NICE!
Yeah, the Mother Talzin bits from Clone Wars was some of my favorite stuff. Just a Force witch, totally, utterly beyond anything we've ever seen possible through the Force.
Heck, given that she doesn't seem to have a corporeal form and that her death was merely an inconvenience for her in the series (because she sure did get better from it quickly enough!) I actually have found myself wondering if the Force Ghost technique that Qui-Gon Jinn had mastered was something of a Dark Side practice. After all, he was a Grey Jedi, and large parts of his life are wrapped in mystery.
I love the idea of a world where the Force is in such fevered turmoil that the past, present and future are all mixed up. It's like what Yoda told Luke about his visions. Kind of reminds me also of the Brother and the Sister from Clone Wars, living in a world that was changed wildly from day to night by the Living Force.
Can't wait to read the next installment; you're really pumping these out quickly and you're keeping the quality levels among the highest I've seen on this Site!