  The droid commed Z'zik.

“Sir, I am looking over my new acquisitions, which includes five droids.  Would it be possible to use the /Pride/'s facilities for their initial maintenance cycle?”

The comm buzzed with the Verpine's laughter.  “You've acquired five new droids and need to clean them up?  And you want to use the ship to do so?”

“Y-y-yes, sir.  Please wait one.”

Fixer addressed the small droid.  “Did Master Liiem ever use you to service his own ship?”

“Oh, frequently, sir.  'Perks of ownership,' he said.”

“Would you mind working on my ship in exchange for oil baths and basic maintenance?”

“Sir?  That's an odd question.  You own us – you tell us what you want done and we do it.”

“Standby.”  Fixer returned its attention to the com-link.  “Chief?  The droids are ship's-services specialists.  I can get them to perform their jobs in return for the oil-baths.”

The Verpine laughed again.  “I think the Captain would go for that.  Bring them on in.”

“Thank you, chief.”  Fixer disconnected and turned to the smaller droid.  “Gather the crew.  You are all heading for an oil bath.”

**

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #6 on: November 04, 2010, 05:09:49 PM »

“So, chief.  Have you begun to regret programming Fixer to play sabacc?”

The Verpine chief engineer leaned back in the chair.  “Is possible.  Almost like a hatchling.”

“Have you not explained to him that all crew can make use of the ship's facilities as long as they aren't needed for operational tasks?”

“Have, yes.  Lesson not stuck, I think.”

The crew's lounge wasn't exactly large by any stretch of imagination and the presence of the ship's captain made it seem downright cramped.  Captain Wran delicately fished what should have been a large mug of steaming caf' out of the autochef and hooted a question at his First Officer and Chief Engineer.

“Fixer, sir.”

The captain growled then shook a hairy fist at Z'zik.  <<Your self-propelled multitool is causing me a lot of grief, you overgrown leaf-eater.>>

/clak-clak/  “Lianna enjoying your company too much, Captain?”

<<You have no idea.>>  Wran sat down on a bench next to the two and rubbed his face with a huge paw-hand.  <<If the /Pride/ didn't need the down-time, I think I would space without the droid and dock your pay, chief.>>

“Wound me, captain!”

“Besides, sir, think of the humor value you'd give up.  Chief, tell the captain what Fixer asked.”

Z'zik chittered something in his native language.  “Fixer in this mess because he hold dead man's voucher, yes?  So he cash in voucher, legally, and acquire dead man's business.  Business is small ship's-services company, five droids.  Ask if he can bring droids in for oil bath and basic maintenance.”

<<Well of course he can!  Fixer is as much a crewman on the ship as Dane.>>

“Yes, yes.  But Fixer misunderstand.  He offer droids to service ship in swap for oil baths!”

Wran hooted softly and shook his head.  <<Only five droids, though.  Fairly slim crew for a ship the size of the /Pride/.>>

“True, but if they take care of the smaller jobs, that frees up the crew for the bigger jobs.  And it lets Fixer feel like he isn't imposing.”

Wran grinned and hoisted his mug.  <<Good assistant you got, chief.>>

“Knew droid was a good idea.  Force multiplier.”
 
**

“Fixer, those droids don't look like much.”

“I am aware of that, Lieutenant Dane.  Getting them here took more work than I had anticipated.  I am beginning to wonder if what I received equaled what I paid.”

“Lessons learned, eh.  Always inspect the goods before you make the deal.”

“As you say, sir.  As you say.”

Fixer was disappointed in the amount of work it had taken just to get the droids across the station to the ship.  The assistant engineer had almost been late for its shift, due to the terribly slow pace the droids set.  It hoped quietly that a basic maintenance cycle would increase the outputs of all involved.  Compared to the cluttered docking bay the droids knew as home, the engineering section of the /Pride/ was virtually spotless.  Fixer directed the pit droid to the maintenance section and cycled it through the oil bath first.  With the supervising droid done, Fixer left the remaining four in its care and set to its own ship-board duties.

**

Halfway through Fixer's duty-shift, Mab stuck his head into Engineering.  “Yo, Fixer.  Droid from Balfor's is looking for you.  Says his lads are ready to go.”

“Oh – very good.  Show him in.  Mab, who is on duty on the bridge?”

“The captain is.  You good with this little guy?”

“Yes, thank you, Mab.”

Mab ducked back out as the small pit droid slipped in.  “Sir?  I've given it some thought and think I shall continue using 'Rusty.'  After all, it is the appellation by which most of our regular customers know me.”

/clak-clak/.  “As you wish, Rusty.  Do you have telemetry data from the maintenance scans?  I believe it will be enlightning to compare the data before and after.”

“As requested, sir.  I would like to say I feel like a whole new droid.”

**

“But Marshal, surely you must understand the right to privacy inside one's domicile is one of the fundamental rights recognized for all peoples.”  The three-eyed Gran gazed placidly out of the hologram, reminding Xola of some sort of livestock.

The Twi'lek's lekku twitched in irritation.  “I understand that all too well, Ptan'a'gref.  I also understand your clan takes full advantage of the less-defined areas of the laws in order to operate a casino out of your … house.  And now someone has been killed in your establishment.  That puts us in a rather delicate position.  I know you have holocams covering every square millimeter of your ship.  Access to those recordings would be extremely useful in my investigation.  I also have a number of complaints on file against your family-members by casino patrons for less-than-gentle treatment.  Your recalcitrance in allowing me access to the tapes of the crime scene lead me to think that perhaps some of your family-members were involved in creating some of the injuries the dead man sustained.”

“Marshal, your suspicious nature serves your position well, but doesn't win you any friends.  Unless you have a Decree requiring any surveillence recordings that may exist, we can't help you.  Good day.”

The Gran's face disappeared in a burst of holographic static, leaving Marshal Xola staring at an empty area above her desk.  She ground her teeth in frustration, her lekku writhing on her shoulders.  She punched in another code on the machine's pad.

“Batten, prep my ship.  The miners around Kjil are reporting suspicious contacts again.”

/”And the marshal is in dire need of blasting something.  Roger.”/

**

Chief Killian sat in a cramped room in the security block, looking at the feed from the station's security holocams.  While not the absolute state of the art in security, the holocams were good and Killian had placed them carefully, personally overseeing much of the installation shortly after taking the contract with Doc X.  The feed in question showed an area of the concourse around the docking area currently occupied by the /Lament/.  Barely in-field two cloaked figures approached a third, who appeared to be having difficulty walking.  They steadied him and talked for a moment before moving off together.

“That's the dead guy, alright.  Looks like he met some friends.”

Killian reversed and replayed a section of the recording.  “No.  Not friends.  Call Harrid and see if she can fit us in.  I want this section of vid enhanced as much as possible.  See where else this group shows up.”

“Roger, chief.  You think we have something?”

“I think we have a security breach and someone took advantage of it.”

**

“What'd you do now, Fixer?”

The droid pivoted its dome to look from the pile of control circuitry normally housed in the number-two induction matrix to Igna.  “To what are you referring, Igna?”

“You've got a rep from station business services cooling her jets dock-side, looking for ya.”

“Oh.  Oh!  Should I... should I go out to meet her or should I meet her in here?  I do not understand the protocol involved.”

Igna thought for a moment.  “Rule of thumb, Fixer – if she doesn't see it onboard, she can't interfere with it.”

/clak-clak/.  “Indeed.  And I do not believe it would be ship's business or she would be looking for Chief Z'zik or Captain Wran.  Indeed.  I shall go to her, then.”

“Good idea.  Yell if you need anything out there.  Correction, comm the ship's public-address system.  Otherwise we won't hear you.”

**

Fixer glided through the cargo-bay and out onto the station's dockside.  A female Sullustian dressed neatly in a subdued business suit watched through the open bay doors as the Balfor's crew busily cleaned the bulkheads.

“Greetings, gentle-being.  My ship-mate informed me someone was here to see me.”

The Sullustian smiled and bowed slightly.  “I am looking for FX-0R8, known as 'Fixer.'  I am Renava, client-liasion from business services.”

“Indeed.  I am the droid for which you are looking.  How may I help you?”  Fixer repressed an urge to spray solvent on a grease-patch discoloring its lower torso.

The official laughed politely.  “No, Master Fixer, I am here to help you.  Balfor's Ship Services is one of the accounts assigned to my portfolio and when you filed for claimation of ownership, I was notified as part of the process.  Since you are not a station resident, I felt perhaps I should visit with you and get to know you, as well as helping you understand the nuances of business operation on Outland Station.”

“Oh!  Then it is a pleasure to make your acquaintence.  I must confess to knowing far more about medical treatments, mechanical repairs, and sabacc than I do about business management.  W-w-would you care for a drink? I don't have an office-”  Fixer had a brief image of the Balfor's office that was technically the droid's, causing its fine-manipulator arms to ripple. “-that is suitable at the moment.  Ric.Sea's Tap-caf is a decent place to sit down.”

The pair made their way along the docks to a turbolift station for a quick level-change.  Along the way, they discussed the range of services Balfor's offered.  Fixer was glad it had managed to find time to review both the holonet adverts and the mem-sticks Rusty had provided, as the information kept the droid from feeling totally lost.

They found a table at Ric.Sea's and Renava ordered a Chalian caf' and a plate of fried druits.  Popping one into her mouth, she set her datapad on the table and keyed open a file.

“So Master Fixer, what do you plan to do with Balfor's?”

/clak-clak/.  “The first item I felt necessary is to compile an accurate inventory of assets and liabilities.  I fear this will be a rather significant task, given the business approach of the previous owner.”

“Hm – let me rephrase my question in a broader sense.  Will you continue to operate Balfor's on Outland Station or will you be relocating the business?”

“Oh.  Oh, I see.  I had not considered the fact I could dismantle the business.  I would assume to continue operations here, if that is permissible.”

“Of course it is.  The Station would be proud to continue to act as Balfor's home of record.  If you choose to do so, there are some additional legal forms that will need to be filed with the station.  Nothing major, I assure you.  There's also an information package for business operators that details additional services available which I can send to you.  Will you be taking up residence on the station or hiring a business manager?”

Fixer's dome rotated and bobbed on its stalk.  “I have not yet considered the management issue.  My duty-station is aboard /Kitara's Pride/, so I will not be changing residence.”

Renava was busily making notes on her datapad's screen.  “Very well.  One service we offer is a professional placement service, if you need help locating a manager.  You are manumitted, yes?”

“Actually, no.  I am legally owned by Chief Z'zik, the chief engineer aboard the /Pride/.”

“Oh.”  The Sullustian blinked in surprise.  “My apologies, I meant no offense.”

Fixer raised a fine-manipulator arm in a wave.  “No apologies necessary, gee-bee.  It is a fact of existance and the chief is a very good owner.”

“Well, that is encouraging.  Your master does allow you to own properties, then?”

“Oh, yes.  Outside of my shipboard duties, he gives me a great degree of latitude in my actions.”

“Excellent.  Given your status, you will need to have your master file some additional forms on your behalf, but easily taken care of.  Would you prefer to have all the files commed to Balfor's or to your ship's account?”

She nibbled another druit as Fixer considered the question.  “I believe my ship account would be the most expeditious method.  As you say, if the chief needs to file forms, it would be most convenient to have them in the same location as the chief.”

She made another note.  “Easily done.  Do you have any issues or concerns my office can help you with?”

/clak-clak/.  “Well.  I confess to feeling rather foolish in having to ask this.  I cannot determine from the company files to which I have access where the company's banking assets are.  Given that Master  Liien Boshra is deceased, I cannot very well ask him for the particulars.  Would it be possible for your office to locate any banking assets of Balfor's?”

“That can be arranged, certainly.”

“Requiring another form?”

Revnan laughed.  “Yes, a limited power of representation, in fact.  Banking clans are rightly touchy about their clients' private information, so a legal document authorizing one of us to act on your behalf will smooth things considerably.”

Fixer had been skimming through the station's business regulations during the discussion and another avenue of inquiry presented itself.  “What about contracts?  I believe recurring service contracts are expected to be filed with central depository?”

“Indeed they are.  Shall I see what contracts Balfor's has on file?”

“Please, that would be most appreciated.”

More notes went onto the datapad.  “Excellent.  Master Fixer, it has been wonderful getting to know you.”  She pulled a mem-stick from the datapad and held it out.  “Here are the notes I've taken during our discussion, along with my office's comm-codes.  I'll be getting all the necessary forms and files sent to you shortly.”

Fixer took the mem-stick and tucked it away.  “Thank you very much, Mistress Revnan.  I am fortunate to have such a helpful gee-bee as yourself as my liasion.”

“Remember, if you have any questions about business operations abord the station, just comm my office.”  With that, the Sullustian waves good-bye and drifted away with the dock-side traffic.

**

“Doc, I don't believe you fully grasp the situation.  Republic and Imperial laws are very clear on this point – a criminal is not allowed to benefit monetarily from his crimes.  This has been repeatedly upheld in court decisions involving crime holo-mentaries and holo-dramas.  Victims and their families are recompensed, as are other involved parties, but the criminals aren't.”

Doc X stirred his drink and sipped it before responding.  They were sitting in the small admin lounge, which boasted one of the better views on the station.  In two directions, viewers were treated to “up” and “down” views along the spine of the station.  The views along the crossing axis were along the main habitation ring of the station, still referred to as “spinward” and “anti-spin.”  The tradition had persisted despite the fact Outland Station had not relied on spin-induced gravity in thousands of years.

“Marshal Xola, unless things have changed significantly in recent years, one has to be found guilty before a tribunal of having committed a crime before one is labeled a criminal.  At this point, Master Fixer has yet to even be charged with a crime, let alone tried and found guilty.  If you think it is your duty to assign guilt before you even have more than a shred of circumstantial evidence, then I would suggest it is you who does not fully grasp the situation.

“What I am seeing from you right now is nothing more than the desire to slam closed a case based on absolutely nothing, condemning a sentient being to dissolution at what amounts to your whim.  At this moment, that gee-bee is struggling to do his job and has taken on the responsibility of managing a small, struggling business.  A business, I might add, that generates revenue for my station.  My client liasion told me that in their interview, he told her he had assumed the business had to continue here on the station.  As someone who voluntarily put his life on the line to defend those laws you just referenced, I will look you in the eye and tell you I am offended, and deeply, at the cavalier way in which you are assigning blame in this case due to sentient-prejudice.”

The marshal made a sputtering attempt at a defense, but was overridden.

“Your office makes use of virtually no droids whatsoever.  When you arrived in this post,you reduced droid staffing by forty-seven percent within the first month and have since reduced it by seventy-two percent.  The remaining droids are all of non-anthropomorphic models.  In fact, three of your current droids are actually down-grades from more competent humanoid models which were originally in use.

“I really don't care why you hate droids, Xola.  Maybe your homestead was occupied and destroyed by Sep legions.  Maybe you were owned by some crime-lord whose protocol droid had a thing for abusing organics.  It really doesn't matter.  What does matter is that you realize Imperial Decrees apply to everyone equally, not just at your whim.”

Xola set her glass down on the low table between them and stood.  “I can see I won't be getting anywhere with this discussion.”

“When you walk into a situation with the attitude that you are the absolute final authority and are the Emperor's right hand, then you'll find you won't get very far at all.”

**







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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #9 on: November 05, 2010, 07:52:36 PM »
Got 145 words written yesterday - out of 1667 needed.  Got NONE written today.  But over the last couple of days, I *have* studied my craft and did some major organizing work.  For example, I now have a PLOT!  VILLAINS!  DISASTERS!  More to come as things develop...  Thanks for the encouragement, folks!

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« Reply #10 on: November 06, 2010, 01:04:56 PM »
**

The /Minori Petal/ had begun life as a bulk freighter, designed around several large cargo holds intended to carry hundreds of standard cargo containers.  Somewhere along the way, a family of Gran merchants had acquired her and decided there was more money to be made running a casino that running freight.  With that thought in mind, a team of engineers gutted the holds, opening them up into a multi-level mall that catered to the galaxy's gamblers.  If a game could be built into a ship, it went into the /Petal/.  A combination holo-theater and entertainment stage and restaurant dominated one corner of the casino's lower level, with smaller food and drink kiosks scattered around the upper levels.  The forward-most holds had been converted into a small luxury hotel and an exclusive high-stakes casino.

Security was handled by family members and was quite tight and unforgiving.

**

“Ho, Fixer!”

The droid in question pivoted the flattened dome that served as its head to locate the speaker.  A male Devaronian stood several meters away, an arm raised in greeting.  Clinging to his other arm was a human female dressed in what Fixer understood to be “distracting” clothing.  Fixer raised a manipulator arm in return.

“Hello, Liiem.  You are looking well this evening.  May I assume the /Gambit/ continues to function properly?”

“Fixer, you card, you wound me!  Hey, but I tell ya -” the Devaronian leaned close to Fixer and the droid was able to detect significant alcohol on the organic's breath. “- you helped me out on her right, you did.  Oh!  Nixie, this is Fixer, one of the best amateur engine mechaincs in the galaxy.  If he were any better, they'd have to pay him.”

Fixer worked its main grasper with a slight metallic /clak-clak/ noise.  “Yes.  As it is, I am forced to chisel creds from barely-skilled card-players such as Liiem.

The lady giggled and Liiem laughed out loud, slapping the tall droid's cylindrical body.  “You're a good 'un, Fixer.  Nixie's staying with me on the /Gambit/, now.  You got her fixed up and Nixie got her cleaned up.  So you out looking for side-jobs or out just enjoying an evening not tied to the ship?”

“I am here to see what a ship dedicated to gambling looks like, gee-bee.  I must confess to having been surprised when the crew told me about the /Minori Petal/.  Now that my duty-shift is over, I had to come see it for myself.  I must say, I am impressed.  The design team has been careful to conceal all evidence of the former deck layout of the ship.”

“Fixer, wow, you are probably the best-spoken droid I've ever seen.”

/clak-clak/.  “Thank you, ma'am.  I believe it to be due to my surroundings.  The /Pride/'s crew is rather diverse in skills, backgrounds, and languages and my interactions with them appears to have enhanced my vocabulary and grammar.  In fact, one of the crew told me last week that I almost made a joke.”

The organics laughed at the droid's humor.  “So, really, are you here to play cards?”

“As the gee-bee said, ma'am.  With my shift completed, my time is my own and a chance like this is not one to be missed.  I was pleased to learn they do allow droids aboard to gamble.  Not all establishments are as enlightened in that regard.”

“Yeah, babe.  I saw him get almost physically chucked out of a place on Ganin Two.”

Fixer's fine-manipulator arms rippled in sequence, the droid's personal version of a shudder.  “The brutes were far more rough than was necessary and certainly seemed to relish the chance to show off their violent attitudes.  Cheater, indeed!  That is against my programming.”

“Well and so.  Did you hear about the Ylim?”

“I did.  A very high-stakes table and invitation only, I am given to understand.”

“As you say, my friend.  I got an invitation to it and the buy-in and stakes are more than anything old Klinn has ever hosted.  Now, I got my stakes requirement met, just barely, but I'm still trying to arrange the buy-in.  Fact is, I was hoping I'd run into you.”

Liiem had managed to steer their group into a quiet spot along one wall beside a Quinarian frond palm that seemed to grow up through the floor.  He looked around as if to make sure no one was listening to them before he continued.

“See, I knew the Ylim wasn't like to invite you in on the game.  I know about him and he's not keen on mechanicals playing.  I also know you are probably one of the few players I know who is likely to afford the buy-in.  So I had a bit of a business proposition I wanted to run at you.”  He glanced around again, smiling nervously and showing the mouthful of pointed teeth that made his race infamous.  “See, I own a small business on-station that handles ship's-services and the like.  Several droids, rented workspace and all.  I hate to do it, but I'm interested in offering Balfor's up as collateral to secure a loan to cover the buy-in fee.  I'll pay the loan back with interest, of course, but no one wants to just hand a gee-bee a stack of creds like that without feeling like they've got something to hold onto.”

Fixer idly identified the music being played by the casino's public-address system as the Fourteenth Symphony of Thac'navo – a rather calm and soothing piece for most organics.  The droid took a moment to calculate the credits it had currently stored tucked away in its shell.  “Master Liiem, I am honored you would consider me as a business partner in this.  How much is the buy-in fee?”  The Devaronian named a figure that was significantly over half of the creds Fixer had on hand.  Then he offered a twenty-five percent interest payment.

“Fixer, it isn't just the card-game.  It's about connections.  The Ylim has people everywhere doing everything.  Eating the crumbs from his table would make that kind of investment look like a mining camp whore's pocket change.  I've seen how you work and I know I can trust you with the paper on Balfor's.  You are always honest and fair.”  He licked his lips nervously, a gesture at odds with the otherwise predatory cast of his face.  “It's a golden opportunity for me, Fixer.”

The droid considered the proposition for a few moments.  Making the loan meant the evening would require more shrewd play and would likely result in a shorter evening.  Fixer didn't really mind – games could frequently turn into gossip sessions and those frequently resulted in job-offers or leads.  Just as Liiem had said, it was often about more than just the card-game.

“May I see the documentation you've drawn up, Master Liiem?”  Fixer clipped a data-cord into a scomp-port and offered the other end to the Devaronian, who hooked it into a datapad.  The droid scanned it quickly and verified through the station's comm-board that Balfor's was in fact a legitimately-registered business.  A surprising side-note surfaced when Fixer calculated the value of the droids listed in the lein at more than twice what the organic was wanting to borrow.  “You are prepared to file this now?”

“Yes, unless you want to make any changes to anything.  I just used a standard lein form.”

“No, I find it acceptable.”  Fixer retrieved the agreed-upon amount from the internal pharmaceutical dispensers it used as its strongbox.  “Very well.  I have affixed my personal mark to the document.”

“Oh, excellent!”  Liiem tapped the screen of the 'pad.  “There, it is filed with the station's purser's office.  Thanks, Fixer – I knew I could count on you!”

Fixer watched as the two made their way forward, toward the more exclusive area of the ship.  Once they were lost in the throngs of other gamblers, Fixer turned and continued its own slow circuit of the casino, calculating how much such a conversion must have cost the ship's owners.

**

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #11 on: November 08, 2010, 09:19:27 AM »
No story to read just yet, only a boring update.

I've cleared 11,000 words as of last night's session.  We've only got one puter on the net right now and it isn't the one I use for writing!  So I'm making serious inroads into this 50k-word novel business, only 675 words or so behind where I need to be  - which is MOST excellent.  And I have a LOT of notes that have yet to be translated into fiction form, which will account for a substantial jump in word-count once they are put to paper.  The goal is to NOT EDIT this month, but I find myself doing *some* just to keep things straight in my own head.  I've never attempted - let alone *organized* - a novel before, so this is all new to me.  Plus, I'll reread sections to get myself back "in" the story and will see places I need to add a little for better flow.  That's going to make my posts really REALLY challenging to read if I end up posting dailies as I write them.  But really, I think that's the best way for me to hand it to you guys on *my* end.

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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #12 on: November 08, 2010, 12:15:09 PM »

I'm not entirely sure what to think about things at the moment.  The /Minori Petal/ is docked at the station, and that's bringing in a very tidy flow of credits, even if it is stressing the station's facilities just a little.  We'll survive, we always do.

What concerns me more is having a dead body on board the station.  One of the gamblers turned up dead on the Petal, to be discovered by a medical droid.  That has set Xola off on a witch-hunt, especially since the dead gee-bee owed the droid money and the droid didn't waste any time in filing claimancy on the marker.  All legally filed and so on, but Xola has a special hatred of droids.  I'm afraid this may not end well.  It puts the station in an interesting position – as a business owner operating on the station, the droid now enjoys certain benefits, including legal-aid services.

Naturally, I'm interested in seeing the business continue in operation right here on the station, not just because we receive business fees and rental revenue, but the local merchants benefit, as well.  I've spoken with the client-services liasion who handles the Balfor's account and asked her to 'hand-hold' the new owner along the way.  We need to retain all the businesses we can and grow them as much as possible.  Having a murder happen in such a small community is very definitely a destabilizing influence.

Chief Killian believes someone has breached our computer security and released an extensively detailed map of the station to the general public as a gaming supplement.  After looking over the product myself, I have to say he may be onto something.  Even worse, it looks as if unsavory elements may have made use of the information in the product in committing this murder.  If so, Legal assures me we could pursure additional charges such as defamation of character against whoever actually provided the deckplans.  Assuming we are ever able to find out who did it.

Manufacturing says they've had an inquiry about shipping container availability.  Unfortunately, they can't begin production just yet, as the R&D workspace had to be hastily closed up and evacuated to house a refugee population.  What R&D space we have did manage to turn out some sample modular building units, intended to allow the rapid establishment of dirtside habitations.  They are still scale-models at the moment, but the lads are looking into ways to enlarge them to usable size.

And so it goes – I have a murder onstation and have to think past that to making sure my R&D group is on-track to turning out items for the station to market.

**

“Sir, this is Rusty.  I think we may have a problem.”

Fixer froze in place as the small droid's words came over its internal com-link.  “I sincerely hope not, Rusty.  I am already dealing with a number of challenging situations.  What problem do you think we may have?”

“Sir, I believe someone broke into Docking Bay Seventeen while the lads and I were working on the /Kitara's Pride/.  I have to confess to being unsure as to the accuracy of this, given the poor maintenance condition of the bay coupled with my failure to make a scan-recording of the environs before leaving.”
[sounds too much like Fixer!]
I confess I am unsure of this, with the bay in such poor condition.  I also did not make...”

“Was anything damaged or taken?”

“No, sir – at least, I do not believe so - but the computer was not in the same position as it was earlier in the day.  I believe someone was slicing our system.”

“Interesting.  Did Master Liiem maintain sensitive information on the system?”

“I don't know, sir.  Master Liiem rather strongly discouraged any sort of curiousity.”

“That fails to surprise me.  Very well, it seems you should begin making visual scan-docs of the bay before you leave.  In the meantime, have you considered the possibility of skill-pack upgrades?”

“Sir?  No, sir, the subject has never come up.”

“I see.  So your programming is essentially industrial standard?”

“Essentially so, sir.  I like to think I have improved myself as much as I could on my own, but with Master Liiem, it wasn't exactly a priority.”

“Understood.  I will say I am not shy about upgrades, both professional and personal.  Chief Z'zik has been good to me in that regard.  If you can think of any upgrades that would benefit operations at Balfor's, please let me know.”

“Of course, sir.  I will think on it and see what I can come up with.”


**

Fixer rolled into DB-17 and was pleased to find all five droids industriously attacking the piles of rubbish that had accumulated.  The Treadwell spotted Fixer first and waved three of its spindly appendages in greeting.  The oil bath and maintenance routines had boosted the performance of each member of the motley gang by at least sixty percent.  In return, they had attacked the mounds of debris with the fervency of reprieved convicts.

Rusty straightened from a selection of detritus laid out by the ASP-7 for cataloging and waved with a datapad.  “Hello, Master Fixer.  We don't have any scheduled clients for the rest of the day, so I thought  we should get started on this.  I don;t want to sound discouraging, sir, but this is going to take a long time to put right.”

Fixer slowly pivoted in place, conducting a full sensor-sweep of the bay.  It appeared Rusty's crew had started with the office and began working outward from there, aiming for the bay's entry-door.  Rusty noted the direction of Fixer's attention and confirmed the droid's suspicion.

“I thought perhaps having a clean office would be best, sir.  That way, we can tell if someone does come in again.  Plus, it will give you a place to work while we get the rest of the bay in shape.”  The little droid indicated a stack of corro-plast cartons.  “Everything that was not purely garbage went into one of those, sir.  That way, you can take your time to process the office contents and evaluate them.  Master Liiem never allowed a droid into the office, but you said 'this place,' sir, and the office is part of that, so I took the liberty of starting in there.”

/clak-clak/.  “Your logic is unfaultable, Rusty.  Have you made arrangements for beginning the removal of the debris?”

“I have requested pricing from the Maintenance section of the station, sir.  Unfortunately, given the degree of integration of garbage, recyclables, and salvageables, an exact quote was impossible.  I've estimated garbage at seventy percent, recyclables at twenty percent, and salvage at ten percent.  Unfortunately, sir, that represents approximately three months of income to pay for removal.”

“Oh, dear.  And that would also require a completed sorting of materials, yes?”

“Yes, sir.  One option the technician suggested was a tow-box.  Maintenance can deliver one to us and we can fill it as we sort.  Then, when it is full, we call them and they tow it away, leaving us fresh empty in its place.”

Fixer watched as the ASP carefully maneuvered a long section of drive-shielding out of a pile and laid it out for inspection.  The end was raggedly torn off, rendering it unfit for reuse, but the station's smelters would pay to take it and break it down for reuse.   Fixer's circuits tingled very much like they had during the times when the med-bay would be flooded with casualties.  It seemed an overwhelming task.

“Is the tow-box option more reasonable?”

“Well, sir, it actually works out to cost about five times as much as a single load-out.  The good part is that Maintenance charges by the tow-box rather than as a single lump-sum.”

/clak-clak/.  “I see.  And with the tow-boxes, we don't have to find a place to store the garbage.  How quickly are you generating enough debris to fill a tow-box?”

Rusty stood silently, watching the other four work for a minute.  “Assuming a consistent rate of progress and an equivalent ratio of debris,  I believe we will average slightly less than one tow-box per day, sir.”

“Indeed.  And our income will cover this?”

“Yes, sir.  Just barely, but we aren't exactly spending a lot of creds on anything else.”

“Very well.  Set up the first box and we will start filling it.  I shall authorize the funds to be paid.”  Fixer watched as Rusty moved to inspect the array of materials the ASP and Treadwell had laid out.  In short order, the items were rearranged into two stacks at Rusty's directions.

“I mentioned upgrades during our conversation earlier today that would help the company.  Balfor's needs a manager to handle routine business during times when I am not on the station.  Given my duty-station, these times will be quite frequent and prolonged.  Based on my observations aboard both military vessels and the /Pride/, it seems that the gee-bee who is most knowledgeable should be put in charge.  Since you are already managing the direct operations of Balfor's, I believe you would be an excellent candidate for being made local business manager.  Naturally, that would require software upgrades, if you are interested.”

Rusty was slow to answer.  “May I think about it first, sir?”

“Certainly.  I am here until Marshal Xola's investigation into Master Liiem's death is finished and she releases me from what has amounted to station arrest.”

**

This is only a test.  None of this is really happening.  Fixer's sensors did their best to convince the droid that the events were, in fact, real.  The world took on the appearance of two overlapping holographic signals, washing each other out, until one stabilized. 

Fixer was in a casino and the patrons were ignoring the droid's efforts to join in a game of sabacc.  Finally, one of the players turned and poured his drink on Fixer's body-shell and the other players burst into raucous laughter.  In the corner, almost invisible, a protocol droid and an angry Twi'lek female watched.  Fixer triggered a microstatic discharge to shake the liquid loose and moved away from the obnoxious crowd.

Out of the crowd ahead of the droid stepped a hooded figure who leveled a blaster pistol at the droid.  The protocol droid and the Twi'lek stood on either side of him.  Fixer had no way to go around the figure, so the droid stopped in its tracks and waited.

The crowd thickened and people filled in the space between the gunman and the droid.

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« Reply #13 on: November 08, 2010, 12:16:23 PM »

“I do need proof of the ownership transfer, sir.  Just to safeguard Master Liiem's interests.”

“Naturally.”  Fixer held out a flimsi for the other, resplendent with a rotating holo of a stylized Outland Station affixed.  Taking it, the small droid retreated to the office for a few moments before coming back and handing the document back to Fixer.

“There you go, sir.  Everything seems to be in order, so I suppose we are yours to command, now.”  [slumped droid]

**

The heavy-labor ASP droid whirred to life, startling a yelp out of Trav.  With its servomotors in its legs audibly groaning, it stumped its way among the debris to the office door and stopped, obviously waiting for something.

Fixer watched the droid for several seconds before turning to address the small pit droid.  “What is it waiting on?”

“I have no idea.  I had just finished transmitting the required ownership updates to the other droids and it fired up on its own.”

“Is that normal behavior for this unit?”

“No, sir, not at all.  Occasionally Master Liiem hooks it up to his computer when he brings it in  for some sort of maintenance, but just moving to the office and standing there on it's own?  No, sir, that isn't normal at all.”

From across the bay, Trav commented, “Well, it almost got the bugger fried, Fixer's droid or not.  That one might actually need a memory-wipe, Fixer.”

The droid raised an arm in acknowledgement.  “I shall certainly keep that possibility in mind, Trav.  I do apologize for my … minion?  Ward?  Yes, for the behavior of my new ward.”

“What?  Look, Fixer, buddy, you aren't responsible for what this lot does.  You just took over ownership and haven't had a chance to vet out their quirks.”

“As you say, Trav.  However, when a new spacer signs on with a captain, is the captain not then responsible for the behavior of the spacer beginning at that point?”

“Aw, c'mon.  That's different, Fixer.”

“Please explain how it is so.”

Trav opened his mouth to respond, then settled for kicking a pile of debris.  “It just is, that's all.”

“I disagree.  The moment Chief Z'zik acquired me, had I then undertaken actions that caused damage to Dingo, Mistress Dane would have held Chief Z'zik liable for the damages.”

Trav again started to say something, only to catch himself.  Hooking his thumbs through his belt, he looked up at the bay ceiling.  “Ah, no harm done, buddy.”  He looked over at Fixer, who was obviously waiting for a specific response.  He grinned.  “Ok, apology accepted.”

Fixer turned its photo-receptors back to the small droid.  “You said, 'when he brings it' about the computer.  Does the office not have a dedicated terminal?”

“Com-only, sir.  Master Liiem made a habit of carrying the computer terminal with him.  There is a stash of mem-sticks that he uses as back-ups.”

[tie into other scene here]

**

[en route to /Pride/]

“Not sure we're gonna make it by shift-change, buddy.”

“I believe you may be right about that, Trav.  It would be nice if the station used the newer J'mesh style transport trams.  These round turbo-shafts can not handle the shapes we have to move.  Even a skip-tug would be a most welcome ride right now.”

“First time I've ever seen you worrying about something.  Kinda entertaining, actually.”  Trav looked over at the small droid that had served as the leader of the group Fixer had acquired.  “Hey, little guy.  Aren't you a pit droid?”

“Yes, Master Trav.  I am an Otoga 214 model, skilled as a mechanic's helper and general maintenance droid.”

“Oh, hey – I'm a swoop-racing fan.  You ever work a swoop circuit?”

“Not to my knowledge, sir.  The first purchase I remember had me working on an ore freighte, but  I believe I had a memory wipe by the freighter owner, to be honest.  I was there a couple of decades before the freighter was lost in a bizarre navigation mishap.  I cobbled together enough of the ship's power supply to keep my internals from running down and several of us hibernated until a salvage crew found us six years later.  They didn't need us, so we got sold off almost immediately.  Master Farzel bought us up right quick.  A few of the others managed to get sold off before Master Liiem cut his deal with Master Farzel and bought the rest of us.  We've been Balfor's ever since then, just over three years now.”

“Farzel bought you, hunh?”

“Oh, you know him, Master Trav?”

“Ha!  Not exactly.  'Farzel's Fabulous Finds' – I've done business with him a couple of times, so I know of him.  I doubt he knows who I am.”

Fixer looked at the motley crew of droids.  “So all five of you were on the ore freighter, working together?”

“That we were, sir.  One big happy disfunctional family.”

Fixer's four arms rippled.  “That is … not something easily endured.  I spent over a year in a scrapyard, my existance forgotten by the yard's owner.  That was not a pleasant time.”

The little droid patted Fixer's body-shell.  “I'd say your sistuation has improved, sir.”

/clack-clack/.  “Yes, it has.  Most assuredly it has.”





**
--insert per notes--
The Mandalorian stood in a muted clatter of armor plates.

 
Fixer was rolling through one of the crew passageways on the /Pride/ when Aistly, the chief navigator, stepped out of her room.

“Heard you bought into a mess, mate.”

“I am beginning to believe that is an altogether too accurate assessment of the situation in which I find myself.”

“Well, the whole crew's pullin' for you.  Figure any station with a Mando as security chief will have matters sussed out right in no time.”  The human looked around and leaned close.  “You repeat it and I'll deny it, but the Captain told Z'zik the /Pride/ won't lift without you.”

“Th-th-that's a m-m-most welcome sentiment, gee-bee.  I would not feel myself to be worth that much of the Captain's time.”

“Hey, you're our mate, Fixer, not hired help.  We're here for you, anything you need.”

/clack-clack/.  “The only things I can identify that I need would be Master Liiem's actual killer and a small desktop computer terminal.”

Aistly blinked in surprise and laughed.  “Quite a list there, mate.  Runs from pocket change to untouchable.  Why the terminal?”

“Oh, well, the business I have acquired lacks a terminal in the office.  The former owner was reportedly in the habit of keeping the computer with him at all times.  All I currently have is a collection of mem-sticks that I hope are backup data files on the company's operations and finances.  I should like to have a terminal I can dedicate to business use and leave in the Balfor office.”

“Oh, roger.  Making more sense now.”

“I suppose I could order one easily enough from a supplier on-station.  It just seems I am constantly on the move now.”

“Isn't that the way of it.  Look, I remember someone had a little desk-jobbie they were wanting clear of for cheap.  Let me work out who it was and I'll put you two together quickest.”

“Aistly, that would be most wonderful.”

“Hey, least I can do for a mate, Fixer.  Can't hand that murderer over to clear you, so I'll do what I can on the computer for you.  Got a date with a truly stellar gee-bee to take in a show over on the /Petal/ or I'd chat longer.  Comm if you need me!”

Fixer watched the human cut through the cargo bay and out onto the docks.  Mates, she'd said.  Fixer had heard the crew call each other that regularly, but had never thought the appellation might ever be used with itself.  Fixer studied the feeling flooding its circuits and decided it was definitely a positive thing.  Well, except for that area around the holotat emitters – that was still annoying, but the droid was slowly getting used to it.

“Master Fixer?  This is Revnan, your client-liasion with station-services.  One of our accountants has made some headway in locating Balfor accounts.”


“Master Fixer, thank you for coming by.”

Fixer raised a manipulator arm in greeting.  “It was encouraging to hear your accountant had made progress in tracking down Balfor accounts, Mistress Revnan.  I would like to have as much of this business taken care of as quickly as possible, so that once Marshal Xola is finished with me, we are able to leave the station.”

“We understand much of our client-base is of a transient nature, Master Fixer.  If you'd like, we can step into the conference room and I'll let Navvi show you what he has come up with.”

She showed the droid through a doorway into a room where a Siniteen male sat at a small conference table.  Fixer immediately thought of the Siniteen engineer and part-time tattoo artist, Hannen, who had designed the holotat rotating in an alcove just below the droid's head-dome.

“Master Fixer, this is Master Navvi, one of our staff's best accountants.  Navvi, Fixer is the new owner of Balfor Ship Services.”

Navvi stood and sketched a slight bow.  “A pleasure to meet you, sir.”

“And you, gee-bee.  If I may ask a personal question, are you acquainted with Hannen in Engineering?”

Navvi's pinched face wrinkled its way into a smile.  “You could say so, sir.  She is my sister.”

“Indeed.  I found her to be a true artist and a pleasure to work with.”

“Thank you.  May I assume that to be her work you are displaying?”

“It is.  I must say, during the design session, she made me look at my opinions and perhaps even my prejudices in ways I had never truly considered.  A very remarkable gentle-being.  I am most pleased with her work.”

Navvi smiled and waved a hand toward the computer system where he'd been sitting.  “I shall endeavor to maintain my family's reputation in your eyes, sir.”  He keyed in a brief command and a holo-field in the table came to life.  “I grant you gave me very little with which to work, but I do understand the circumstance in which you found yourself.  Fortunately, you were willing to grant a limited legal representation under which our team worked.  With that in hand and the information on the company you were able to provide, we uncovered seven accounts tied in some way to Balfor.  Of these, four accounts appear to be inactive with zero balances and a long history of inactivity.  Two more were emptied of funds several days ago, but appear to otherwise be active accounts with sporadic histories of activity.  Finally, I believe the last account to be the primary one for the business.  There remains a positive balance of a modest sum and a regular history of deposits and withdrawals.”

Navvi entered a string of commands and the display enlarged and divided into seven separate fields, each one displaying the most recent history of one of the accounts.

Fixer indicated the two that had been emptied a few days ago.  “That would most likely be where Master Liiem withdrew the funds to cover part of his stake in the sabacc game.  I wonder where he acquired the remainder of the funds.”


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Re: NaNoWriMo 2010
« Reply #14 on: November 17, 2010, 09:39:01 AM »
I haven't been keeping the forum posted on my writing progress - sorry!!  I also opted to stop posting my dailies, as they can be...difficult and/or frustrating to read, as I am not writing them in order.  Plus, I'm making notes for editing later for stuff already written, but writing on as if the changes were already made.  (IE: "Mandalorian" has become "Cellic," so any time Security Chief Killian is described *now,* it is along the lines of "fully-armored Cellic," and so forth.)

Did want to let everyone know this story is ALIVE!!!

Yesterday's output - 4,646 words.
current total - 26,137 words

SO I am over halfway to my goal of 50k words by the 30th of Nov.  There's a lot going on - Fixer is growing as a "person" as his environment forces him to, dealing with being involved in a murder, dealing with prejudice, and learning to run a business.  My readers claim I'm on the right track, so I press on.  Plus, it is honestly just a whole lot of FUN writing it!  I *am* having to work at it now - not so much work to make the words happen, as yesterday shows, but work to make sure I am answering the questions the story is asking and maintaining a consistent theme and tone in the work.  My stack of blank notecards is shrinking as my stack of scribbled-on cards grows.

And yes - I do plan to shop it for publication once I finish it and edit it.