Kualan,
Sorry I'm late to the party...being that I'm the moderator for this Forum I apologise.
I really admire your skills. This is a totally professional piece of work, from the writing to the presentation. Every part of your art is polished and I cannot help being really impressed. You have so many strengths, I really enjoy reading your work, and get quite absorbed from the moment I begin reading to the last word. I love your fight scenes, the reader gets a great feeling of what's going on even if there are no words in the set of images...very clever!
In this episode I love your inclusion of the Personal yacht.
Top notch work and jewel in the Imperial Shipyards crown.