I'd be interested to see the the hand drawn image JL!
The latest one is ok, but you need to try to trim off the edges a bit better, either that or increase the size of the image while you are working on it, then flatten it and then reduce the size. Saying that, your composition is good, and as I do not know your age or experience in using digital art programs I'd encourage you to keep practising and posting here. you will improve the more you produce.