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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #30 on: June 20, 2013, 12:43:44 AM »
these are very deep writings Blake i am seriously impressed mate ,can't wait to read the next few..
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #31 on: June 20, 2013, 07:20:52 AM »
Thanks Jay! means alot :)

That last one about the CIS..very interesting to write. It was eye opening..but I still don't like em. ha ha ha
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #32 on: July 27, 2013, 10:08:23 AM »
I really enjoyed the poetic take on SW Fanfic, solid stuff brother, hope to read more in a bit.  keep it coming!

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Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/26/13
« Reply #33 on: August 26, 2013, 07:18:06 PM »
The following 3 entries are drafts I am writing for a friend on Deviant Art. He wanted a doomed battalion that gets utterly wiped out when scouting the planet for Republic involvement.

Here is a transmission I wrote to get started:

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The following is an transmissions sent from Sergeant Rho during the opening hours of the Serenaos campaign.

"Thirty Th..d Re...ent command, this Sergeant Rho! This mission is ....lete! Talon wing ... annihilated! Contrail battalion is in disarray! The shadow teams .....ounted for! Two Squads holding! Unsure if da..age to jam.... array was sufficient! Searching for Nat...al Guard leadership if any have survived mass ...cutions. Coup within mi..tary.

Please advise! Req..sting full re.......ents. Beaches lost. Heavy ....es. PLEASE .....  US! Full force nes.....

...Not Rebels.................funded terrorists!"
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Here is what he sent me:

Alright here goes:
Planetary system: Serenaos - Nightfall
Friendlies: 3rd Regiment – Air Division (Approx 300 Clone Paratroopers) Along with experimental LAAT/i Stealth variants and Phase I Shadow troopers.

Hostiles: The Brotherhood (Terrorist Separatist sympathisers) and suspected Droid forces.

Objective: Para-drop several clicks behind the defense lines of the Serenan docking zone and rendezvous with the National Guard if there force remains at the bays' defence point, lethal force is authorised if met by terrorist forces. Secure/Fortify the beachhead. Locate and destory the communication jammer disrupting Republic orbital scans, and standby to be releaved as soon as the diplomatic vessel (Consular class corvette) is dispatched. If the communication jammer remains intact the invasion force will be deployed.


Outcome: Deployment Gunships detected and shot down. Para troopers scattered within enemy lines - Entire unit suspected MIA/KIA. Republic Acclamators pull closer to the system and the Invasion, under the commander of Colonel-Lieutenant Telos, is launched.
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #34 on: August 26, 2013, 07:19:06 PM »
     In the early stages of the Clone War, it became necessary for the senate to create multiple smaller sub committees. These committees and commissions are to focus their efforts on various elements of the war including appropriations, performance reviews, new military reforms, and treaty arrangements. The Senate War Commission was established for the purpose of evaluating great victories and defeats of the Clone Army weighing the ever growing costs. Padme Amidala has been instrumental in its creation, believing that a hybrid of citizen representatives and high ranking officers are necessary to provide these checks of power, thus bringing balance to the system.

    The following testimony was given by, CT 1043, newly promoted Captain Rho. His account is that of the Third Regiment during the opening stages of the Battle for Serenaos.

-Admiral Yularen: "Good morning Captain Rho. We appreciate you taking time away from your army group in order to provide us a better insight into the happenings during the opening hours of the Siege of Serenaos. Please take your time and spare us no details. We are here for your testament."

- CT 1043:Aka Captain Rho; "Thank you Admiral Yularen for your gesture. Good morning Senators, representatives, and chiefs of war. I am Sergea.. Captain Rho of the Old Third Regiment, Air division. You have surely read the preliminary pages of the situation reports. The 300 para's of the 3rd were to disembark during the setting sun, using the blinding light against our back to our advantage. We would then make our approach under the cover of darkness, secure docks, beachheads, then rendevous with the National Guard forces. The next phase was to locate and disable any jammers or arrays, lastly going into standby positions for the arrival of a diplomatic consular class cruiser.

This is what we all know...
The end result..we all know..
How it happened, why it occured; That is why I am here."

(CT 1043 pauses, sipping from his glass of water. His jaw visibly clenching.)

"We mounted up after the rally and disembarked as scheduled; The 3rd is after all, "Never late." We departed with 300 men from Contrail Battalion, divided among 20 gunships. 15 men per ship due to the accompaniment of heavy-mobile anti-infantry guns, martars, and speeder bikes. Two test gunships also made the drop; retrofitted with test stealth tech carrying a pair of shadow trooper squads. They mostly kept to themselves.

Riding down was serene. Always silent..quiet before the storm. The gunship wing, "Talon" brought us down through the atmosphere nearly 72 kilometers off the coast. The flight pattern was spread wide as we dove to avoid visible signs of our arriving presence. Those pilots were damn good, pulling the noses up about 7 or 10 meters from the white foam of the swelling seas. After leveling off the pilots opened the thin slats decorating the thick side doors. In an instant, the dark belly of the larky revealed brilliant orange/purple darkening skies..beneath us a charcoal dark blue bay. Such contrast provided one of the most beautiful drops I've ever made.."

(Ct 1043 pauses. A slight grin becomes stifled by an apparent pain. The clone's posture curves as his head lowers to wipe his eye. His index and middle finger then squeeze the bridge of his nose.)

""Tighten up lads!" our captain barked. The slats whined as they slammed then locked shut. The whir and rumbling of engines heavy in the cabin. The squads began talking amongst one another. Loosening up ..the brief from command seemed short, cut, easy even. I creapt up the latter behind the cockpit. The pale beach growing whiter in the distance. Its glow becoming stark as we grew near. "Get tight and buckle down!!" -- The command meant for us to hook up our repel connections to the speed drop lines on the floor of the bay. Talon Wing's profile shrank -- The gunships stacking tightly; tail gun to nose, wing to wing. The stealth larties intermingled within the battalion. "Here we..go." The words from Captain Shrike seemed to linger on the comm channel."

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Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/26/13
« Reply #35 on: August 26, 2013, 07:21:25 PM »
   "As if on cue..hell was waiting for us on the cusp of Captain Shrike's order. The beach lit up brighter than the Coruscant skyline! We were nearly over the crux where waves pound the shore when the guns unleashed their fury. "Hold your fire! Hold your fire! This is the Grand Army of the Repu...*Krrssshhhhh*.." our comm gunship dropped silent..every panel seemed to shatter apart trailing smoke and flame. Captain Shrike made the order, "Return fire!" Talon gunships did their best to fire at will..light up the beach, but our formation was packed to tight. The perimeter ships taking most of the heat until they could last no longer, succumbing to the damage revealing the next ship behind it. Their anti- air weapons tore into...No..they tore through us.

Flak bursts erupted in low thunderous thuds..ships bellowed as their crew bays were gutted apart. The metal wrenching and popping. High shriek screams followed as the metal carcass fell. Ting Ting te ting! small projectiles reflecting from the armor shell; shrapnel clattered against the hull. The slats of our blast doors became punctured by a direct hit. A gaping hole whistled to my right..becoming a peephole beyond our coffin above the seas.."

(Vice Admiral Dantes coughs forcefully.)

"..our gunship. Looking out...blue, green, red tracers and lasers speckled every ship..pilots visibly hunkered down into their cockpits. The unlucky ones became riddled...their blood splattering to the cracked glass..other gunships merely fell apart, torn apart. I saw one such instance where a gunship's cockpit was knocked out..sending the hulking ship whirling into the ship right next to it."

(CT 1043 halts in his account. A tear thickens before falling from his eye down his cheek. He carries on.)

"The gunship immediately to our right flank accelerated to fill the new gap that had just been made. The pilots unaware their bay doors were cleaved from the hinges...their bay was emptied in the chaos..but we are para's. Some of the tether lines remained intact. My brother still hooked to the repelling lines, dangling helplessly..some still alive, others only bits and pieces. Chatter on the comm lines became unintelligible.

Evasive orders were broadcast-- Shrike streamlined the orders. I was sent coordinates by the captain..and we accelerated that way. I watched on my Tactical map as the remnants split into 2 groups.

The sky was dark and silent when our ship finally touched down..We were enveloped in the enemy lines. They were everywhere..and I was nowhere. These rebels were not rabble. The doors slid open effortlessly. I rested my hand on the hull while I stepped out..the blast-scoring was hot to the touch. Another ship came down from the sky. Its troopers came from behind its doors as relieved as us.

The last of the gunships landed. Its pilot physically threw off the ships windshield. His boots hit the pavement with a thud. Smoke lifted above my squad when we heaved the door open...the bay contained only armor and an ocean of crimson red. A single flak round bore its way in the blast-shielding..then burst..immolating the squad within."

Chain of command fell to me now. I gave the order to set up a mobile defense perimeter. The captain's ship never came. As the unit hoofed towards the national guard's last projected position a comm relay tower was visible in the distance. The main dish smoldering..none of my ships had made it that far. Raising my scope I zoomed as far as possible..a gunship sized hole was easy to make out..any survivors of the accompanying squads were quickly overwhelmed...and dealt with. It was Shrike's ship that made the dive into the dish.

The affects on the relay couldn't be undetermined, so I sent a message to the Republic Task force in orbit led by Telos. It was our only chance of reinforcements or getting the warning out. We kept marching on until we reached a large field. Inititally the dead seemed like executed civi's which we assumed to be rebels..but the collars and clothes soon indicated they were all military that had been stripped of armor. It was a military camp..a coup from within..murders and mass executions alike. A trooper of mine found a wounded National Guardsmen...I turned to see him kneeling to the wounded man..helping him drink from a canteen, "Don't mo..."  The body erupted with an explosion, vaporizing "Striker".. one of my new troopers from Kamino. Explosions continued to boom for affect before more accurate ones honed in on our position. They had the site grid-locked in case any survivors tried to put up a struggle. They shell shocked us heavily...Then a few came back to the camp when the barrage ceased. They didn't waste a shot...using blades to finish my disoriented men..

I was beneath so much dirt ..knocked unconscious ..they took me for dead.

That's the last thing I remember, lying in that dirt. There are foggy memories that come and go. National Guards I think..pulling me..providing aid..then darkness..rumbling of gunship engines..Seeing Telos...his eyes told me all I needed to know.

..I was alone.

This is no dream..nor a nightmare..I died a sergeant..but was reborn a captain."





Hope you enjoyed this draft of a Senate Committee testimony! :) Thanks for checking in and I'd love any feedback or insight to learn from.

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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #36 on: August 27, 2013, 02:45:47 AM »
Nice, time to go share.

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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/27/13
« Reply #37 on: August 27, 2013, 06:37:31 AM »
Nice, time to go share.


Much obliged for the kind words and FP post! Thank you so much :)
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
« Reply #38 on: August 28, 2013, 12:53:33 AM »
wow! awesome piece of writing mate ! really loved the grittyness of it .
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
« Reply #39 on: May 26, 2015, 07:28:53 AM »
Star Wars --- The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm: Volume 1

"Uncertainty is a sign of humility, and humility is just the ability or willingness to learn."

(Opening Crawl)

"The first months of the Clone War rages on! Grand armies of the Republic stride forward bringing order behind. Battlefields grow more diverse while growing heavy with casualties. Each side devises increasingly lethal plots to stave the enemies war efforts in the hope of sparing themselves financial burden. The burden of commissioning a new army.

A' Sharad Hett is charged with investigating such Separatist ploys. Located in the system of Aargonar, Separatists seek a new way to eliminate political opposition. The system's allegiance and resources weigh in the balance.

Jedi Knight Aayla Secura's 327th Star Corp prepares their ships for the coming task. The optimistic young Jedi holds diplomacy in high regard having recently secured a new treaty with the Lurmen of Maridun. The Jedi temple remains an emblem of tranquility on Coruscant; the hopes of the people glowing as the new horizon dawns...."

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Firmly, A' Sharad Hett tightens the leather belt around his waist. Looking to the window, thick rays of brilliant sunlight beam from the bustling, urban skyline. The radiance brings memories of the hot twin Tatooine suns rising; bring a warm reprieve from night's clutching chill. Ever so slightly his cheek tightened. Far above, the silhouette of an approaching speeder briefly blocked his view. As it passed above his quarters, the shadow briefly blocked the ambient golden ray's glow which illuminated his sparse Jedi quarters.

The flirtation of a smile once present released from his face. Reflecting from the window stood a heavily tattooed face that stared back with deep penetrating blue eyes. Slowly they closed.

Not yet familiar with the face seen, Hett turned from the sight. Pacing away from the window, his two lightsabers wiggled briefly on his desk before swiftly being pulled to his hands with the force. Softly they clicked, adhering to his belt. Opening his closet door, Hett pulled several thin straps of porous cloth. Methodically twisting, his hands guided the fabric. Sprawling it across his forearm as he wove it.

Tight in some places and not others, but just the way he wanted it. Looking down, Hett looped a small piece of the desert fabric through another to hold its chosen place. From his cloth, several tiny granules fell to the amber wooden surface beneath. Many would have paid no credence to this happening; others  may have seen it a nuisance, but to this knight, even the smallest grain was sacred. Slowly the small sands from across the galaxy were swept into his palm. As if an oil, he rubbed the grains back into the cloth.


A slight click snapped Hett from his meditative ritual. Cascading a shadow from the open door stood a lovely figure with brilliantly blue skin. One lekku draped over her shoulder, the other lightly touched her back. The female's teeth showed a brilliant white as her lips parted in a light natured smile, "So what happens when you start losing sand specks all over the place? Jocasta Nu is on to you!" The sound of her voice was musical in a melodic nature.

The human raised tusken, who had decided to live as a Jedi rather than any species, allowed the corner of his mouth to tighten into the hint of an elusive grin. "Welcome back Aayla. Its a good thing Master Fisto's kind are adept when it comes to breathing beneath water. You've been busy." Aayla's began to feel her azure skin heating up. Excitedly her voice burst with a hint of nervousness, "Who told you that?!? I..I mean.." A short sigh of humored relief left Hett's nostrils, "Master Fisto's smile said enouh." Dismissing the Jedi master's humorous tease, the knight closed the discussion of that topic abruptly, "That Nautolan NEVER stops smiling!!"

Master Hett continued his ritual, "This is true. Heh* Even death could not part the grimace from the wearer." Aayla's chest let loose a sigh of relief, "So why all the sand? Is that all you have?" A' Sharad's quarters were sparse in appearance. Having been raised among the sands provided little need for anything that was not necessary. Motioning to her, his hand gripped a small dark wooden box. She observed keenly. Noting its craftsmanship, it had small inlays of light bone. Easily lifting off the lid, the master reached down. Taking her blue hand, he raised it to be level with her waist. The contents of the box remained obscure while his fingertips dove within.

Moving his hand over her open palm, the mystery was revealed. The sand of all color and texture sifted into the creases of her smooth hand, "These can't all be from Tatooine, can they?" The master's low toned voice was full when he responded. "Not at all. These have been gathered from across the galaxy. Negotiations, gatherings, even from beneath fallen brethren. All followed me home, but are kept here. A past not forgotten." Aayla's presence became a solemn one, taking in the poignant purpose of Hett's lesson. "Thank you for sharing your way Master Hett, brother of the deserts." Her voice began to return to its upbeat rhythm, hopefully you won't collect much sand on our next mission. May this will actually be a calm one!"

Hett's fingers pulsed pulling the small sediment from Secura's palm, withdrawing pieces from what shallow creases existed. Spiraling, the sand passed from her hands to the little ornate, but humble box. Pressing firmly the lid sank into place. "I share your sentiment of hope, but the likelihood of that is as high as traversing Tatooine while hoping not to get sand in your boot on a calm day. As a daughter of Ryloth, you are aware how difficult that is...The Galaxy is amidst chaos...All that we do is shrouded in a sandstorm."

Smiling with a slightly coy nature Secura Dismissed Master Hett's insight. Walking to the slim doorway Aayla looked over her lightly clother shoulder, "Come Master Hett, Bly has our ship prepped for departure." Her leather wrapped lekku swayed with her brisk turn around the corner. A deep exhale left A' Sharad Hett's compressing lungs as he sighed, collecting himself. He too followed suit quickly walking through the door pursuing Aayla.
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Shortly after departing the temple, the Jedi pair arrived at the Republic Departure Facility.

Clone troopers in a variety of armor hustled all about, moving equipment and wounded from ship to ship. The war effort was constant. "General Secura, over here sir!" The clone voice emanated from a clone trooper dawning a brown kama with sidearms, a rifle in one hand, his helmet in the other. Two yellow tattoos adorned his cheek matching the mikadu yellow of his thigh plating. Aayla jogged over toward her designated clone commander who was flanked by several others wearing similar color armor. "Its good to see you again General. Will say..I finally got the grass out of my plating."

Bly and his men quickly saluted when Master Hett approached then held out his hand to greet the master, "Its good to meet you General Hett. Your record is awe-inspiring."

"That's appreciated Commander. I've hard of your successes as well, particularly against the odds you had on Maridun. Thank you for taking out that test weapon. Until then, I had only heard vague reports of what was being devised."

A second trooper approached from the large docking bays. His helmet bore a different design from the standard line down the middle, instead it was curved like a crescent. Stopping to salute the generals and his commander; Bly introduced the trooper, "Generals, this is Lieutenant Hazoc. Trained in small squad blitz tactics." Without removing his helmet the lieutenant began speaking, "Sirs, the men are prepared to get underway. In addition, we completed the adjustments to the Arquitens light cruiser. We improvised clamps for us to take a pair of gunships. Its a contested sector - Its my belief that using the "Regulator" will enable us to not attract negative attention."

Nodding, Hett agreed with the idea. "Well thought out Hazoc. Let's get to the ship!"

The handful of clone troopers jogged towards the ship then climbed aboard to join their compatriots.

Be - woop! Be- woop!

A Jedi communicator was going off! Aayla reached down checking hers, but it was inactive. Hett activated his while raising it from his tight utility side pouch. From the center a blue hologram of Yoda and Ki Adi Mundi grew visible. The grains fluctuated while they walked. Bowing their heads in greeting, Hett and Aayla acknowledged the high council masters.

Yoda's voice cracked over the hologram, "Brief this message must be, but most important your mission remains. To the Mid- Rim you must go. Meet with the Governor and his ministers you will. Be with care and lightly tread. Separatist schemes yet await unseen. Aargonar remains a critical system."

Hett's collected presence was not noticeably changed by the tasking order, but Aayla did note the trouble in his eyes. The tusken master spoke, "We will meet with them immediately; avoiding the creation of an incident."

Ki Adi Mundi smiled looking at his grown padawan, "Details will be sent to your ship shortly. May the force be with you A' Sharad and you Aayla Secura."

The walking knights again bowed their heads to the grand masters whose image faded as quickly as it had appeared.

Curious about his reaction, Aayla inquisitively turned her face toward the tattooed knight, "Master Hett, why do you look so troubled upon hearing our assignment?" No immediate reaction was given. A Sharad's boots click as they began climbing the metallic boarding ramp. He paused briefly. His chin lowered as his eyes took on a melancholy sheen. Turning his eyes towards Aayla he spoke in hushed tones, "My padawan fell in the sands of Aargonar.."

The whur of the engines pulsed thunderously...
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
« Reply #40 on: May 26, 2015, 09:02:55 AM »
like the tone of this story and the writing is top notch and the fact its clone wars !
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
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Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
« Reply #42 on: June 14, 2015, 12:25:30 AM »
Oasis Calm: Volume II

"The way you think determines the way you feel, and the way you feel influences the way you act."

Journeying through space was always a dangerous venture during the Clone Wars. Unknown threats lurking unseen in the distance, camouflaged by nebulas, or amidst space debris. In hyperspace, however, the Arquitens cruiser known as the Regulator glided effortlessly. While cruising at such incredible speeds, the ship's triad of engines lightly hummed. Every view port emanated a beautiful cerulean blue glow of the hyperspace lane. The crew and troopers aboard the vessel laughed as they reveled in this brief opportunity, but one presence wasn't so easily at peace.

The blast door to the bridge briefly hissed as its double sections split apart. In to the dimly lit, scarcely crewed area, walked Aayla Secura. When ships had long hyperspace waypoints during a mission, it was protocol to lower the battle order for the troops aboard the craft. This allowed a small skeleton crew to maintain critical functions while the troops checked gear and took in some much needed shut eye. Several crew members remained at their stations at the most forefront controls of the command deck. To their flank, Master A' Sharad Hett's silhouette was easily identified against the glimmering blue window. Aayla paced up the short stairwell to the elevated position. Her hand rested on two clone trooper's shoulders who mildly flinched upon her touch. She kindly lowered her face toward them, "Troopers, your station is not necessary during hyperspace. Both of you are relieved for the time being." Both looked at her with eyes of surprise, but were grateful. A silent weight lifted from their shoulders when they rose from their swiveling chairs, "Thank you General Secura." Heals clicked while they exited the bridge.

Master Hett's body remained facing the view ports. Closing the distance between them, Aayla twisted her head softly to the side, looking to view the solemn master's face. His eyes were closed, his breath steady. "I'm sure they are thankful for that. Heh, their tenseness could have burst the windows if you had touched them just a tad firmer." A large smile surfaced across the female Jedi's face, "Ha, I knew you had to be reveling in that.. just a little! Typically people are unsure what to around someone with such intensity." Hett faced Aayla, "I know, but I've always found more solace in meditation rather than the company of others." "Maybe we'll rub off on each other! Me with a little more foresight and you might leave the planet smiling!" Hett's eyebrows pursed in amusement, "What about hoping we don't get sand in our boots?" Still brimming with a smile Aayla replied, "Well that's the first priority!"

As if on cue, Lieutenant Hazoc, one of Commander Bly's subordinates, approached the pair with a data pad tightly gripped in his hand. "General Hett, Secura; your orders from the Jedi Temple and Security Council have arrived for review sirs." Extending from his crossed arms, Hett took the pad in his hand, "Thank you Lieutenant. This will be all for now." The clone trooper turned to walk back down the stairs. "Notify all quarters when we approach deceleration distance helmsman." "Aye aye, general!"

When at the table, Aayla pulled a small holochip from inside the pad her partner was holding. Clicking, the small data chip popped into place. An encrypted message spawned from the blue emulators circling the table. The figure was a tall man wearing ornate robes, adorned intricate piping and threading. His posture was not as erect it must have been in years past, but he still carried himself with a sense of pride and distinction. His right hand was raised beneath his dark pointed chin beard, pointer finger and thumb stroking through it,

    "Good tidings counselors. Though there have been many years of tension between our system and the Republic, I do hope this message may begin to set a rebolstered foundation in place. Joining the Confederation of Independent Systems seemed to be too good a proposition and it was just that!! I send this message in the hopes to meet with a delegation. Striving to undo the damage incurred will be a long journey, but it is an undertaking worth embarking. Sources say a threat is developing in our deserts. I do not want my system to succumb nor be responsible for a creation that will bring the galaxy to its knees! This meeting will be off grid.. and the ledger.. at my palatial retreat. Coordinates also are encrypted with the droid carrying this message. May redemption for Aarognar not be too far from grasp.."

Again crossing his arms, Hett began thinking strategically about the various levels of the message. What was said, what was left unsaid, even what motives existed for a trap. His blue counterpart clicked her tongue lightly against the back of her white teeth. She looked to her friend, "This is a precarious situation.." Hett began to make his way from the bridge, "Especially when we're going into it effectively blind. Our mere presence, if framed in propaganda, will only serve to galvanize our foe further." Following his lead Aayla agreed, "You're right! We must tread lightly."
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 Side by side they walked down the cold metallic corridors. Hatchway after bulkhead followed.

From down the corridor laughs and sharp voices echoed off the plating. "Ha ha!! EeyYES!" exclaimed a clone trooper raising both fists in a celebratory dance. "Come on Commander! Its your turn to show the lads how its done! OR.. are you only good at putting down SEPPIE DESERT DOGS!" Numerous voices laughed. "Aten-HUT! Generals on deck!" Hazoc shouted from his stance, resting against the entry bulkhead. The Jedi drew close. All clones snapped to their feet. Some wore only their under armor, others partially prepped for battle, but all revered the prowess of these two Jedi. 

"Ease yourselves men." A' Sharad Hett calmly spoke, placing his gloved hand on a clone's arm and then another. "Though we have fought adversaries here, in this situation I'd urge you to be less pejorative." Hazoc approached from the shadowed bulkhead, "We're here to discover a plot possibly even turn the system's leadership to our side...I'd say this is a rare opportunity sirs." Hazoc rarely said much, but what he did say was heavy with calculation. Though a clone, he believed the application of steady, strategic thinking could win a fight against opposition of any strength.

"It is indeed Lieutenant." Aayla Secura affirmed confidently. Commander Bly pulled his helmet from a shelf with a curious spark in his eye, "So what's the plan general?" A' Sharad Hett made it a habit not to leave any element of a plan to chance. He had already devised several contingencies since their departure from Coruscant. "The plan is concise, but leaves us flexible enough to act. Since Grand Chairman Utak reached out to the senate initially, he won't be expecting Jedi, thus, Secura will be impersonating a Senator with Commander Bly and a squad as escort. Hazoc, you and your teams will board the gunships with me. They will be powered down while we approach the planet avoiding as many scanners as possible."

Bly raised his hand to attract minimal attention. "How will we conceal the gunships? This world still has a lot of Seppie support."

"Good question Bly, but we won't. Powering down won't allow them to be picked up by scanners. In terms of visual threats, we'll be docking in a covered hanger. This is what we'll have to do with the time given. The slowly fracturing beliefs of the populace means the Senate wants us to act NOW."

Hazoc clicked his small vibro-knife against his forearm, with an emotionless face his eyes squeezed. "Truth be said, I get it..but its fool-hearty. Never rush a military operation.." With a chuckle a clone from the shadows made his presence known. "Nothing goes according to plan Hazoc..no matter how meticulous! We all know Bly's approach. That's why we're the 327th!"

Hazoc exhaled lightly behind his comrade's zeal. "How could we forget Clipper?" The unamused clone brother raised his hands forming quotations with both his pointer and middle fingers, "Know the mission, know your enemy." Clipper chimed in, "Achieve the mission, kill the enemy!!" Bly's hand raised when Aayla began speaking with light jest, "Well that's all I need!" Bly looked to her at the same time holstering a pistol, "It's all any soldier needs." 

Hett subtly nodded, "Well then arm up men, its time we put the Star Corps' pragmatism to work!" The Jedi turned to leave the room. In various degrees of unison the troopers gathered together cheered, "Ha ha ha, YESS!!"

"HuZaah!"

"That's what I'm talking bout!"

"Lets do this! Get it DONE!"

Clatters chattered while drawers slid open. The clone troopers pulled armor from where they lay stowed. Clicking and snapping each additional piece into place. Within minutes the three squads of troopers stood together with their helmets off. Their armor white with a muddled golden stripe down the center. Each wearing a dull, light brown kama; scorched by the testament of battle. Bly stood at the center of the room, "In war we seldom are provided the time to mourn, but before we leave, I want us to remember three of our fallen brothers. Cameron, Lucky, and Flash. They await us in the stars! We fight - so that others in the Republic don't have to! Lets stay tight, do it right, and get our boots back on deck!"

"You said it Commander!!"

"Back on deck!"

"Lets make it quick 327!"

In double file column the troopers left their barracks toward the armory to rearm. One clone followed the column alone, placing a black pair of dress boots next to the bulkhead seal. Tapping the side, he ensured they were placed right where they were meant to be. "We'll be back."

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Bly stood at the entry of the improvised boarding hatch which connected the pair of gunships to the larger frigate. His men hustled into the familiar Larty bay, strapping in and locking their weapons into place. A' Sharad Hett walked closer to Bly, "May the Force be with you commander." Respectfully Bly replied with the same pre-mission tensed focus, "Aye sir. May this not spark a bigger fight."

A younger voice came from the red hued bay after Hett passed, "Commander Bly..can you double check the Captain doesn't move my boots?"

The veteran commander smiled reassuringly at the shinnie, "Of course Stock. Now hop to!"

Hissing, the door of the gunship clamped shut, creating a self contained atmosphere within. Bly turned, pressing his thumb into a red key which closed the seal of the Regulator. "You always encourage the dynamics of your men Bly. It does them well." Bly, thinking he was alone, took a quick breath. "You're right Aalya. After my training I realized how instrumental honing personalities are. Yea...we might butt heads..but the versatility.. the variety gained from it is purely a strength." Aayla's face lightened.

This was always something she had believed and struggled with while commanding clones, initially. Jedi and Clone Commanders were paired for this purpose. Eventually they would grow to compliment one another creating a very potent combination of known strengths and weakness. "I'm glad we agree." the blue Jedi playfully whispered.

"I'll see you on the bridge shortly Commander Bly. Now I must go vale myself for a role as a senator!" She winked and briskly walked to her quarters to assume her new persona.

_________ Some time later. _____________

The ship silently pressed through hyperspace. In the gunship bay, many clones had removed helmets and began conversing with each other, even asking questions of the first battle to Hett. Bly stood with Captain Sightreh, commanding officer of the Regulator, overseeing the bridge. Officers and crewman had begun filing into their stations. Republic vessels were always at full battle readiness when dropping out of lightspeed.  Captain Sightreh skimmed over his coordinates and star charts. His voice low and always calm spoke succinctly, "Helmsman, prepare to slow from hyperspace." A clone officer echoed the order, as was protocol, "Helmsman, prepare to exit hyperspace."

"Ready sir!"

The nav officer's voice chimed the updated count down, "6...5...4...3..2.1 --- Commence deceleration of the hyperdrive!"

The blue avenue of hyperspace gave way to the dark; littered with white specs of other systems far far away. All aboard the Regulator lurched forward slightly from the rapid deceleration. The Arquiten cruiser sped through the Perkell Sector. A desert system stood before them, where months prior a tremendous battle had ravaged the planet. A battle grand in scale and destruction! At this point in the war, its losses were only second to that of Jabiim!

Captain Sightreh again spoke, keeping his order two steps ahead so there was no cause to hurriedly react. He could take any frigate and have her "fly casual."

"Nav officer, bring us into that commuter line. Half speed. Let us drift into position, not enough to bring attention, but enough to let em know you are not a military trained pilot...even though we all know you are. heh* heh*"

A murmur of chuckles made its way around the command deck. Sightreh's humor always remained understated, but perfectly placed to break tension. "That's it lads. Bring us in to the fold." Maintaining its momentum , the Regulator closed in on the line of trade vessels, merchants, military crafts, and personal travel shuttles that were making their way toward the surface. The boosters dimmed, while others counter fired, slowly bringing the ship between two, much larger, ships. "Well done. Well done. Now, Keep your eyes on the scanners. If there's trouble, don't bring weapons up unless I order it explicitly."

"Sir yes sir!" the crew barked.

***CCRSSSHH***

The door nearest the hologram table opened suddenly. Bly turned his neck to acknowledge who he thought would be General Secura. His eyes widened whilst his brow perked up. "Well done coming out of the hyperlane Captain." Aayla's voice sounded. Bly began to stumble over his words, "Uh..Gen..General Secura, you look.."

Without missing a beat, Captain Sightreh interrupted, "~Stunning~"

"Thank you gentlemen. Remember the war is between the separatists!" The duo of awestruck men let out a shy laugh, but couldn't help taking a prolonged gaze at the cloth that adorned the toned Twi Lek.

Aayla Secura wore a thin and very light fabric that clung to her skin effortlessly. Her blue Lekku were wrapped in a white fabric that had the slightest sheen, speckled with fine clear and blue jewels. Around her neck was a white collar resembling curved waves that spiraled either side. Flowing down the white material drifted down her arms rather snuggly, being held in place by a small silver ring that was worn on the middle finger. Her lower throat was bare, unveiling her soft, azure skin. The same wave pattern rippled further down her torso, exposing the inner sides of her breasts. From there towards the floor, her dress  dove into deep hues of blue and violet. Fine piping of green accented the design of what clearly was a master crafted article of clothing, for her and her alone.

From behind came echoes of loud Bwoops and Beeps's, clearly an R2 unit. Crossing on to the deck rolled Secura's bronze domed R4- G9 astromech. Rattling of a rapid series of Beeps, whistles, and sirens, her droid extended one of its claws which held tightly gripped, a snow white cloak, clearly intended to accompany the gown. Random suppressed laughs couldn't be contained as it became apparent that the droids alerts were not that of panic. Instead they fit the role of a knaggy mother chastising her adolescent daughter before going out for the night!

The Jedi Knight's cheeks heated up with both a dash of embarrassment and agitation for her droid counter part. "Thank you VERY much Gee-nine." Kneeling next to the droid she threw the albino cloak over her shoulders and under her long, dazzling lekku, with a flourish of finesse. The blue female then raised the lightsaber hilt she was holding, "Alright Gee-nine, where do you want it this time?" R4-G9 retorted with a low pitched, begrudging, little digitized grumble. A small trapezoid compartment popped apart. "Well that's a new spot! Thank you. Keep it safe." ***Bee Doo doo* The lightsaber fit perfectly into its new containment box.

Captain Sightreh opened communication linked with the gunships. "We are on the prescribed approach vector General. Set to maintain course until we near the palace."

***Ka-TACH! **crssCCHHHH **TONNNG ***kk..kkk.. *** pinG

Seemingly random noises began! Pieces of debris bounced off the hull and minimal shielding. A handful of clone officers stood from their seats to look out the view ports to report.  "What is that noise?" No window was needed for A' Sharad Hett to know the answer. Solemnly through the commline his voice was clear, "Ghosts of the past. No more comm chatter from here until touch down captain."

Sightreh acknowledged briefly, "Yes sir." before silencing all deck comms. Bly looked out the window to a sight that struck every navy man at their station. The commander's face was nearly pressed into the glass. His eyes locked on what remained of a pair of bright grey, lifeless Acclamator Assault Ships. The pair were still being scowered by Separatist techs and scavengers alike. Secura stepped up to the windows.

A young clone, recently assigned, murmured without thinking, "What...in the name..of .."

Even Aayla's breath remained stolen for a moment. Captain Sightreh took a deep breath and sighed. "I thought we were dead in space that day. Its ironic to return here with Hett..he saved many lives during the rearguard action. It was gutsy to use the one, nearly empty assault ship to shield our vessel. That day trained Dao and I to be masters of our fear with Hett as our teacher... we'd all be dead as would those who later became Hawkbat Battalion...Ghosts.. ghosts indeed."

Continuing ahead, the unmarked republic frigate sped ahead, intermingled in the heavy traffic. During certain hours, Sepratists relaxed scanning and checks in order to get out as many cargo filled transports, reaping the benefits from the mineral laden planet as quickly and unmolested as possible. The Regulator flew right through the CIS blockade without a hitch or flag being raised.

"Here we go General. Entering the stratosphere."

A light bounce turned into a more violent shutter. Commander Bly sat in a chair, belting himself in. The ship heaved upward into the air then sharply down! The view plate transitioned from the dark void of space to a brilliant baby blue, but only for a moment. The further the descent took them, the more obscure their vision became. Relying on their instrumentation became necessary. Every body on board was relentlessly jostled by the turbulence. Aayla Secura's knuckles grew the closest they could to white while clenching the arm of her seat!

The captain held his footing which were spread for balance as if they alone kept the ship stable.

"Steady the helm! Keep us on course! We've flown right into the middle of a sandstorm!!"
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