I love how, even when you tinker with the designs of the original characters, you settle on something that just feels right for the way you're telling the story. Particularly with the villains like Calo Nord and now Admiral Karath! Great job.
Only constructive criticism I can think to offer - what editing software do you use to put the comic together? If GIMP or Photoshop I'd recommend trying to airbrush out some of the Old Republic mission icons visible in the background of some of the shots (particularly those in the cockpit!). Other than that, keep up the great work.