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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #15 on: April 05, 2011, 10:14:18 AM »
Excellent work HFK.... it's great seeing new faces on the forum.

My only criticism is the text clarity as your background makes it hard to read. You should try to add talk bubbles using a program like PowerPoint or use a darker background.

Keep up the great work!
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #16 on: April 05, 2011, 12:20:27 PM »
okay i'll try thanks  :)
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #17 on: April 05, 2011, 05:24:44 PM »
episode 4
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #18 on: April 05, 2011, 05:25:32 PM »
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #19 on: April 06, 2011, 12:02:51 AM »
Nice work HFK... I like this genre, it's great fun.

I'd like to see this develop visually, why not look at my web site www.xwa-webcomic.com, there is a section called Download a Diorama, you'll find plenty of backdrop material there...

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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #20 on: April 06, 2011, 04:08:57 AM »
thanks hb94
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #21 on: April 06, 2011, 07:14:14 PM »
sorry it's so late
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #22 on: April 06, 2011, 07:15:16 PM »
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #23 on: April 07, 2011, 02:24:26 PM »
You should have more body guards on the show. mayby some nice Battle droids, ya know, something that can be replaced GHan
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #24 on: April 07, 2011, 02:28:01 PM »
thanks for showing my DC-17 (interchangable system) with a sniper atachment :)
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #25 on: April 07, 2011, 02:47:49 PM »
no problemo, it was cool
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #26 on: April 07, 2011, 06:05:22 PM »
sorry no show tonight :(
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #27 on: April 08, 2011, 02:59:17 PM »
here
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #28 on: April 08, 2011, 03:00:12 PM »
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Re: Ackbar Tonight
« Reply #29 on: April 11, 2011, 01:18:08 PM »
here....
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