Spudd, that bike shop is really awesome! All the bikes are really good looking, makes me want to go buy some swoops and make my own gang! The shop itself is really well done too, I love the fire extinguisher and the battle axe next to each other, two essential items for any gang hideout! I think it would look really cool if on the floor, you made little blotches of gloss black that would look like oil leaks! Not sure if they use motor oil in the SW Universe, but whatever, haha. Keep up the good work!
Oh also on your tank way back on pg 15 (i think), it looks pretty good, but the camo kinda hides some of the sculpting detail (who'd have thought camo hides detail? Haha), so if you want to bring that back out and show off the sculpt of the tank, give it a little black wash. But, if you like it the way it is (since camo is meant to break up outlines after all), leave it!