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Offline Lance Quazar

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Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« on: March 03, 2014, 01:26:52 AM »
And now for something completely different -

Hey, gang!

As my entry in a contest sponsored by The Indy Cast  - the world's premiere Indiana Jones podcast - I have created this all new photonovel,

"Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret."  As part of the rules of the contest, we had to use that title, which was created by contest organizer and uber-customizer, the amazingly talented Ron Hemble.

So here is MY take on "Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret."  This is just chapter 1.  Unfortunately, I only completed two chapters by the contest's deadline, but I will definitely be finishing this story.  My plan is to try to post one chapter every 2 weeks for the next two months, for four chapters in total.  (Roughly.)  Chapter 2 is already finished, as well, but I will probably go back and shoot additional scenes to flesh it out, since I was a little pressed for time.

In any event, hope you enjoy this new PN!




























































































































































































































































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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2014, 04:06:15 AM »
This is fantastic. Please make it a bunch of chapters. I hope I get to see what happens to Sarge soon. The only thing I hate about these is being patient for the next chapter! On the front page.

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2014, 12:19:08 PM »
This is fantastic. Please make it a bunch of chapters. I hope I get to see what happens to Sarge soon. The only thing I hate about these is being patient for the next chapter! On the front page.

Thanks very much, Tamer!  And thanks for the really thoughtful write-up on the front page!

I actually already have Chapter 2 all finished and edited, but I need to roll these out at a steady pace.  Don't want to rush out 2 chapters and then have a long gap while I have to shoot and edit the next ones. 

Much appreciated, getting written feedback on these stories is very gratifying.  :)

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2014, 04:34:07 PM »
I will hold my comments but I see a surprise discovery about one of you characters coming soon!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #4 on: March 04, 2014, 05:17:07 PM »
Wow, this is awesome. Engaging narrative, and very smooth dialogue with some great one-liners. In the words of Palpatine, I will be following this with great interest!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #5 on: March 04, 2014, 05:19:02 PM »
I will hold my comments but I see a surprise discovery about one of you characters coming soon!

Please don't withhold your comments!

I'd LOVE to hear any thoughts or speculation you might have!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #6 on: March 04, 2014, 05:23:04 PM »
Wow, this is awesome. Engaging narrative, and very smooth dialogue with some great one-liners. In the words of Palpatine, I will be following this with great interest!

Wow!  Thanks very much, Kulan!  This has been great fun and I'm excited about the posting next chapter, which I think is even better!  So stay tuned!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #7 on: March 05, 2014, 04:00:45 AM »
i thoroughly enjoyed that! roll on more!!
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« Reply #8 on: March 05, 2014, 02:10:42 PM »
i thoroughly enjoyed that! roll on more!!

I sure will!  Thank you VERY much for your comments.  :)

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #9 on: March 06, 2014, 01:10:25 AM »
Hey LQ,

Mate execellent work mate and Chapter 2 was awesome I can't wait to see the rest.

Ron

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #10 on: March 06, 2014, 02:38:20 AM »
Hey LQ,

Mate execellent work mate and Chapter 2 was awesome I can't wait to see the rest.

Ron


Thanks very much, Ron!!

Is there a plan in place for showcasing the other entries?  Are they going to be posted online or are you guys handling it...

I'd LOVE to see other entries!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #11 on: March 06, 2014, 09:27:29 AM »
Really nice work Lance! Bring on chapter 2, I am hooked!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #12 on: March 07, 2014, 01:38:57 AM »
Really nice work Lance! Bring on chapter 2, I am hooked!


Thanks, LE!  And thanks for your help with this one!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #13 on: March 07, 2014, 06:31:51 AM »
I agree, I am ready for Chapter 2!

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Re: Indiana Jones and the Mayan Secret - Quazar version!
« Reply #14 on: March 07, 2014, 10:24:52 AM »
I agree, I am ready for Chapter 2!

Heh.  Thanks.  But I want to release these chapters at fairly regular intervals so I don't want to publish #2 unit l've at least started #3. 

Otherwise, THAT delay will be excessive. 

Thanks, tho!

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