Kualan....Bravo....Bravo!!! (rapturous applause...standing ovation).,,
That was......AWESOME!!!
First off the writing was spot on, the way you switched between scenes, the dialogue all built excitement, and the conclusion was the perfect cliffhanger. Like the others have said, the Rancor scene was fantastic, especially the way Luminara dealt with thr beast! Like the way you cut the scene at the brutal part, letting the reader use his/her imagination.
Secondly the graphics... It seems as though you put extra effort into creative camera angles all of which create a cinematic experience. The shot of the shuttle approaching the station was a favourite... Man I could do with your program!!!
You are going from strength to strength...I thoroughly enjoyed every word and image. Definitely my favourite chapter so far!.