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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #45 on: April 29, 2019, 01:15:09 AM »
As Han Solo and Lando Calrissian walked further under the shadows of the forest's natural canopy the warm colors of the mountain side they had left behind bled away to cooler blues and purples bouncing off green and brown plant life that was well above waist high. A few moments after the pair of men pulled their blasters from their holsters a rustling came from the shaded foliage to their right. Both Han and Lando were startled and pointed their pistols at the shadowy image emerging from the bushes and hanging tree vines. Out stuttered the labored steps of the gray skinned Mon Calamari Captain Barrax. He spoke with his natural graveled voice but in a much softer tone “Men... good you are... here.” The elder Mon Calamari stammered as he seemed to struggle to open his lips to speak. Lando quickly replied “Captain Barrax! We thought something happened to you?”. A moment later movement in the shadows to Han and Lando's left caught Solo's attention. Solo spun to his left to see the shadow emerge from the tree vines and shrubs as Barrax had done a second earlier but on their right. The visage of a bruised and bleeding mon calamari came out of the foliage wearing a white Alliance naval uniform. After less then a second had passed Commander Shellis fell to his knees breathing heavily as he started to slump over in his blood stained suit. “What in the Skies?!” Han yelped. Shellis to his credit mustered up his strength and cried out as the Solo and Lando started towards him to offer assistance. “Run! He's not... real! Run... away!” he said before slumping over face down in the grassy forest floor. Shellish's face was covered in blood and his eyes had large cuts and gashes on them. His mouth spewed blood as the sound of air leaving his mon calamari mouth stopped and Shellish died there in the grass.

Han and Lando were almost to Shellis when a loud cackling shrill came from Barrax stopping Han and lando in their tracks. Barrax rushed at the pair of men his webbed flipper hands outstretched as his lips made a loud hiss sound. Lando turned and pointed his weapon at Barrax but the mon calamari captain made no hesitation to stop a half second later he was on Lando locked in arms trying to force him down to his knees. Less then a second after it became obvious Lando wasn't in trouble a pair of large blue arcs zoomed across the forest floor hitting Barrax throwing his mon calamari grip off of Lando and stumbling him back. Han still held out his blaster at Barrax with a surprised look on his face as the mon calamari captain simply stumbled back and regained his footing. “What in the?!” Han screamed seeing Barrax take the stun blast as if it were a simple shove. Lando jumped back up to his feet to see Barrax regain his footing and rushed at Han. Lando was done with this and pulled his blaster from the grass on the forest floor and squeezed off a round of hot red laser into Barrax's leg. Barrax didn't stop, not only did he not stop he gained speed rushing at Solo who was also not taking chances and opened up his DL-44 to kill and blasted the Mon Calamari in the lower torso. Barrax took the blaster hits that burned through his uniform and into and through his torso and the blast from Calrissian in the leg as if they were pebbles thrown at a large beast. A moment later Barrax was on Solo still shrilling a high screeching sound as Han blasted two more shots into the mon calamari's chest and a third squarely its mouth. Barrax reach Solo lifted Han well above his head. Han knew Mon Calamari's were strong but not like this and not when shot. A second later a trio of shots from Lando landed squarely on the back of Barrax's large squid like head and neck, burning away Barrax's skin and bone in his head cavity. Still Barrax shrugged it away as if he felt nothing. Han's eyes squinted trying to free himself from the Mon Calamari's grip when the shrieking grew louder and Barrax's head retracted backwards. At first Han though he was finally dying from the head shots he and Lando put into him but instead he was greeted with a horrific nightmare as a pair of long gray spider legs protruded from the edges of Barrax's laser burned mouth. Lando kept firing his blaster into Barrax's back and head as the squid-like head flipped further back and the sound of spinal vertibrae cracked as Barrax's mouth opened unnaturally wide as the mon calamari's neck cracked backwards allowed Barrax's head to flip nearly all the way backward. The gaping hole that was Barrax's mouth now wide with a pair of spidering legs at each side was joined by another pair of legs in similar color and size from inside the mouth pulling themselves up and out of the mon calamari's esophagus. “What in the name of-!” Han screamed as Lando rushed over and through all his weight into his shoulder smashing it into the mon calamari's back and part of his burned squid-like head now all flipped all the way back. Barrax stumbled and released Solo sending Han to the ground with a whump. As soon as Han was mid drop Lando opened up with his blaster over and over burning away the back and head of Barrax as the body of Barrax stumbled and regained its footing. “We gotta go now!” Lando shouted at Han who was standing back up. As Calrissian finished his sentence a third pair of gray legs protruded from the wide opening that had been Barrax's mouth and throat a few moments earlier. As Han picked up his blaster and the pair started to turn Barrax's throat bulged and a large gray spider with shiny chitonous coating arose from the opening screeching as it showed burn marks over its forward body and legs. Han and Lando opened up repeatedly with both blasters as they bothed walked backwards towards the edge of the forest's exit. The gray spider pulled itself free from Barrax's body and lept over towards the body of Shellis. Mid air it was hit twice. Once by Lando and once by Han before it landed a few feet from Shellis's body. The barrage of blaster fire continued as the now burned and wounded spider tried to reach Shellis' head. Solo and Calrissian didn't let up the volleys of red lasers until the spider was turned to a burning husk of legs and ash. It took a good 15 seconds of continuous firing for them to achieve the kill. As they finished another more dense sounding rustling came from the shaded area deeper in the forest canopy and above them from the treetops.

The sounds of blaster fire drew some of the Riptide's ground crew into the forest edge. As a trio of Riptide crewers entered they were greeted with Hand and Lando racing from the from canopy shaded forest full speed. One of the ground crew put up a webbed flipper to see if the pair of humans were okay but instead Han and Lando just pointed their blasters behind them and fired still at full sprint out of the deeper foliage “Go go go!” Han shouted at the Mon Cala crewers. Behind Hand and Lando the rumbling sound of large arachnid legs pounding into the ground were heard and the shrieking hiss of the Viraxen was heard behind them. The trio of crewers didn't wait for an explanation and turned to run with the pair of humans coming out of the forest edge. A second after shouting at the mon cala crewers Han grabbed his communicator and shouted into it “Chewie get us out of here!”. As Calrissian passed the hulk of the Riptide he noticed the sounds of the large arachnid steps following closer and closer. The pair of smugglers and the mon calamari crew ran past the Riptide throwing their hands up “Get everyone out of here!” Lando yelled. A few seconds later the Falcon was moving in the direction of the Riptide as large shrieking arachnids emerged from the forest shadows launching long sticky strands of webbing at the surrounding ground crew and mon calamari naval crew in and around the Riptide's crash site at the base of the hill next to the forest edge.

The Millennium Falcon came hovered over the ground lowering it's entry ramp as Han and Lando made it to ship and jumped onto the ramp pulling up one of the crewers that was running with them. “Lando get on the guns!” Han yelled as Lando apparently already thinking ahead of Han was two thirds the way up the entry ramp and heading towards the gun-shaft ladder. The other crewers escaping the scene weren't as lucky  as large strands of webbing caught some sticking them to the grassy ground at the base of the hillside while others were coated with it and sucked back into the shadowy edge of the forest. The screams of the remaining crewers drew the attention to other technicians and crew in the hillside caves who came running out to see what was happening. Some were thrown back by webbing sticking them back in some of the caverns entrances while others were struck and being pulled, albeit not as forcefully as closer targets to the forest. Then a few moments after random blaster fire came from some of the crew and officers that realized they were being attacked the quad lasers on the underbelly of the Falcon opened up on the forest edge setting it ablaze. A few seconds later nearly a dozen of the arachnids poured out of the forest edge and scurried through the blaster fire towards the Riptides crashed hulk. The creatures were on it and ripped into it's hull, easily puncturing through outer bulkheads and tearing off hatches and loading doors. The Riptide still had a few crewers left inside who screamed in terror as the large arachnid beasts tore through the ships levels. Lando kept the quad fire on the Viraxen beasts hitting them gave them a good burn on their large spider like bodies wounding them but not badly enough to slow them down. Lando's mind went back to the terrifying sight of the creature emerging from Captain Barrax's throat and how tough it had taken his own blaster along with Solo's in tandem to kill a small version of these types of creature. Lando never let off the trigger spraying swathes of laser fire into the forest and the shaded area of grass that stretched from the forests canopy to the Riptides hull keeping any of the arachnids that tried to dash back and forth under harassment. “Han we got to get these people out of here!” Lando yelled as he held the side of the headset's mic closer to his ear. A second later Han replied “I know! I know! We're hailing Wedge now!”

Wedge Antilles had been irritated since the large red and gray cloud above the main continent of this world kept spreading and wreaking havoc with his squadron's sensors and scanners. He knew there could be imperial activity on the surface but he'd be blind if this cloud of whatever it was to cover more and more of the area. Then a welcomed distraction came through his comm-link as he heard the beep of General Solo's hail come through “Antilles here.” Wedge said as professional as ever. “Wedge! We need a dust up with lots of covering fire NOW!” Han's stressed and excited voice came through “Are you alright Sir? Is it imperials?” Wedge replied as he punched the controls on his X-Wing veering it away from the holding pattern he'd had the squadron take and turned back towards the wreck of the Riptide. “No! Big bugs! Killing everyone GET HERE NOW!” Hans flustered voice said as the sounds of quad lasers filled the background of Solo's message. Wedge gave no more questions and clicked on his comm-channels as he increased his speed to max in atmosphere towards Solo's transmission “All fighters regroup General Solo and Calrissian are in trouble! Form up for strafe runs and get Captain Jogen on the line for a drop ship from Harken Threat for a pick up!” Wedge said with anticipation in his voice.” The voices of concern came from some of the other pilots before Wedge cut back in “Cut the chatter! They're under attack by indigenous life. Open up with whatever you can but be alert what you shoot at we still have personnel on the ground on-site! Go now!” Wedge said with a rank and authority to his tone.

A few moments later Antilles and the other fighters reach the Riptide's crash site to see chaos, the Millennium Falcon was hovering above the surface firing into the tree line and at the Riptide's crash herself. The few mon calamari crew still on the ground were laying down in some strange white covering threading and random blaster fire intermittently came from some of the cave entrances also at the forest. It was a few seconds before Wedge saw the shadows at the treeline weren't shadows at all and instead were huge arachnids trying to rush the Riptide's hulk and shoot white threading at the survivors. The front and starboard side of the Falcon was almost entirely covered in the white thready strands as the quad lasers were barely able to rotate and fire in the mess. “Red squdron on my lead, green and grey cover the survivors!” Wedge barked into his comm-link. A few seconds later the four lasers on Wedge's X-wing opened up on the tree line as well as another pair of X-wings continuing his strafing run. To Wedge's shock the lasers burned the bodies of the large creatures but only wounded them instead of vaporizing them or blasting huge chunks of their spider-like appendages in all directions. Wedge banked his X-wing around and clicked on his comm-channel “These things look tough Generals.” he said. His statement garnered a cracking microphoned reply with the voice of Lando Calrissian “Wedge they can take a quad laser pretty handily. You have to lay it on them in waves to even kill one. Just keep them busy until we get the rest of the crew off the surface. Do you have an ETA on a pickup?” Wedge looked at his krono on his cockpits HUD at Lando's request “Should be here in a few minutes at most.” he replied. “Great! Now watch out for those survivors in the caves.” Wedge punched his comm-channel off and spun his X-wing down for another pass and unleashed a long volley all across the treeline. This time he was surprised to see white strands of a gooey material shoot up from the forests shade at his fighter. “Watch out fo-” Wedge started to say but was interrupted by the groan of Lt. Jezter “Ah they got one of my engines with that stuff!” Wedge gritted his teeth and barked orders into the comm-channel “Split up and do your runs unevenly, don't give these things a chance to swat at you.” Wedge chomped the words into the comm. A few minutes passed and the alliance fighters held off the rest of the spider beasts. When one would be daring enough to rush from the Riptide towards the caves or at the Falcon the quad lasers of Solo's ship in tandem with the fighters blasts usually hurt the beasts enough to fall back in bloody messes. It was amazing to Wedge to see natural beasts have exoskeletons that tough. A moment into his observation the chime of the jump shuttle came over his comm and Wedge ordered it to land at an angle behind the Millennium Falcon's covering fire. “Ok Wedge they're coming out!” Han Solo's voice cracked through the microphone. Just as Wedge acknowledged the message he noticed the large red and gray cloud overcast starting to spread from the center of the forest to its edge where the Riptide and Falcon were. “Antilles to General Solo, lets make this fast.” Han gave an approving reply to Wedge as a few dozen mon calamari technicians and naval crew poured out from the cavern entrances. As they did suddenly the side of the hill the Riptide had crashed slid down and was laying at the base of exploded.

From inside the earthen dirt and sod came hundreds of the smaller arachnid creatures pouring out over the side of the mountain. Han and Lando both turned their guns on the Falcon towards the new threat as the smaller spider-like creatures cascaded down upon the Riptide's fleeing crew. The Falcon's entrance ramp reopened with Lt. Tarris waving in survivors that weren't going to make it to the jumpship. “Move move! Come on Lactah!” Tarris screamed at the older maintenance sergeant rushing out of the caves. From the furthest area between the caves and the hulk of the Riptide Lt. Plosshim came sprinting across the grass towards the jumpship. He got about half way before a section of earth and sod opened up in front of him and spewed out dozens of the ferocious smaller spiders. Plosshim tried to run up the hillside but was swathed immediately screaming a death scream as his body was ripped and chewed to pieces in a matter of seconds. Lactah was almost to the Falcon's ramp when a large strand of white webbing hit his legs sending him to the ground. Tarris  looked out in frightened shock as dozens of long strands of white webbing were being shot from the forest and the Riptides punctured hull at all areas of the hillside. The webbing fell coating some of the fleeing survivors as well as the aggressive smaller arachnids tearing out of the ground to find easy prey. It didn't matter of the webbing landed on anything or anyone just so it kept whoever it held in place long enough to be consumed. Some of later stragglers from the caves tried to hide in the entrances before they themselves were pulled back into the darkness of the caves and their quick screams were silences as dozens more smaller spiders emerged. Tarris heard a growling roar form the Falcon's cockpit and realized the webbing was landing all over the Falcon. She punched the controls and started to raise the ramp as it struggled to pull up she reach a webbed hand out to Lactah who struggled to reach one back as his legs and now part of his abdomen were covered in white webbing. A few moments later the arachnids were upon him and started to feast on him. To his credit Lactah didn't scream and instead erupted in a flame of fuel as he was torn free of the webbing by the smaller spider creatures tearing into his flesh he pulled a liquid fueling rod from a re-engergizer station he had on his belt and smashed it into what was left of his legs. The fire burned him to death near instantly. It had little effect on the swarms of smaller arachnids devouring him.

Tarris pulled up the ramp as she squinted her large squid-like eyes shut in distress and held it there before she heard the first set of thumps on the Falcon's hull. Tarris rushed to the cockpit to see many of the smaller arachnids jumping onto the Falcon's hull trying to gain entry. In the cockpit Chewbacca was in the pilot seat and a Mon Calamari technician sat in the co-pilot seat trying to hit the appropriate controls Chewbacca growled at him to get the Falcon moving. “Are the others away yet?” Tarris said nervously. The Mon calamari technician turned and nodded pointing toward the now distant and fading glowing engines of the jump ship making for space fast also significantly covered in the white webbing. As Tarris sighed a small half warmed sigh of relief Han Solo's voice came over the cockpit microphone “Chewie take off!” Solo yelled. Chewbacca returned the yell with a long growling set of roars and pulled the nearly totally covered Millennium Falcon away from the nightmarish site. Suddenly more and more thuds were heard and a large smashing sound of metal twisting and sparks flying came from deep in the Falcon's interior. A moment later Han Solo was in the cockpit running to the pilot's seat. He took the controls as Chewbacca pulled the mon cala technician out of the co-pilot seat to control it himself. “Their on the hull!” Tarris looked out of the cockpit windows as wave after wave of white webbing fell onto the Falcon obstructing her view. “Are we going to make it away?!” She yelped in fear “I'm not going to let these things tear us apart.” Han barked. Suddenly a large booming explosion and hissing of ventilation was heard in the rear of the Falcon's interior “Those things are tearing my ship apart!” Lando said as he rushed into the cockpit. Chewbacca turned and roared something that caught Han's attention and he turned with a surprised and fearful look “Are you sure!?” As Chewbacca nodded Han jumped out of the pilots seat dashing past Lando “Keep us in the air Lando!” he said as he dashed towards the Falcon's rear. Lando jumped into the pilot's seat and hit switches and buttons in a flurry as Chewbacca growled status of the ship at him “I know I know!” Lando said. “Just get as much as you can from them before we crash!” Lando said in a panic. Tarris who had been edged in the rear of the cockpit next to the other mon calamri both took a step and looked at each other in surprise. At the rear of the Falcon Han ran passed a few other Riptide survivors to get to the engine area and saw a huge claw gash had been torn in the underbelly of the bulk head into the interior of the ship pushing the floor up in a serrated manner. The hissing shrieks of one of the larger arachnids could be heard as more attempts to claw into the ship shoved and tore the Falcon's underbelly. Han rushed over to the cockpit comm “Lando! We're not going to get off this rock.. smash this thing on our gut into pieces!” Han finished and held onto the bulk head as the Falcon fell sharply through the forest canopy and into tree trunks smashing through them before skidding across the forest floor. The large arachnid beast on the Falcon's underside tore away and left a huge metatarsus pincer still poking through the floorboard. The Falcon skidded across a small clearing and past it to a small creek's muddy bank and came to rest half listing into the shallow water of the creek.

On board the Falcon the Riptide survivors met with Tarris around the entrance ramp that was partially in water thanks to the angle of the landing. Han Solo and Lando Calrissian waited and extraordinary long time to open the hatch ramp fearful those creatures were waiting to pounce until Chewbacca barked a reminder that with the creatures strength and the Falcon out of flying commission those creatures could have tore into the hull by now. As the ramp lowered the creek water flowed into the Falcon's interior slightly but not so deep the passengers couldn't get out. Chewbacca followed by Han and then Lando lead the rest out of the ship with weapons drawn. As they waded into the creek and took at look at the ship it was a sight to behold. The areas that had touched he creek water dissolved the white webbing and a few of the smaller torn and battered spider creatures adorned the top of the ship with. Overhead the red-gray overcast was still thick and seemed to move in all directions. Han told Chewy to go back inside and get try and get a distress call made. “Hopefully Wedge has an idea where we went down.” Han said deflated. Lando nodded as he replied “This whole place reminds me of a story I heard way back before I hooked up with you old buddy. I just can't place it.” Calrissian said as he shook his head looking at the tree line of the forest a few hundred yards away.
Han turned to his old friend “You're going to die here ya know.” Lando gave a wince and shook his head “At least I got to fly her one last time.” he replied with a sigh as the pair of men tread up the creek bank to the mud and grass to observe the rest of the Falcon's damage. After a few minutes assessing the damage some of the Riptide's technicians now sitting on the creek bank and dosing themselves with the water got Calrissians attention. “Han look!” Lando said pointing up at the gray and red overcast clouds. “I don't get it?” Han said then his eyes adjusted and the un-mistaken arrowhead silhouette of an Imperial ship formed in the clouds “Damn.” was all that Solo said when realizing the ship was above them.
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #46 on: April 29, 2019, 02:24:09 AM »
Nice update. I am off to share it.

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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #47 on: July 09, 2019, 02:50:33 PM »
((short update still working on it ..
but wanted to get this part out of the way, I've never been skilled at writing unrequitted love or tsundere romances... so this part gets its own post to get it done so the action can start picking up...
 also Kenner easter-egg for you vintage commercial watching media watching types... hehe))



Kumo survivor's Column

As the long column of imperial equipment and personnel started to crest the horizon of the Rally Point's view the rectangle silhouette of the lead imperial troop transport was clearly racing past the head of the people on foot. Inside the transport the pair of transport drivers huddled over their instruments as the scenery out of the view port raced passed. Standing between and slightly behind the pair of drivers in his olive drab uniform Captain Kai stood with a hand holding on to the side of the open doorway as he leaned on the doorways' frame and watched out the view port with a half scowl on his face as his distaste was coming to the surface of his expression. “It's confirmed from the rally-point observers as well sir.” the copilot of the transport turned his large gray mushroom sized helmet towards Kai to give the statement. “Of course it is... damned fools.” was Kai's reply. He was sure the Slipstream ducked into the large overcast of red and white mist after it had arrived in the system. Kai assumed it was the first officer Faraday that made the order since he knew Sequa enough to know if he'd been a competent commander the ship would be no where near this planet of death and reforming with the rest of the fleet that fled from the Endor debacle a few days earlier.

A moment later the image of the sand and rocks of the beach strayed into the grasslands edge as the grass turned into rocky pebbles and a sandbar that stretched out over the horizon showing the edge of the northwestern peninsula. “Finally.” A humbled and tired voice came from behind Kai. From behind Kai in a dirty soot smudged light gray crewer's uniform Vishar stood, leaning to one side trying to see past Kai's shoulder at the scenery through the forward view port. Kai turned and gave Vishar a nod before turning back towards the image of the sandbar slowly turning into sandy red terrain with high jagged rock formations making a natural border between the remnants of the grassland and the beginning of the red sandy area of the northwestern peninsula. Kai took notice of the high jagged rock formations as they jutted out of the ground remembering years early watching them being created as the Kumo fired down into the hillsides that once was the border between the sand and the grass. Now these high jagged rocky ridges were the aftermath of old Admiral Jaeger's orders to destroy the grassy hills leading to the sandy peninsula, keeping the regions separated via the ridge created by the intense barrage from the Kumo's turbo lasers.

The chime of the imperial troop transports communication channel broke Kai's memory flashback. “Yes?” Kai asked the copilot. “It's Commander Karamat Sir.” the copilot replied back. Kai leaned over the panel between the drivers and started to speak “Commander please hold your position, I'll be there momentarily.” Kai said and reach to switch off the channel. Kai ran a hand through his jet black hair to make it presentable and pulled on his tunic before turning around passed Vishar exiting the cockpit and climbing the small ladder to open the top hatch of the ITT. As he exited the hatch and balanced himself on the still moving transport he looked out and saw far off in the distance the profiles of three large mechanical AT-AT walkers in the distance trudging along. As the ITT quickly came closer to the walkers the silhouettes of the a two pairs of smaller AT-ST's could be made out at the AT-AT's flanks. The ITT was nearing the turn northwest to start traversing the small grassland edges of the ridge and make it into the rally point as one of the AT-ST's broke from he pack and headed towards Kai and the ITT. Kai had a good hunch it was Karamat. His intuition would be validated a few moments later as Vishar climbed half up the ladder notifying him Karamat was communicating to them over the comm-channel and wished to speak to Kai. “We'll speak in person.” was Kai's only reply and shot Vishar a nod to relay that message. As Kai watched Vishar disappear back down the top hatch he turned back towards the oncoming AT-ST. A moment later the 2 legged scout walker stopped. Kai winced a moment to himself hiding the faintest of smiles. Then as he expected the ITT turned slightly off the edge of the sanded beach towards the outcropping of the ridge where the scout walker had stopped. As Kai rode atop the ITT he saw the convoy of AT-AT's continue on into the ridges not waiting on the lone detoured scout walker. Another few moments and the ITT came to rest with the scout walker's large mechanical feet resting in front of the ITT's main view-port.

Kai stood on the now stationary ITT and raised a hand to his face to shade his eyes, though it was more reactionary as the overcast reddish white mist was providing adequate cover from the planet's sun. “A horrifying thought.” Kai said to himself as the hatch on the AT-ST's top popped open. From the AT-ST's hatch the mushroomed helmet of Commander Karamat ascended as she pulled herself up using her arms to bring up the weight of her legs and stood atop the hull of the AT-ST. She stood there looking down at Kai standing on the ITT looking up at her and for a slightest of microseconds she let the thought of taking control of the Kumo's survivors flash across her mind. A traitorous and criminal act. Though with his request for Onyx 1's prep she may not need to she thought. The thought quickly faded with the mental images of Kai fighting her to his death and then she shook her head to wash away an image of Kai laying dead burned and broken. Not an image she wished ever to dream again.

Kai stood atop the ITT watching Karamat pull herself up from the higher perspective of the AT-ST he faced. She stood balancing herself atop the hull of the higher AT-ST looking down at Kai on the ITT and he thought for just an instant he saw her expression change and then she shook her head slightly. “We haven't the time for pleasantries!” Kai shouted quickly after Karamat shook her head. Knowing full well she hated unneeded waste of time especially in a situation like this. But Kai did have a knack for prodding sleeping beasts, he thought to himself. Even those – his next thought was broken by Karamat's voice “WHY didn't you communicate over the comm-channel?” Karamat blurted back at Kai from above. Karamat's tone was that husky authoritarian Kai had come to recognize as her normal speech but it was laced with a hint of annoyance this time the best he could tell.

Kai gave a relieved sigh and put his hand down from shading his eyes to his waist and decided to remember he was the actual commander of the Kumo's forces and gave a stiff and commanding point to the ground while looking at Karamat and placed his hand back on his waist. It wasn't often he'd get a chance to chide Karamat on imperial procedure and this shouldn't be one of those times but he had alternative reasons for doing so. Karamat saw his hand motion and gave a slight wince as she curled the edge of her lips in annoyance and for another second the flash of Kai's burned and broken body came into her mind though this time it wasn't as painful as it had been a few moments earlier. Karamat leaned over the AT-ST's hatch and gave a command to the co-pilot to order the walker into loading position and the pair legs on the walker hummed and clicked as the circular leg joints slowly clicked into position lowering the head and body of the walker close to the ground. A moment later Karamat hopped off the walker's hull balancing herself on the leg joints and gears finding handholds where she could to reach the patchy grass dirt to place her boots on.

Kai noticed she was still in her officers uniform and armor, remembering how constricting it felt and to squeeze the armor through an AT-ST's top hatch was something he didn't wish to ever try again. As the thought finished Karamat reach the patchy ground and Kai hopped down from the ITT and walked over to meet her. As he started to walk towards her Vishar appeared from the ITT's top hatch but only halfway out and stood waist down inside the ITT on it's ladder. As Kai trudged over to the AT-ST Karamat took a few steps over to meet him. Kai's eyes noticed her features were a bit cleaner and more kept then they had been when he met her just after the Kumo crashed. Kai realized his leering and averted from her features and looked up and noticed the co-pilot wasn't Sergeant Atter but a younger mans face but he wasn't exactly sure if it was someone he knew. A few seconds passed and the two officers came within an arm's length of each other and they stopped Karamat was chiding herself internally for giving Kai a reason to mark her on a lesson on imperial doctrine with his demanding her to lower and speak to him directly. Even in the peril filled situation imperial doctrine was to be maintained at all times. Under it all Karamat had the slightest of internal satisfactions that the slipshod and carefree pilot that had turned her stomach was becoming an officer, with no short thanks to her own strict discipline over his antics. Karamat stifled the emotion a second later as Kai spoke “Reprot please Commander.”. Karamat noticed a more authoritative tone to his demeanor and for the faintest of seconds she paused to drink in Captain Kai's stature. Karamat put her arms behind her back standing with her legs at the correct measured distance apart as she replied “We've started the first stage of the plan as ordered as you can see the convoy is on it's way to the ridges for cover. The spotters made out Rebel ships heading towards their crash site but no indication they'll attack so far.”. Kai nodded as she spoke and added “And if they do, our air defensive capabilities?”. Karamat's cold gaze gave the slightest edge of softening, still extremely rigid by most anyone else's facial expressions but Kai had learned every micron of her face to know when Karamat changed emotions as they were no changes to the casual observer. Karamat replied “The rest of the ties squadron's are prepped as ordered.” Karamat said almost not expecting a follow up. But Kai intervened “And old Moon 1?” he asked her more casually. Karamat gave the slightest of pauses knowing the meaning of Kai's request. “Moon 1 was prepped with a waiting flight suit and helmet and could be flown by any of the surviving officers or pilots without a craft to fly... Captain.” Karamat emphasized the rank in her reply as she had done over the comm-channel earlier hoping that it would try and make him see the idea he had as too dangerous. “That won't be needed. You know I'll be the one taking it.” Kai said slightly softer in tone then previously.

Karamat internally cursed him for the choice. While not a fan of his way of commanding he was the most experienced with this hostile planet and still in command of the imperial forces from the Kumo. Imperial procedure would have him safely back at the rally-point no matter how much he believes it could be a target. Inside a tie in a scrap with rebel fighters is infinat more dangerous. She must have let her demeanor slip as she felt her eyes widen slightly and saw Kai's expression slightly changed from a Captain's authority to slightly surprised. She quickly pulled her professional expression over herself again hoping Kai followed suit and replied. “May I remind you that you command the survivors... Captain? You are too important to start falling into old habits.”. That last part changed Kai's expression that had started to soften back to a professional demeanor as Karamat hoped it would. Suddenly Kai turned his face from Karamat back towards the ITT and saw Vishar still half up the top hatch watching the pair of officers. “Vishar start up the ITT we'll be going in a moment.” Kai ordered which was more of a dust off for Vishar from snooping on the officers conversation as it was a way for Kai to tell himself this small conversation is more dangerous then flying his old Tie Fighter. Vishar gave a fingered salute wave and dropped back down the ITT's top hatch and a moment later it hummed to life as Kai turned back to Karamat.

Karamat was glad to be rid of the eavesdropper and watched Vishar disappear into the ITT and expected this small unneeded face to face conversation to end now that Kai was readying to leave. What Karamat didn't expect was Kai's next words as he turned and looked at her for a long hard few seconds “Thank you, Vareese.” Kai simply replied. Karamat's icy expression faded for a long moment trying to decipher his words. She had almost replied in quirt tone -of course you are, I trained you-. But Karamat internally shook her said and started to tell Kai enough “Thats not nee-”. “No.” Kai interrupted her holding his hand up. Karamat gave an audible exhale from her nostrils as she was about done with Kai pretending to play disciplinary one moment and his normal laissez faire attitude the next.

“Thank you, Vareese for everything” Kai started as he looked first at the ground and up at her as her green eyes had slightly widened in surprise. For an instant Kai thought of looking away as he felt his face flush red. His old self would have decided to pull her to him but he knew it'd only end with a bloody face if not more. Kai choked the feeling down and gave a sigh and saluted Karamat as she stood a moment motionless then nodded as she replied “Is that all Captain?” Karamat said with the annoyance gone from her tone. “No, tell your husband he's a lucky man.” Kai said almost blurting his words out. Karamat arced an eyebrow as the cold demeanor she was known to have came back over the surprised expression that Kai's earlier words had caused. Karamat was about to reply when Kai spoke again quickly with a more professional tone “Good hunting sir.” Kai said giving Karamat a nodding salute. Karamate returned the salute almost on instinct and gave a nod to Kai. Captain Kai turned from Karamat and walked towards the ITT and pulled himself on top of it as Karamat imitated him by pulling herself up the body of the still lowered AT-ST.

Karamat slid half into the top-hatch and turned to look down at ITT with Kai on it as the scout walkers body rose up to full height. Internally she felt surprised by the timing of the Captain's words but not as much by their message. She had thought herself a very attractive disciplinary mentor to many others and Kai was just one of those that saw her in light other then merely professional she told herself. Her mind tracked slowly to the thought of her husband the tall beautiful man with short blond hair and a wide grin. A moment later Karamat's imagination drifted as she sat down in the pilot's cushion of the scout walker and the image of Kai's broken and burned body reappeared in her minds eye and she stifled the urge to reach for the comm-channel to press her doubts on him flying in the wings defense.

Back at the ITT Kai sat on the top of it's hull watching Karamats' scout walker speed up to reform with the rest of the convoy of imerpial walkers deeper into the rocky ridges that separated the grasslands from the northwestern sandy peninsula. Kai heard Vishar come up the ladder and again stopped half way “We'll be at the rally-point in the next few minutes, we didn't lose much time.” Vishar reported. Kai had mentally noted how much Vishar wanted away from the grasslands to the safety of the peninsula. Not realizing with the Alliance forces now around the planet the safety was only half measured.


Aranae System edge-

A lone X-wing fighter exits hyperspace into the system heading towards the planet. The battered and laser scored fighter flew gracefully as it swooped around wreckage from Kumo's fighters and the Alliance vessel that exploded over the planets atmosphere. The pale and red pain scheme on the fighter shown its squad designation on the wing with five chevron's depicting its call-sign. Inside the cockpit the astromech droid readout flashes text across it's screen and the pilot turns with a half smile on his face towards his old friend “I know , it looks like a mess down there.” The pilot said as the blue and white astromech droid beeped and whistled its dubious tones toward the pilot.

A moment later the astromech driod beeped and whistled an acknowledging sound as the pilot looked around and nodded in agreement “They're hailing us?” the pilot said reaching over in his orange flight suit and pressing one of the buttons on his controls activating his comm-channel the channel opened with static before a voice could be heard “ksh-mder of the Alliance vessel. Please identify yourself.” The pilot click on his transmitting function and replied “This is Commander Skywalker of Rogue Squadron. Here to lend assistance.” The pilot replied as he looked over to the far edge of the planet's circumference catching the silhouette of the Nebulon-B escort frigate. A second later the voice over the comm-channel came on in a lighter tone “Glad to have you with us Commander. We'll send crashed Alliance coordinates momentarily, there's a ton of interference from the planet's atmosphere.” Luke replied into the comm system “I read ya. I'll wait for transmission.” he said in a friendly tone.

A moment later a more serious expression came over Luke's face as he closed his eyes, as if feeling for an emotion. He then mouthed a few words inaudible and smiled still with his eyes closed and gave a wide grin “Take care and thank you again. Make sure to stay in touch.” Luke said as R2 beeped as he opened his eyes. The boyish grin on his face still showing as he looked over the readouts of the X-wing “No R2, we're not leaving. I just was saying goodluck to old friends.” Luke said as the words and images of Ben and Anakin faded from the force perspective he had entered. They spoke to him in soft tones and he was glad to know he'd be able to speak to Ben and more eagerly his father Anakin more often eventually.
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #48 on: July 11, 2019, 08:41:12 AM »
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #49 on: March 09, 2020, 12:33:13 AM »
((Back again, haven't forgotten the struggle and strife of the Rebels and Imps on planet Aranae. In light of some recent events i've been able to start making the story into a Photonovel, w/Diorama's galore.... that will happen eventually. HOWEVER I'm in need of imperial officer caps, there's 5 sizes I know of large/small black and Large/Medium/Small greyish-green. see pics below....))





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Wow, turning this into a photonovel sounds great. Off to share your update.

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I agree! Seeing the different head sculpts and hats alone triggers me! I certainly know what I'm going to read after my exam next week! Looking forward to seeing you turn your Story into a photonovel! Awesome stuff here!

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((writers note: .. ugh... 7 days a week as an essential worker means Rezikai didnt proofread this chapter... typos and run on sentences galore! ... however i'll be posting some rough test pics of this story as a photonovel w/no backgrounds and such in the next few days.))
Over planet Aranae

The tri-winged silhouette of a tyderium shuttle flew through the northern edges of the great red mist cloud that had until a few minutes earlier been giving sufficient cloud cover for the majority of the continent. It was Imperial Army officer Major Gridon's luck that it had thinned and started to dissipate as his rendezvous was going to take place. He leaned over the controls and gave instruction to the younger man in an imperial naval trooper uniform to land at the coordinates he dictated.
   Gridon's shuttle came to rest at a small clearing on the northeastern section of the main continent. The thick forest treeline was close enough to give most casual scanner observers a few extra seconds of coverage before they could be seen from a low orbit. If any rebel or imperial ships happened to pinpoint the area from atmosphere the vantage point would give them clear site of the clearing. But that far away mean Gridon would have time to escape. Not that he assumed the rebels nor imperials would waste resources for a perceived rogue angry imperial army officer that fled his post. No that was the ruse he had kept up this whole time. The gruff exterior and overbearing way aura to keep up his deception of an army officer disgruntled by a younger and less experienced leader taking his rightful command over him. Nothing could be further from the truth however. Gridon got high enough for influence but made sure not to allow too many victories or chances for imperial glory to be grasped as to keep his position safe.
   A few moments later a battered Koensayer Y-Wing was spotted on his ships sensors and a few moments later it came to rest itself in the same small clearing nose to nose with Gridon's shuttle. Girdon adjusted his uniform and he and the younger man walked out of the cockpit into the crew area where the bodies of the imperial stormtroopers and the other imperial naval trooper assigned to the young escort now with Gridon laid. Gridon didn't give the bodies of the imperials a second thought. He had no love for imperials and their usefulness to his escape plan had given his apprentice a chance to make his escape with him. Gridon shot a glance back a the younger man in the naval uniform also stepping over the armored troopers. When these imperials had outlived their usefulness they were terminated as all who learn too much of FOCI must be. That thought made the image of Araed, and how she had overplayed her hand in hinting she knew what Gridon's true motives were. “Foolish woman.” Gridon thought to himself as the tyderium's exit ramp lowered and he started to descend.
   From across the nose of the imperial shuttle the pilot of the Y-wing watched the imperial vessel's “mouth” open with the disembark ramp lower. A second later a pair of humans in imperial uniforms stepped down the ramp. The rebel pilot slowly disengaged his cockpit's canopy and opened it to one side. The Mon Calamari pilot was Commander Vorm and he let his large squid-like eyes half close as his as a dubious expression came over his face. Vorm had his doubts about this mission, in fact he had thought this entire venture a fools errand but it was Captain Barrax's orders and he trusted Barrax serving with the Captain for a few years now.
   As the pair of imperials stopped at the bottom of their shuttles' ramp Vorm stood up in his cockpit. Vorm hadn't expected there to be two of them. The backseat of his Y-wing could carry a sole passenger and that was for his contact FOCI. Vorm was given his description just hours earlier while in the makeshift flight area of the Riptides crashed material. He thought the idea of picking up an imperial ludicrous considering the situation the Riptide's crew was put into but he knew Barrax wouldn't have dissension among pilots not wanting to contradict orders even in these extremely taxing situations. “Your the pick up?” Vorm projected his Mon Calamari voice as he watched the pair of humans. He directed his large squid like features at Gridon who was in front of the younger man. From below and in front of the nose of the Y-wing the older man with dark hair and a white stripe in the front gave a barked reply towards Vorm.
   “I am Major Gridon, that's correct.” Gridon replied his voice back to the harsh tone he used when keeping up his persona. Gridon looked over the Mon Calamari and wasn't thrilled with sharing a cockpit with a rebel let alone the backseat of a slow bomber trying to make its way back to rebel controlled skies. He mentally gave himself a pat on the back for bringing the shuttle and his apprentice along. Vorm gave a nod towards the older of the pair of imperials and gave a half wave with his right webbed hand towards his backseat of his fighter. Gridon raised his hand while shaking his head. “No need, we'll bring the shuttle with us. Just let your Captain Barrax was it? Let him know the shuttle is designated friendly.” Vorms half lowered lids on his large fishlike eyes opened and dropped half shut again. This FOCI knew of Captain Barrax but seemed to not have any appreciation in his tone for the Captain who set up this whole rendezvous for this FOCI's rescue. “That's fine.” Vorm agreed. Vorm knew he'd get an ear full from the Captain for not demanding the target come in his fighter securely but given the extreme circumstances he assumed the Captain will let it slide. By now the pair of humans were standing in the space between the pair of vessels. The rebel Y-wing facing them and the imperial shuttle at their back. “Also my friend here comes along, he's my protege.” Gridon finished. Vorm only had orders for the Major and couldn't care less if the other imperial wanted to defect to be with his mentor. Vorm gave a quick nod and replied “As long as he keeps this to himself. Vorm demanded in a slightly more aggressive tone. Gridon seemed to have a half second of thought before turning back to the younger man in the all black naval trooper uniform and spoke “We'll follow him in on his tail. After that we'll continue with our plans on where to go.” Gridon finished saying towards the younger man nodding at Gridon's statement. Gridon turned and started to tell Vorm the his plan to guide them into the rebel ships position.
   A moment later a rustle from the treeline caught the attention of the Vorm and the younger naval trooper. Gridon was too busy giving instructions to Vorm as he nodded agreeing to whatever this mole wanted as long as it doesn't compromise what happened in today's morning. Vorm turned away from the rustle in the treeline just as a large white streak flew across the the y-wing. Vorm ducked down away from the incoming streak as his training to dodge laser fire in combat kicked in. The white streak of webbing shot over the y-wing and landed on the ground in a pile of goo. Gridon and the naval trooper turned towards the treeline as the naval trooper drew his weapon as he and Gridon hunkered over to look for some kind of cover as if they may be coming under ground fire. A second later the large dark form of an arachnids legs and body came to the edge of the treeline hissing in a shriek as another long white shot of webbing shot at the pair of imperials.
   Within the next few seconds of the missed webbing Vorm ducked to avoid he sat back up in his cockpit and started up the launch sequence letting the hum of the Y-wings engine come on. Gridon avoided the second shot from the arachnid and ran towards the shuttle ramp to stop short as another white shot of webbing goo hit the bottom of the loading ramp less then a meter in front of Gridon. The beast had anticipated him fleeing up the ramp. Gridon turned to see a pair of red bolts of laser fire launch from his naval trooper apprentice striking the arachnid beast. Gridon turned away from the ramp and ran towards the Y-wing.

   Vorm had completed the start up sequence as Gridon jumped up the the Y-wings body using the engine nacelle  to climb up on the Y-wings cocktpit and jumped into the backseat with Vorm who was closing the canopy to the fighter as it lifted off the ground. The next second the another shot of webbing stretched out towards the Y-wing and landed on the side of the cockpit fuselage. Vorm turned seeing the white sticky mess on his port side “Bah.. dam thing!” Vorm cursed as Gridon settled into the rear seat he shouted looking at the same white webbing “Just kill it and get us on our way!” Gridon barked. Vorm ruffled his mouth at his disgust being shouted at by an imperial but he also had planned to shoot off this animal whatever it was Vorm thought. While the webbing tried to pull on the Y-wing Vorm banked it to it's port side and turned the fighter's nose guns towards the arachnid still mostly hidden in the shadow of the treeline. Vorm opened up at the shadowy area the arachnid had shot the webbing from. The laser shots landed in the shadows and the tree trunks of the treeline catching a few of them on fire after leaving dark score marks. A second later a hard lurch jerked the Y-wing surprising both Vorm and Gridon “Ah!” Gridon shouted as the cockpit rocked from the unseen tether pulling on the white webbing. Vorm turned the fighters guns towards the white and fired burning through it after a few shots. Another shot of webbing lashed out from the shadows of the treeline this time landing on the nose of the Y-wing covering one of the guns. Unlike the previous shots of webbing this one was more of a glob without the rope of web attached to it leading back to the treeline. Vorm cursed again “Damn thing is persistent!” He shouted. Gridon turned to see the second blast of webbing covering half the nose of the Y-wing and exclaimed “Forget the indigs, just get us airborne.” He huffed.
   A moment later Gridon remembered his apprentice on the ground and turned his vision to see the Naval trooper leaping over the patch of webbing at the base of the shuttle's ramp and head up into it. “Good.” Gridon mumbled when another shot of webbing came from the treeline this time from a different position hitting the side of the cockpit with a WUMP! Gridon gave a scared and surprised cry “Ah!” as it landed and Vorm turned to his starboard side unsure if it was a new target or the same that had moved. This clump of webbing was much like the first with the long rope of white goo leading back to the treeline becoming taught and pulling against the cockpit. Like before Vorm banked the Y-wing to the right this time and opened fire on the white rope of goo but this time only one of the front nose guns opened fire. The starboard side burned and overloaded being covered in webbing from the earlier shot. “This is getting troublesome!” Vorm exclaimed and then fired the singe nose gun into the rope of webbing and after several shots he burned through it. Vorm decided to raise the Y-wing higher in the air as another shot of webbing just missed the undercarriage of the Y-wing. “We'll head out.” Vorm shouted back towards Gridon. Gridon had his vision locked on the imperial shuttle that had closed it's walk ramp a few moments earlier as the Y-wing had lifted up out of arachnid's range and now started to lift off. “We will guide in my assistant.” Gridon said. Vorm gave a half audible huff and had started to comment on the shuttle staying with them when suddenly a pair of the huge arachnids leaped from the treeline and landed on the shuttle as it tried to take off. “Stang!” Vorm cried out nodding at the shuttle. “Too slow to take off.” Was all Gridon said as the pair of arachnids started to tear into the hull of the shuttle. A second later Vorm turned the Y-wing towards the shuttle as the pair of craft lifted higher into the air. “I can try and blast them off.” Vorm said turning his squid like head towards Gridon. “No. He has to learn to take care of himself.” Was Gridon's reply. Vorm found the other mans composure cold. Vorm waited a second as he was a bit taken aback at Gridon's words but then turned to his controls and banked the Y-wing away from the shuttle “Fine.” Was the only reply Vorm gave to Gridon as their fighter pulled away from the area still drapped in the sticky white webbing.
   A moment later the imperial shuttle was struggling to lift off started shuttered. In the cockpit the young imperial sat at the controls trying to steady the craft as he turned the nose of the shuttle skyward. As the view of the treeline started to raise away the dark long legs of one of the arachnids clattered over the  roof of the shuttle and then slide down the nose as it screeched and started tearing into the shuttles nose. Gridon's assistant frantically banked the shuttle over to its side quickly and watched the arachnid fall back to the ground with a half bounce and skitter in a circle below the shuttle as it did more screeching from the other arachnid on the back of the shuttle started ripping into the dorsal fin of the shuttle hanging on by impaling the sharp ends of its legs through the shuttles dorsal fin and started shooting more webbing onto the shuttles body to keep attached to it. The young man at the controls tried to rise and fall to shake the beast loose but the shuttle wasn't designed to make quick radical moves while in atmosphere and the maneuver started to shutter the shuttles hull and fins. Gridon's assistant cursed under his breathe trying to keep the shuttle from spinning out of control as he flew away form the landing area now over the trees. A moment later another loud screech came from the arachnid on the shuttle's hull as the sound of more ripping metal came from the top of the shuttles hull. The young imperial was in a near panic as he flicked switches and clicked buttons to spin the  shuttle more to shake the arachnid free. The young man was mid motion flipping switches when a blue arc of light filled the cockpit.
   As the arachnid clung to the shuttles hull screeching and tearing into the outer hull when the shuttle slowly rotated over exposing its underbelly to the sky. The arachnid holding onto the dorsal fin started to claw its way up to the body of the shuttle. It was midway up the dorsal fin when the shuttle sped up and dipped hard into the treetops smashing its fins into the treetops raking the arachnid into the trees it screeched as it struggled to hang onto the dorsal fin but after a few seconds enough treetops tore into the beast and it pulled free of the shuttle and jumped into the trees. A second later the shuttle lifted itself from the treetops still upside down and slowly rotated itself right side up as it continued upwards heading up into the lower atmosphere passing into the reddish white cloud that was slowly starting to dissipate.
   
   

Millennium Falcon crash site.

Almost half an hour had passed since the Falcon fell into the trees and skidded into the shallow creek and rested half sank into the water and Solo had come outside to see the arrow head shaped imperial ship in low orbit. Most of the Riptide's survivors were standing on the bank of the small river watching the large wookiee Chewbacca kneeling on top of the rear quarter of the YT-1300 pulling off panels and working on the internal workings of the Falcon. The landing ramp was lowered and half sank into the the creeks water. Standing in the water was a tall Corellian man with his hands on his hips and a disgusted look on his face. “Well how bad is it?” Han Solo shouted up to Chewy. A pair of short controlled roars from Chewbacca was the reply the wookiee gave without looking up from the opened maintenance panel.
   In the cockpit of the Falcon Lando Calrissian sat in the pilot seat clicking buttons on and off. Lando flipped a switch and talked into the mic on the control panel. “That's the one Chewy.” Lando said testing the control panel. A moment later Han entered the cockpit tracking in water and sitting in the copilot seat with an annoyed expression. “It's not as bad as we thought at least.” Lando said trying to ease the tension. Han gave a huff and exhaled “We need to get airborne before any of those things decide to come after us.” Han said in a short dejected tone. Lando gave a nod and looked out the cockpit behind the Falcon to see the small group of Mon Calamari's on the bank of the creek.
   On the creek bank Tarris and the other about a dozen other Mon Cala's dipped their webbed hands and feet into the water basting each other in the clear liquid hydrating their skin and pours of their fish like bodies. A sudden blur of movement in the distance was caught by one of the Mon cala pouring water over his face and he backed up from the water towards the hull of the Falcon. A second later the rest of the group wadding in the river took notice of a shape trudging along the riverbank in the distance. After a few moments of tense silence Lt. Tarris noticed the curious figure moving towards their group and called out “Identify yourself!” she yelped as she took a few steps backward towards the Falcon with the rest of the mon calamari's as a of officers force from the Riptide pulled their water logged blasters. In the distance the figure slowly took form at first the shape was odd, it was larger then a humanoid but not as large as the arachnid beasts. The figure slowly started to separate into two distinct figures both seemingly humanoid in shape. After a few moments a female voice called out “Friendlies!” Tarris gave a slight sigh of relief and trudged along the riverbank towards the figures. Two of the other half dozen remaining Mon Cala wadding in the river came with Tarris both being the security forces with the blasters.
   As the figures came closer the distinct shapes of a man and a woman came into view. The man a blonde haired human was in the lead walking more measured steps with his black uniform easily identifying him as an imperial tie pilot. The woman walking behind him was slightly taller and also blonde wearing her green and white flight suit from her A-wing. They came closer still as the woman spoke up aloud and projecting her voice so the mon Cala's could hear “Lt. Aerrel Tritan. From Dryce's Deck.” Tarris took the other woman's words with a measured trust and called back as they both came closer to the Falcon “Lieutenant what was your designate and your co-pilot's designate?” Tarris said letting the ruse slip between the sentence. If this was Tritan she'd pick up on it easily. As the pair of blonde humans came closer to the mon cala's Triton spoke up loudly “There was no copilot of course, we Ace flyers are solo jobs, but I was the SPEAR and my wing-man was LONGSPEAR.” Triton said confidently. Tarris's fish-like mouth smiled wide and she and the other pair of Riptide officers rushed over to the pair. The two security officers keeping their blasters trained on the imperial while Tarris ran up to Tritan and gave her a squeezing hug. “We thought you were dead!” Tarris exclaimed. Tritan nodded and wiggled free from Tarris' hug replying “I almost was, this one here was nearly the end of me. But he was a bit fresh in grav-couch.” Tritan teased as she lifted the nuzzle of her blaster pointing it at the imperial pilot's back. Tarris gave a frown towards the blonde imperial pilot standing there with his hands now in the air as the pair of mon cala security picked over his flight-suit. “He'll pay for his crimes.” she said to Tritan. Aerrel nodded “He's got quite a fury in him but he's went silent since I captured him.” Tarris let her fishlike eyelids half close over her eyes “He was talking to you prior?” Tritan shook her head “No, more like demanding, pointing a blaster in my face and screaming about something.” Tritan finished and put the nuzzle in the imperial's back. “We'll take him from here Lieutenant.” One of the mon calamari officers said and marched Lt. Vanders away and behind the Falcon. Tarris and Tritan closely followed behind as Tritan greeted the rest of the survivor's from the Riptide at the base of the Falcon's loading ramp.
   Tritan and Tarris chatted a few moments about the current status of the Falcon's repair work and offered to help. Tarris waded into the creek and waved a webbed hand up at the Falcon's cockpit where Han and Lando were working on the Falcon's systems. “General Solo! The Lieutenant would like to assist in the repairs. Solo waved back from behind the Falcon's segmented cockpit windows and waved the pair to come up.
   Inside the cockpit Han and and mon calamari technician worked with some tools on open control panels in the rear of the Falcon's cockpit. Lando sat in the pilot seat clicking buttons and switches and talked into the intercom “That's it for that one Chewie.” Aerrel and Tarris strode up to the rear entrance of the cockpit and gave a nod to Han who was twisting a few wires together. “General, the Lieutenant just dropped off a prisoner and wants to help with repairs and we're wanting to help.” Han didn't turn to them right away cursing under his breath as a small spark of electricity popped as he finished connecting some of the wiring he was working on “Fine, one of you get in the top gun turret just in case our large legged friends come to finish us off. I figured we'd be in the air by now.” he grumbled. “I told ya this was worse then you thought.” Lando grumbled back from the pilot seat without looking back. A look of annoyance came across Han's face as he turned finally facing the Mon calamari officer and the human A-wing pilot offering assistance. “You two can decide who gets in the gun turret the other put the prisoner out somewhere out of the way. Then help the techs get the deck plates and inner hull panels space worthy in the rear quarter of the Falcon.” After explaining the prisoner was already taken away to an isolated area outside the Falcon to which Han nodded and continued working on the control panels. Aerrel and Tarris both nodded in reply and turned deciding who was going to take what. Aerrel decided to help the other mon calamari techs welding the internal hull plates near the commons area of the Falcon while Tarris decided to post up inside the top gun turret.



ICC Slipstream...

Deep in the Slipstream's decks Lieutenant Klavine strode the corridor's passing imperial technicians and the occasional stormtrooper. His Grey uniform and black cap given to him from Admiral Sequa let him fit into the aesthetic of the crew easily enough. Though some of of the officers did take a quick glance at his face as if trying to place a name to go with him as if he were a recent transfer to the crew they hadn't been made aware of. Klavine had been in his tiny quarters and went over his data pad given to him by the Imperial Admiral before being escorted to said quarters. The data pad had a few bits of information regarding imperial munitions movements and a message popped up after a few minutes on it.

[[[Once settled head to the flight bay and take inventory of all spacecraft and select one of the smaller hyperspace able shuttles for your use. Then return to your quarters and give your findings with the data cylinder to one of the stormtroopers that will be sent to your quarters once you've returned. -S ]]]

“Awfully confident”. Klavine thought to himself as the image of Sequa's smiling face appeared in his mind. Maybe he should just take one of the craft hyperspace ready and run. Klavine cracked a small smile then it faded when he remembered as soon as he cleared the bay or maybe even before the Slipstreams gravity wells would snatch him up. “Fine.” He thought to himself “I'll see where this little game leads.”. So Klavine was on his way to the flight bays. A few times along the way he almost thought about torching this old man's plan and taking his A-wing back and running for the planet if he couldn't jump from the system. He contemplated the idea a few times until he reach the flight bay of the Slipstream that dashed those hopes in a instant as he saw flight crews and maintenance workers readying the ties on the interdcitor cruiser for launch.
   Klavine looked down into his datapad trying to act as natural as any of the other techs in the large hangar bay. He slowly made his way to his A-wing and his rebellious ambitions were dashed seeing the maintenance crews had been tearing into his A-wings cockpit and had strewn wiring and circuit boards about the A-wings cockpit as the covers to the control panels were laid on and around the small fighter's hull. Klavine gave a defeated sigh and looked at his data pad again and decided to think about Sequa's offer in earnest this time. Perhaps the old man anticipated Klavine's escapist line of thinking and be part of the mythical FOCI organization he claimed. FOCI was a cryptic word used by admiral's and generals to give weight a strategy or information gathered. For years Klavine thought the organization didn't really exist. Yet this Imperial admiral had claimed to be part of it. A more sinister thought crossed Klavine's mind as the image of Sequa revealing his association and offer to join FOCI so casually. The sentence the imperial admiral used about using the imperial's as tools echoed in Klavine's mind and he looked down at the gray imperial tech suit he wore. Klavine gritted his teeth and continued to take visual note of the hangar as maintenance and ordinance crews on elevated platforms worked on touch ups on the tie fighters hanging in their racks.
   A few minutes in the crews started to scatter and move around as if something had changed. Klavine didn't bother to care what it was, he was more interested in getting off this imperial ship as fast as he could. A few moments later he came across a trio of shuttles tucked into the far rear corner of the hangar bay. Klavine gave a confident stride over to them looking at the data pad and pretending to make entries on it as he approached them to sell his charade to any casual onlookers. As Klavine got closer another gray clad technician came from around the body of the closest shuttle and gave a half nod as if acknowledging a fellow tech. Klavine returned the nod as he drew closer and pretended to punch a few more entries into his data pad. Klavine looked over the trio of shuttles parked corner of the hangar. One was a Lambda T-4 a shuttle polished and cleaned to imperial specs. Its black transparasteel view port polished to a black fine reflective finish. Klavine assumed that would be Sequa's personal vessel. Adjacent to Sequa's shuttle were a pair of score marked and rugged worn looking Sentinel shuttles.
   Klavine assumed Sequa intended him to take choose the flashy command shuttle but Klavine knew that would be too expected. Not that Klavine expected himself to steal and escape successfully with any of the shuttles at the moment just chose one for later use. Klavine looked over the pair of Sentinel shuttles remembering to occasionally pause and punch in some imaginary data on the pad. Both shuttles had seen action with its carbon scoring and repaired hull welds showing. Klavine opened the boarding ramp to the first shuttle and looked inside seeing the seating for troops in the rear area looking in adequate condition. He went to the cockpit and tested some of the internal low power tests but not starting up the shuttle and garnering any unneeded attention. Klavine left the shuttle and closed it's ramp and went to the second Sentinel and inspected it as well.
   Inside the troop area had many of its seats removed and maintenance equipment where they had been. Around the internal hull control panels and sidewalls were removed with bits of wiring frayed and exposed with their panels left open. Klavine went to the cock pit and tested the power and like the first showed it was ready to power up if needed for a dust off. Klavine gave a smirk of approval then turned and left the Sentinel and closed its ramp deciding this was the best to use as an escape vehicle of the three shuttles. After some fake data pad entry to any onlookers Klavine noticed something had changed in the minutes since he started inspecting the shuttles. The technicians and maintenance crews were rushing around  in double quick time as they finished spot checks put away energizer stands as they hustled back and forth over platforms along with pilots scrambling to get back into their cockpits. The increased activity started raising internal concerns in Klavine's mind and he decided not to get caught up by any techs that in a rush noticed he wasn't. After another quick moment Klavine decided to leave the hangar in a quickened step as to avoid any unwanted attention as he strode out of the hangar with his datapad unsure of what the correct course of action would be. A  quick moment dodging other technicians in the corridors of the Slipstream he decided to humor Sequa with his request. Perhaps instead of blasting his way out of the ship Sequa was serious about his offer or at least serious enough to allow Klavine to use the Sentinel with it's interior torn apart to leave this imperial ship and return to the Rebellion.


Commander Faraday barked orders at her crew pits as the reddish white clouds dissipated. Strangely enough as the cloud cover giving the Slipstream its hidden position dissipated it seemed to sink lower into the planets atmosphere near the top of the forests treetops and seemed to coalesce into a much smaller condensed form of its original self. Faraday gritted her teeth as her eyes were affixed on the forward view port at the small bright illumination of the engines of the Rebel frigate and the danger it posed. “Status!” she barked at an officer in the starboard crewpit. A young dark haired officer in his grey-green uniform looked up replying “It's seen us, sensors swept over us 2 minutes ago our scans say.” Faraday's expression went from annoyance to slight frustration “Are the crews still at the ready?” she said back to the port crewpit. An older red haired female officer in a black uniform and cap replied “Still at the ready Commander ready to launch.” Faraday sucked in air between her teeth. She wanted to launch fighters immediately and attack the frigate but doing so meant the rebel ship would call back their fighters and shuttles currently moving their people from the surface crash. More then likely they'll wait until they have all their people aboard before going hostile she thought to herself.
   Faraday gave a wince and started to ask something when a technician called over to the scanner officer loud enough that Faraday could hear “What is it?” she called out. The young man in the gray-green uniform looked up from the technicians read out “A new signal from the edge of the system moving in fast. It's signature reads as a rebel fighter  X-wing class.” the officer finished. “A rear sentry perhaps.” Faraday said aloud. “Keep an eye on it while we prepare defensive measures.” Faraday finished. The officers in the crew pits acknowledged but the sense of dread was worn openly on their faces. Faraday knew they took a beating a day and a half ago and didn't want to get into a battle so soon again. “Too bad.” she said to herself under her breathe. Her brother was on the Kumo and dead or alive she'll be taking him back.




Red Squadron...

With the horizon of the planet quickly descending below his X-wing rebel pilot and red-leader Wedge Antilles ascended into the lower atmosphere to make sure his transmissions were received without interference. The image of the arrow headed interdictor cruiser lighting up on his cockpit scanner readings meant that the entire situation has changed drastically. “This is Red Leader to Harken's Threat, do you read?” Wedge said as he held down the transmission button in his cockpit. A moment later a crackle through his cockpit's speaker came through with the voice of the Harken's captain. “We read you Red Leader. Things have gotten serious up here.” He replied. “So I read, any trouble from our new friend yet?” Wedge replied anxiously. Captain Jogen's voice returned through the speaker “Not yet, but considering they've been here a while they might have not expected to be found out so quickly.”
   The words sat there a half second and just as Wedge was about to reply a new voice came in through his receiver “Ya know Wedge, we can go do a fly by and see if they'll take a shot at us.” the familiar voice of Luke Skylwalker filled Wedge's ears. “Luke! Glad to have you with us boss!” Wedge replied excitedly as a smile started to creep across his face “Wedge, I just made it in-system. Captain Jogen said you were covering shuttles with the survivor's? Were Han and the others with you?” Wedge's demeanor clouded slightly, “We got as many as we could before these beasts attacked us. They were spider-like and very tough even for our cannons.” Wedge held the breathe a second before continuing “A few of them pounced on Generals Solo and Calrissian and brought the Falcon down in the forest in the middle of the continent.” Less then a second after finishing his words Luke blurted in “Are they hurt?” Wedge gave a half breathe as he replied “As far as we heard no, General Solo said they fought the beasts off but the Falcon took damage and has to be repaired before she's space worthy again. Hopefully he can hold out.” Wedge finished the words and waited for a reply which came almost instantly “He can, he's a pretty good card player.” Luke said with a smirk across his face and continued “Wedge after you ferry the last of the survivor's to the frigate form up a sentry line around it but hold some of your fighters back to engage if needed we're going to take a look at that drag ship.”
   Luke finished speaking as Wedge's voice crackled back through the com-channel “I'll have them up and ready in less then a 10 minutes.” Wedge said with anxiousness in his voice. Luke held onto Wedge's words a moment before gritting his teeth and opening his comm again. “Send me the coordinates your fighters saw the Falcon go down at I'll see if I can get Han a hand.” Wedge nodded in his cockpit towards his comm speaker as he replied “Sending them now Luke.” Wedge replied and punched the navi-computers buttons on his control panels as he transmitted the information to Artoo inside Luke's X-wing. A moment later Luke's X-wing dashed downwards towards the forested center of the planet below them as Wedge turned his attention back up towards the shuttles and fighters heading back to the frigate.

Harken's Threat bridge...

Captain Jorgen turned to the communications officer a young human man in his standard rebel naval uniform and replied to him with a questioning tone “Are you sure?” The young man at the communications station nodded as he replied “Yes sir, they haven't activated their grav-wells yet but they are jamming all but short range transmissions. Captain Jorgen rubbed a hand over his layered skin mouth his Bith race was distinct for having. “Something about this doesn't add up. They know we've been here and now that they're found out they sit there?” He turned to the human man with dark hair in a rebel uniform standing next to a holo-table. “Perhaps they were damaged during the fight at Endor a few days ago and weren't able to make repairs to their gravity wells.” Was the reply of the Harken Threat's first officer. “Hmmm possible but unlikely, why come out to this nearly unknown system. Why not a shipyard or repair station to get repp'd and refitted?” Jorgen said as he turned back to a clear navi-display attached to a small bench and table at the side of the bridge. A second later he turned back to the first officer “Let's get our fighters up here immediately.” Jorgen finished.


Interdictor Slipstream Bridge...

“THIS IS INSANE! Not only does it border on treason! It's going to get us all killed!” Was the bark of protest from Commander Farday towards the Slipstreams commanding officer, Admiral Sequa. It was notable that the Admiral was again on the bridge. An unusual fact the bridge crew in their pits and consoles had taken notice of. Only in times of extreme importance did Admiral Sequa bless them with multiple visits in the same rotation. Commander Faraday's protest was heard throughout the bridge over the heads of the technicians and gunners putting their heads down and dared not be caught looking up at the Faraday face to face with Sequa on the command walkway. “Plans or not that ship has to be disabled or they'll bring more rebel ships and we wont be able to outrun nor outgun them all.” Faraday said her brow furrowed in discontent at the gray bearded Sequa. Sequa to his credit didn't interrupt her during her emotional outburst even though he had the rank and the wish to. “I understand your concerns Commander and they are noted however a more pressing matter is upon us.”
   Sequa let the conversation die there and thought of a few minutes prior to Lieutenant Klavine being escorted back to meet him and telling him the gutted Lambda shuttle was his choice. Sequa gave the younger man a pair of datapads to be read in-transit and he was to take the shuttle out of the system immediately. As Sequa's words cleared away one of the communications technicians spoke up “Admiral, we have an incoming transmission.” Sequa turned to the middle aged man with brown hair “From the rebels?” Sequa scoffed. “No sir, an imperial code.” The man replied punching buttons on his console. Sequa gritted his teeth would Klavine be as obnoxious enough to out himself now that he's just gotten back to the lambda shuttle? Sequa wondered. “What's the source?” Sequa said in a slightly authoritarian tone. The technician looked up at the admiral “It's from Captain Kai, sir. He apparently survived the Kumo's crash.”. Sequa gave a half frown before replying “Put him through...” He said nonchalantly. A moment later the crackle of a microphoned voice came through the console as Sequa stood over the man overlooking him from the command walkway. “--aday, listen! He's alive. He's hurt but alive. If you have any compliment of fighters ready them I'll have mine sky bound in less then 5 minutes. Wait for my signal then launch. Don't make a hostile move against the rebel ships yet until we're skyborne.” The hastened voice of Captiain Kai said coming through the comm-channel. Sequa simply pointed at the communications officer with a finger and nodded giving him the signal to open a channel to reply. Faraday who was a moment ago angered by the unwillingness by the Admiral to engage the rebel ship walked over to Sequa with a half apologetic glance and because she wanted to listen to Kai's words. “Admiral Sequa here Capain. We're going to be activating the gravity wells in a few moments we can't allow any of them to leave the system and bring reinforcements. You'll have to join the fray afterwards.” Sequa finished. The words sat for a second before Kai's voice cracked back “Wait until the last second if you can Admiral. The crashed rebel ship had fighters and crews up and flight worthy along with whatever else they've brought into the system.” Kai finished.
   Sequa winced. The rebel frigate and fighters were going to be a challenge for the Slipstreams fighters and crew as is, if they have additional support from the planet this will quickly turn into a real scrap against the rebels. Sequa pointed again at the communications officer who nodded and opened the mic “Move quickly Captain.” was all that Sequa replied. Faraday stood behind him gritting her teeth. Kai had said “he was hurt” did he mean her brother? Did he know that much about him. Her mind raced if they attacked the battle would be difficult if they waited the rebels were sure to bring additional reinforcements. Her thoughts were cut off by one of the flight officers in the adjacent crew pit behind her and Sequa
   “Sir, one of the Sentinel's is leaving the main bay.” Faraday spun around on her boot heel “What?! Who?” She barked at the young brown haired man who raised a hand signaling he wasn't in contact with the pilot. “No need to worry Commander.” came the words from Sequa still at the edge of the opposite crew pit. “It's one of my messengers. As soon as he jumps from the system momentarily we'll activate the gravity wells.” The Amdiral finished. Faraday wasn't unaccustomed to Sequa sending a messenger as he called it on occasion but this seemed like and extremely bad time. “Will they bring reinforcements?” She said aloud. Less then a milisecond later she internally cursed herself knowing that the Empire's fall back points weren't going to leave to engage on a whim. No the messenger must have been something separate for Sequa. “No, I am sending information as we've jammed all long range communications.” Faraday nodded as Sequa confirmed her own thoughts a half second before. A few seconds later the navigation officer behind the flight officer spoke up “A rebel fighter is breaking away from the ferrying and on an intercept course with the shuttle Commander.” Faraday turned to Sequa who only nodded in reply. Faraday turned back to the crewman as she spoke “Launch fighters keep them away from the shuttle until it breaks for hyperspace then activate the gravity wells.”

Harken's Threat Bridge

“It'll be a race to the edge of the system Captain.” The first officer spoke up towards the Bith Captain Jorgen. A moment ago a Sentinel shuttle left the interdictor cruisers hangar and made its way towards the hyperspace lane. It'd need a few moments for the navicomputer to make the jump. Jorgen had ordered one of the X-wings closest to the Harken to intercept it. “The shuttle can't be afforded to leave in case it's trying to bring additional reinforcements.” Jorgen said aloud then the first officer spoke again “They must have their engines damaged and can't jump away but we caught them by surprise before they could send a signal so they're trying to get word to their fleet physically. It must be why they haven't activated the gravity wells yet.” the first officer finished. Jorgen turned and nodded at the first officer in reply. “It appears that way.” he said as his large black Bith eyes  looked out from the forward viewer.


Kumo survivor column at Rally-point Alpha.

The ITT came to a quick stop at the edge of the rally point. The encirclement of shuttles and transports forming the semi-circle of ships in the dusty redish sands on the northwestern peninsula. The ITT had barely stopped and lowered as Kai hopped off the hull Vishar hopping of behind him. As they did Lieutenant Ryvil approached wearing his black flight suit. “Captain we're glad you arrived.” Ryvil said as he got within earshot. Kai grimaced and replied walking past Ryvil towards the Tie fighters and interceptors parked near the center of the semi-circle with a large titan drop-ship looming in the background. “Is my fight suit ready?” Was Kai's reply not even stopping to look at Ryvil as he bustled past heading towards the fighters. Ryvil turned and matched Kai's quick steps “Yes of course Commander Karamat had it ready a few hours ago.” Ryvil replied. “Good I want all remaining  interceptors and fighters skyborne in the next 3 minutes the bombers are to be held in reserve in case of a counter attack.” Kai barked as he continued toward the fighters and shed his olive drab tunic tossing it behind himself towards Vishar and started unbuckling his trousers. To his credit Vishar caught Kai's tunic and kept in stride the hole time. Ryvil had a confused look on his face “Counter attack sir?” was his reply. “Yes, the rebels will come to finish us off once they get into a scrap with the Slipstream and disengage it.” Kai barked and tossed his trousers at Vishar as he grabbed the black fight suit sitting on a cargo crate next to the tie fighters. “Disengage?” Ryvil replied again with a questioning tone. Kai flashed him an angry look “I don't have time to explain. Keep yourself alive up there and break away from fighting when I say we may both live to see tomorrow.” Kai's words barked again at Ryvil. Visha remembered the Captain said something similar to himself the day before and now another situation has become dire enough to say it again.

Ryvil gave Kai a nod and headed toward his fighter. Kai finished donning his large black tie pilot helmet and linked up his oxygen chestbox controls. A moment later Kai's microphoned voice came through towards Vishar who stood there holding his uniform. “Get to the command center and take control of the situation, make sure Karamat's crews are ready. We'll need them to go at a moments notice.” Vishar nodded and turned and hustled off to the titan dropship looming behind the cluster of Tie fighters and interceptors on P.L.R. Moving units starting to disengage as technicians worked the control boards on the sides of the P.L.R.s releasing the fighters to fly.
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #53 on: April 17, 2020, 05:52:35 AM »
Nice. Off to the front pages.

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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #54 on: April 18, 2020, 09:28:41 PM »
Here's a rough test of the Kumo column. The background picture is just clip art from somewhere and I slapped on bubbles and a lensflare... i think it could work...





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« Reply #55 on: April 19, 2020, 06:44:01 AM »
Now that looks like it will work great. Very nice.

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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #56 on: March 24, 2021, 02:13:58 AM »
(((Nearly a year since the last post! I actually sketched up the next few chapters months ago but works kept me from cleaning it up and post them.. i figure a few more updates coming sooner rather then later)))



Western coast...

Lt. Sylvon had spent a near sleepless night wadding in the still ocean as she watched the tall grass at the beaches sandy edge rustle back and forth some few dozen meters past the edge of the sandbar. Her speeder bike floated in front of her between her and the beach line so Sylvon could keep behind it in case anything dangerous or hungry came out of the grass. Her prisoner, the young rebel man had his arms tied above him and to the front airfoils of the speeder bike. Neither of them spoke either out of contempt for each other or for the fear that spiked through each of them as the hisses and rustling from the tall grass grew louder and then rescinded away as if a hunter had lost it's prey and made the growling hiss sound in frustration.

The next morning once the sun was well up and the rustling of the grass at the edge of the sandy beach had long since went silent Sylvon moved the speeder bike and her prisoner out of the water to the white sandy coastline. She and her rebel prisoner were half water logged and mostly exhausted. She thought of how long many hours she still had yet to travel and her tired eyes shut their lids and her body half drifted as her sense felt dulled and flat. She took a deep breath and opened her eyes stretching her arms out and unbuckling her tunic that was water logged from the waist down. She tossed it onto the field pack at the back of the speeder bike and tied it down using some of the rope still in the bike's satchel. She turned to the rebel still slumped against the airfoil of the speeder bike, his body also covered in water from the waist down but unlike Sylvon he was still attached to the speeder bike unable to do much more then slump next to it and like her only half awake.
   Sylvon gave him a half angered sneer at the thought of him burning holes through her shipmates as he fought through the Kumo's decks. Her anger was only sated by her sinister thoughts that came afterwards and the mental images of pain that danced through her mind. “Wake up scum.” She said in a tone slightly above a casual phrase. The young man Lt. Smoldz startled and woke blinking his eyelids awake. The young man turned to face Sylvon but was pulled back as his wrists were still bound with rope to the speeders airfoil. “We going?” he replied in a weak monotone voice. Sylvon gave a flash of a sneer and quickly turned it into a smile “No, no this is where you and I part ways rebel.” she said in a similar monotone voice as the smile on her face crept away into a more serious expression. “Part ways?” Smoldz asked. “You're letting me go?” he continued with a mixed look of sleepiness and surprise on his face. “Sylvon didn't bother looking at him and instead took out the vibro-knife from the supply satchel and walked to the air foil and quickly cut the cable holding the young man's wrists. She suspected he had no energy to fight once freed and her suspicions were correct as Smoldz let his arms fall limp to his sides his legs felt compelled to join and he collapsed his exhausted body onto the warm sand as his legs started to dry in the sun.
   Sylvon said nothing and returned to the seat of the speeder bike. Taking notice of the vibro blade as not to let it get away from her should her tired prisoner turn vengeful. She started the pre-start sequence and noticed the night in the water had flooded some of the exhaust vents and would have to warm up the bike before she departed. As she started the warm-up prepping Smoldz slowly stood rubbing his wrists. The sand clung to his back and legs as he walked around the speeder bike looking out into the sunny grasslands as Sylvon continued to ready the bike. “We're too far out...” Smoldz mumbled. “What?” Sylvon replied with a faux surprise tone to her reply. “We're too far from the Riptide or anything, I'll never make it back to them in a day.” He finished while looking past the sand into the tall grasslands. Sylvon knew this full well and it was part of what kept her hatred for the young man tempered, knowing he was about to be marooned with monstrous creature's only a nightfall away from tearing him to bloody pieces. Another few moments and she'd be on her way and done with this fool. She had thought of bringing him in to the rally point for interrogation, but with the hours yet to traverse and no telling if more of the arachnids would follow she deemed anything this young man may know for intelligence would be a casualty of war.
   Smoldz looked around seeing the sandbar trailing off into the horizon in front and behind him. The tall grasslands reflected some of the suns rays on one side of him as the ocean's waves stretched out to the horizon in the opposite direction of the grasslands. He thought for a moment at trying to rush the woman kicking her off the levitating bike but his energy and stamina were all but spent. He may have enough upper body strength left to knock her away but not enough to sustain a fight nor control the speeder bike for long. Then there was the fact he didn't know where he was and by evening if he was still around the sandbar he'd not survive the night if the arachnid creatures returned once the sun had set. He decided to make one last chance at survival he was part of Dryce's Deck and they worked with one foot in the grave as it was. “Please... take me with you and I'll tell you everything. Our contacts and the command officer that was feeding us information.” Smoldz sputtered the words out of his lips as Sylvan kicked a boot against the body of the speeder bike trying to get it to drain water from its ports. “Your contact was killed remember? The colonel we found.” Sylvan spat back at him her eyes crazed with a sneer. “No, not just him.” Smoldz replied. “He was only one of our priority pick ups. There was another.” he finished. Sylvan finished warming up the speeder and began operational sequence when he finished his sentence and she looked over at him as with a fury in her mind. Her tunic laid behind her on the bike's utility satchel. The bright sun had been beating on the pale skin of her shoulders a moment ago but it was starting to dull from a reddish white cloud swirling over the area. Sylvon didn't reply as she looked at the rebel in a furious snarl leaped from the bikes cushion her arms outstretched at the man's face and socked him in the in his chin. Smoldz's instinct's told him to back away but his energy and reaction time was so slowed Sylvon's punch landed cleanly on his chin her other hand scratched his face as she landed her body on his and they both fell into the small waves of the shore. The next few minutes was a melee of punches blocks and and kicks until both he and she spent their stamina and both collapsed into the water. Sylvon sat on her legs as the water came up to her waist her tank top soaked in sea water. Smoldz laid on his side trying to rise to his knees as he groaned. “Who!?” was Sylvon's only words towards him during this moment of truce. Smoldz coughed and slowly slogged to the speeder bike and lay against it as it hovered slightly above the waves repulsing the shallow water letting the sandbar beneath the few feet of water give it the resistance to levitate. Smoldz wasn't picky with his words “Later,... when safe.” Was his words as he pulled himself onto the back half of the bike and nearly slumped over.
   Sylvon groaned as she slowly stood her spite for this rebel the only energy giving her station to function. Her body was almost as exhausted as Smoldz's seemed. She imagined walking up to the speeder bike and pulling out the vibro knife from the satchel and plunging it into the younger man and tossing him into the waves. A moment later, Smoldz turned to Sylvon still half slumped over and looked up his face cut and slightly bleeding as he stared at her “The Captain,.. didn't seem to know who the contact was.” he finished. Sylvon gave a grunt as she imagined Captain Kai's questions on what the rebel knew and why didn't she bring him in. “We're about an hour away from the rally point.” Was her reply to him her own words betraying her minds vengeful imagination. Smoldz nodded and scooted back on the cushion. Sylvon walked towards the speeder bike and pulled back up on it noticing her lack of strength to gain register on the bike itself once she was atop it. She thought of the vibro-knife in the satchel and had she remember prior to mounting the speeder bike she may have pulled it from it's utility satchel but with her strength depleted and her prisoner now in an uneasy truce she decided not to remind him where it was. A few seconds later she clicked the switches to start the bikes movement and the pair were off moving down the sandbar north towards the rally-point.

Above Aranae...

Through the reddish white cloud Luke Skywalkers X-wing was having its scopes and sensors give false readings or none at all. Luke had descended through the pinkish mist towards the center of the continent where a large forest covered most of the central part of it's landmass. R2D2 gave a few beeps and boops as red text spawned over the Luke's cockpit screen. “I know! We'll be out of it soon I think. Keep senors marked for Han's crash site.” Luke said back to R2 who gave an affirmative whirl and beeps in reply.
   A few minutes later the crash site was visible near the center of the continent. A long winding river trailed over the middle of the forest from its northern area to its southern shore. About halfway up the river Luke saw the familiar disc with a fork forward sticking up from the from the riverbank and a gathering of beings around it. Luke gave a half smile and clicked on his comm system “Han old buddy, ya read me?” He said in an upbeat voice. A few seconds later the voice of Han Solo cracked over the speaker “Luke! Luke be careful there's these things on this world, crazy looking spider creatures. They can take a pistol or rifle blast like a light punch!” Han expelled as if he had been holding in the words awaiting the right time to say the mouthful. Luke gave a cautious look over the treeline near the river where the Falcon was resting. “R2 take the controls a moment and lower us over the treetops. I'm going to try something.” Luke said into his microphone. R2 gave a few cautious whines as Luke closed his eyes and reach out with the force. His minds eye extended beyond the cockpit and beyond the X-wing into the trees and past the forest canopy. A moment later he his closed eyes and brow and furrowed as he felt so many emotions wash over him, dark angry emotions. Spite, Hate, Dread, Vengence, were but of a few of the feelings that washed over Luke in a rush of emotion and he gritted his teeth at the feeling of contempt rising out of him. R2 gave out a whirl and beep questioning Luke's method. Luke opened his eyes and coughed “I can't believe it... its drenched in Hatred.. this place... is dark R2.” R2 for his credit gave the affirmative beep and whirl as Luke took the controls back and slowly brought the X-wing down to hover over the Falcon.
   Han Solo had exited the Falcon and waved to Luke's x-wing still hovering over his own ship. In the top gun turret Tarris watched the X-wing hover a moment as she took her eyes on and off the ship scanning the trees for possible hostiles. Han reach up the small cylindrical communicator to his face clicked it on as he spoke into its mic “Thanks a lot kid but we'll be back airborne in a few minutes.” He said in a relieved tone. “Sure you will...” Luke replied his mind scolding him for replying in such a harsh tone towards his friend and he snapped his emotions in line as Hand came back through the com-channel “Well even I'm not hedging bets on the Falcon.” Luke was glad his friend gave another sentence for him to reply to as he composted himself. “I'm sure you'll be back in the air quick old buddy. You want me to come down?” Han shook his head as he replied back in the communicator “No, I think we'll be fine. Might want to check on the survivor's heading up to the frigate. They may be able to explain what happened. Luke felt the urge to click off the microphone letting Han go unreplied, then the thought of replying to him how if he'd been a good pilot he'd be with the frigate himself. Luke swallowed and stifled that thought, and replied “Sounds good I'll head on out. See ya there!” He replied as Han held in the instinct to curse the younger man out for interrupting him. Luke took a moment and removed his gloves rubbing his bare fingers together in the X-wing cockpit. “Why am I feeling like this...” Luke mummured to himself a bit less sure of himself.

The last of the shuttles were enroute to the Harken's threat and Wedge Antilles clicked on his communicator “Rogues, form up. Be ready for hostiles.” The corresponding fighters replied back to him in his helmet. Nine other fighters aside from himself. A mix of X-wings and Y-wings and A-wings were the current compliment of Rogue Squadron after the battle a 2 days earlier at Endor. Wedge watched a lone X-wing slowly descend to the middle of the reddish white cloud towards the middle of the continent. His friend Luke Skywalker heading down to check on Generals Solo and Calrissian. A moment later one of the other Rogue pilots crackled in his helm's headset “Lead! Marks coming up from planetside! A mix of eyeballs and squints!”. Wedge gave a reply back “Rogues 3, 4, and 8. Run sentry for the frigate. The rest are with me!” he announced as he banked his X-wing away from the Harken's threat towards the mix of other Alliance fighters forming up around his position.
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
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Rally-point Alpha...

Vishar stood in the makeshift command center inside the titan drop-ship. A few scrounged screens from the Kuomo hooked up to portable generators. At the screens were gray clad imperial technicians some without their signature black caps. In the middle of the center was the familiar face of Sergeant Atter. Vishar stopped in front of him. The much older grizzled Atter turned nodding an acknowledgment to Vishar as the younger man spoke. “The Captain has sent direct orders for Commander Karamat's forces.” he finished as Atter's demeanor remained stoic. “Spit it out lad.” Vishar explained the Captain's order to Atter who nodded again and barked an order over at one of the stations to a technician working their comm-channels. While Atter sent the message Vishar walked over behind a seated technician taking notice on the screen showing a red line readout of the area of space above the planet. Small bright red symbols designated the rebel fighters and a rebel frigate orbiting the planet. Slightly above the rebel signals in bright blue was the arrow headed shape symbol of an interdictor cruiser with a small stream of blue imperial symbols ascending from the planet as Kai's fighters entered the sensor readout's range.
   Vishar grabbed an empty supply crate next to one of the consoles and sat next to the communications terminal as the grey clad tech worked it's control making sure the information from Captain Kai was being received by Commander Karamat's ground forces successfully. After the tech finished the transmission he gave Vishar a successful nod as Vishar stood and looked at the screen readouts with the blue and red fighter symbols mixing as the combat between the rebels and imperial fighters had begun. “Do you think we'll be safe here?” Vishar threw the question towards Atter who was leaning over another grey technician in front of one of the tactical screens. Sergeant Atter simply barked back “No... none of us are, even here.” without even turning to look at Vishar. Vishar gulped silently in response and turned to one of unmanned communication stations that had been rigged for use but because of the scramble from the aerial battle had kept other techs from coming into the titan ship. Vishar took the supply crate and sat on it in front of the battered console trying to listen into the comms chatter of the battle above...


Streams of green and red laser fire doused the sky like a light show crossing each other and landing on each sides targets. Eruptions of metal and smoke illuminated the daytime sky even more as rebel and imperial fighters exploded. Crackling through the helmets of the tie fighters and interceptors came the voice of Captain Kai entering the fray “Keep distance from the frigate don't let their stragglers pull you within it's turbolaser's range! Keep a good distance make them come to you and burn their shields up to get closer to your vectors!” Kai gritted his teeth beneath his black skull like tie pilot helm as he felt his fighter's movements slightly sluggish from the plant's atmosphere but start fade away behind his fighter for the unrestricted movement of low orbit space. “Remember this isn't a destroy mission, keep the rebels off the cruiser and get it planet side fast. Then get yourselves to the ground once the order is given. There will be not second chances on this.” Kai barked into his helmets comm-channel.

In low orbit the fight that had started off with a thick webbing of laser fire had careened towards most of the tie fighters streaming for the interdictor cruiser in the distance in high orbit above the planet. Along an intercept vector with the group of rebel fighters also heading towards the arrow-head shaped cruiser and the exit vector of the Sentinel shuttle breaking for hyperspace.

Wedge Anitlles glanced back and forth at his readouts and cursed under his breath. The imps had sent the majority of their fighters on an intercept vector towards their own fighters heading towards the imp shuttle. Wedge hoped they would be heading towards the cruiser or would turn tail and run but it seems these imps are wanting to try and slug it out with them. “Fine.” Wedge mumbled to himself prepping his torpedoes and ranging his quad laser cannons. A moment later the shouts of the other rebel pilots filled the comm-channels as the squadrons of ties waded into the rebel fighters. “Break right 8 you've got one on your tail!” “Keep on that shuttle rogues we're almost there!” “I'm hit! I'm hit!”. Wedge spun his X-wing as green laser fight doused over his x-foils and and turned it to see a pair of tie fighters closing on his position. He rolled down towards the exit vector of the sentinel shuttle and launched a pair of torpedos he knew evading the pair of imps would cost his chances of catching the shuttle but thought the torps might make the shuttle recalculate for hyperspace for a few more moments. Wedge couldn't sit and see if his gamble paid off as the pair of fighters split in a pincer maneuver trying to flank his vector but keeping their distance. This surprised Wedge as most imp pilots are trained to go straight for an enemy and destroy it casualties be damned. “Well trained I see.” Wedge mumbled as he let out a volley of red laser fire from his quad cannons catching one of the Ties as it tried to swing wide exposing its large rectangular solar panel. The fighter erupted in an explosion of gas and metal flame. Wedge instantly turned to engage the second tie to find it no longer in the pincer maneuver and now fleeing back to the main force of imperials. He thought to give it chase for a split second then he remembered the priority was the shuttle. Wedge turned just in time to see his torps explode in a glorious ball of blue and white flame. But it was for not as the shuttle swung wide just enough to dodge the explosion and as Wedge saw a pair of A-wing's close in the shuttle leaped. “Stang!” Wedge cursed into his mic. Wedge turned to see the imperial's breaking for the planet. “Oh no you don't” Wedge said as he clicked on his mic. “Let's break this party up fast before more imps show up rogues.” He said clicking off his mic. “On it lead! Will do Rogue Leader!” came the responses to his orders when Captain Jorgen's voice from the Harken's Threat came through his helm “We saw it get away Rogue Leader, lets do what we can and see if we can clean up these imps, I'm sending for additional reinforc-” Suddenly a loud squawking noice filled the comm-channel as it did when imperial's jam them. Wedge checked his readings and that's when he noticed that his hyperspace navi-computer was bugging. The interdictor activated it's gravity wells. “What in the hells?” Wedge thought. Just them from the belly of the Interdictor several more tie fighters spewed from it adding to the already chaotic space battle going on. The precious seconds went by as Wedge sped to re-enter the fray of battle now with over a dozen ties from the interdcitor opposite in the rear of the rebel fighters chasing after the first sets of imperial fighters that were now racing planet side. Wedge knew the ties would be at a disadvantage in atmosphere but with another squadron bearing down on his units from behind the rebels would be caught in a cross fire of enemy targets. Worse yet the interdictor started slowly slithering towards the planet as well as if overseeing the slow descent of the three sets of fighters.



Harken's Threat

“What in the skies is it doing?!” Captain Jorgen flustered as his cheek flaps ruffled and he shook his large spherical head. One of the human officers called out behind him “It's confirmed comms are jamed and the imperial threw it's gravity fields up as soon as the shuttle leapt.” he said looking up from his console. Jorgen huffed “We'll worry about it if we have to, hopefully this mess will be finished before any more imps arrive.” Jorgen said then paused watching the interdictor “Move us to an intercept vector of the imp cruiser to keep it off our friendlies.”. The Harken's Threat crew rushed to complete their orders and start the maneuver as Captain Jorgen sat in his command chair watching the battle unfold.


Low Orbit

“All fighters to rally-point alpha you know your assignments!” Kai barked from his helmet. The skirmish with the rebel fighters had went worse then he expected losing 9 of the compliment of ties while the rebels lost only a pair. He remembered Captain Girdon's night strike on the Rebel's crashed cruiser day and a half before and Gridon selecting the best half dozen pilots of the remaining Kuomo's fighter wing. It was no wonder the least experienced and least trained pilots fell to the battle hardened rebels. Kai spun his interceptor towards the northern peninsula in the distance with the remaining ties forming up on him.

A sparatic blast of red laser fire caught one of the interceptor's next to him and tore its triangular wing from it's strut sending the fellow interceptor to a firey crash in the continent's forested area. Kai gritted his teeth, he knew the Viraxen would be on anyone in the forest now. He looked down seeing the second set of tie signals coming from a rear vector behind the rebels giving chase to his own ties. Kai gave a clearing breath into his helm as the sight of the continent below him transitioned from grassland to reddish dirt and rolling hills. “This is it.” he thought to himself. As he barked into his comm-channel “Make for your target areas and keep low altitude only engage if you absolutely must and be ready to ditch if your power drops to red levels!” Kai finsihed. A few acknowledgements from the remaining squadron leaders came through. He knew the Slipstreams pilots wouldn't be aware of the impending barrage about to happen nor would he try and warn them for fear of the rebels breaking through the jamming signals. Faraday's pilots would have to navigate the coming cross fire themselves.


ICC Slipstream

“Rebel frigate moving to intercept!” one of the grey clad techs shouted from his console in the starboard crew pit. Captain Faraday turned her head and nodded an acknowledgment to her crewman. She had only launched her fighters a few minutes earlier to entrap the rebel fighters as Kai had suggested. She knew this was the best route to victory but more importantly for her to see her sibling again. “Distance until it's in our batterie's range?” She barked at the port side crew pit. A woman in a green officers uniform leaning over a grey clad imperial tech turned to Faraday “30 seconds!”. “Have gunners ready and mark on the frigate's engines, keep us away from it as much as possible.” She gave a swift reply before turning back towards the view port. The distant dark specs that were her ships fighters sending small thin green blaster bolts and the even smaller darker specs that were the rebel fighters gave her an idea of where the fighters had entered the atmosphere and the strange red mist that now seemed to be spreading again like a thick mist of miasma engulfing the skies above the western side of the continent. She know Admiral Sequa would question her reasoning for entering the planet and the fighter combat she had an idea of what Kai had planned for his crew. To shuttle and grav lift his crew to the Slipstream before more Alliance forces arrive.


Aranae skies...

The fleeing ties were given a moment reprieve as most of the rebel fighters slowed and turned to engage the set of fighters behind them spraying them with laser fire. Wedge Antilles followed behind all three sets of fighters and saw his squadron's turn to engage the interdictor's fighters closing on them from behind. He himelf coming in behind even them. His R2 unit gave a wailing warning sound as it signaled the large imperial interdictor had started towards the planet itself as well. Wedge gave a worried sigh as he knew this was getting messy and sloppy fast. The next few seconds flashed by as he saw eruptions in the red mist slowly engulfing the entire battle above the continent. Wedge sped into the hairball of fighters as he unleashed a set of quad laser blasts catching a tie in the wingstrut and eyeball cockpit blowing it into scrap. Wedge looked up to see the shadow of the arrow-head shaped interdictor slowly bank away from the dog-fight as it headed quickly into the atmosphere. “Where are they going.” he wondered for a second before he saw the shape of the Harken's Threat pass overhead in pursuit of the interdictor. “Sloppy and fast.” Wedge mumbled again.

A few moments later Kai flew his tie next to Lt. Ryvil's interceptor who was leading the pack of ties fleeing from the battle. The pair didn't speak over the mics but soon Ryvil and a handful of the surviving ties broke for the continent's northern peninsula's grassy hills that transition the grasslands into the hills and red desert area of the rally point. Kai broke high heading towards the actual rally point itself with the remaining surviving ties meeting the tie bombers already in the air in a sentry line above the peninsula. A few minutes later the word came over the comm-channel that the rebels had torn through the Slipstream's ties and what few survived broke off and fled. Kai gave a half sigh of relief as the ties had given them enough time to save a few of his own forces. Kai banked his interceptor around and barked into his helms comm “Here they come, be ready and lead them in!”. Were the last words he half shouted into the comm-channel.


Wedge Antilles counted his blessing and those of his squadron his fighters had torn through the interdictor's fighters pummeling them and sending them skipping off into the atmosphere. Less then a half minute after the rear ties were destroyed and dispersed he ordered the rest of the rogue's after the lead ties heading for the planet. Just then heard rough crackled voices through the imperial jamming on the broad channel. “Captain Jorgen?” Wedge tested his mic but no recognizable words came back through. Did the imps stop their jamming? But he didn't get a second chance to ask as green sprays of laser fire just missed his quad canon as some of the tie's had used the thick red mist lowering itself into the skies above the continent as cover to surprise attack the rebel fighters. The tactic worked as an A-wing took a volley in the cockpit breaking the small fighter in half and sending it's flaming pieces falling towards the continent's forests. “Break LEFT!” Wedge shouted as more ties emerged from the red mist and headed down towards the grasslands of the continent. Wedge and his fighters turned in chase spraying red shots of laser fire across the fighters hitting a tie/ln and a tie bomber turning them into flaming wreckage as they imperial fell into the grasslands and hills at the southern edge of the continents peninsula. “Keep on'em! Don't let them get away.” Wedge shouted into his mic. For a split second he felt a sudden rush of heat and adrenaline through his face that he dismissed as his voice sounded angry in his orders. The rebel fighters were on the ties banking and weaving through the hills at the edge of the grasslands. Wedge felt his anger and animosity grow and tried to quell it and remain calm with a hard breath. It was unlike Wedge to feel this but something had enraged his emotions as if he needed to watch these imperials burn for their aggression.

As Ryvil's group of surviving ties banked and cut to avoid being blasted by the rebel fighters. It became obvious the rebels weren't going to let the imperial's run. They were tenacious tracking after the ties. Ryvil banked his tie around a high jutting rock formation and slowed allowing the rebel fighters in pursuit to see him make the turn easily. Wedge saw the interceptor in front of him make the bank around the jutting crags and make the turn almost too leisurely it had been all his effort from punching his engines full throttle and blazing away with his quads. In that split second Wedge let his control yoke and exhaled. The emotional toll on his senses was making his head hurt he felt anger, hatred, spite in his mind for these imps... nothing he hadn't before but he was becoming tunnel visioned in that second he pulled up above the jutting rock formation expecting to come down on the tie from above. Instead as he cleared the rock formation to see the other side of the rolling grass hill he was met with a volley of fire from ground forces AT-ST's and an AT-AT unleashed on his X-wing scoring hits and tearing his forward shields away almost instantly. Wedge cursed and banked on his control yoke as he felt multiple hits score on his rear fuselage and take out two of his engines. “Rogues this is lead! I'm hit.. I can't hold it!” “B**ail ou** lead!” “***unch out ***oss!” were the muffled sounds coming through the imperial jamming sounds as wedge grabbed his vape-mask and on his face and smashed the ejection control. The cockpit of the X-wing turned blue in the containment field as the cockpits thorn shape propelled itself from Wedge's X-wing and the small thrusters under the cock pit engaged to control its descent.
   Wedge held onto his grav-couch's harness as he saw his X-wing smash into one of the rolling grass hills next to the reddish red desert colored crags exploding in a ball of flame and scrap. Wedge's breathing was rushed as he felt the hard crash of the cockpit land hard on the grasslands throwing him into the ground and rolling onto his leg. “Aaaahhh” Wedge yelled as he felt the weight of the cockpit crushing and cutting in this legs as he tried to push it off. Above him the other Y-wings and X-wing's flew over and he reach a gloved hand to them trying to warn them as he tried to shout in pain into his mic “Don't Rogues! It's a TRAP!”. But the static from the imperials jamming took most of the message to crackling noise. A moment later AT-AT's and AT-ST's opened up from defended positions along the attack vector of the rebel fighters. Wedge laid back on the grass unable to pull free of the cockpit. “The lead us into a trap. How...” These words escaped his lips as Wedge passed out from the bloodloss and pain trapped under his own X-wing's ejected cockpit that had just moments ago saved his life.


The imperial driver turned to Commander Karamat inside their AT-ST cockpit “Targets in the open Sir.” Karamat turned on her comm-channel to the rest of her forces in their positions in and around the grassland hills and jutting crags the hills transitioned to as the grasslands became the red dirt and desert of the northern peninsula. “All units open fire, fire at will!” She barked into the comm-channel as the AT-ST's and AT-AT walkers opened up from their defilade positions on the unassuming rebel fighters in pursuit. The Rebels were experienced but not expecting heavy ground forces. They had just torn through a read guard of ties and had their confidence on high. What they didn't expect was much like the wave of ties behind them earlier they had destroyed they targets on the ground in front of and from above Ryvil and Kai's ties swarmed on them from above using the red mist as cover. Unlike the same battle a few moments earlier the Rebel fighters weren't in orbit with kilometer's of space to bank and maneuver to overtake the Slipstreams ties. Here they pulled up from the crags and hills escaping the hail of ground fire into the green lasers of the ties spraying into them from above. The Y-wings were the first to go as they were the slowest and and Kai had told his pilots they were the priority. 

The rebel fighters turned away from the red mist and headed across the norther western peninsula. Eventually coming across another set of tie bombers circling a mass amount of imperial material and vehicles.

From the bridge of the Harken's Threat Captain Jorgen pointed at the viewport as he turned to his gunner command officer. “Open up everything on them we have to bring comm's back!” “Yes-sir!” one of the rebel fleet officers said as rebel frigate opened up on the fleeing interdictor. Both capital ships exchanged volleys of turbo laser fire smashing into each others hulls. The Threat's smaller silhouette gave it a slight advantage as the gunners on both ships scored hits. One volley hit the command tower and tore into one of the round shield generators on the interdictor.

Faraday cursed out loud and turned towards the port crewpit as the Slipstream rocked from the laser fire. “Status!” An officer looked up at her “Shields are holding but comms are out, as well as the grav wells!”. Faraday turned towards the helmsman “That scum is getting close, keep them away from Kai's position understood?” A man in a black officers uniform shouted “Yes-sir!”. Faraday winced after a moment realizing that the rebel frigates volleys had knocked out their comms and their jamming signal.


The group of ties from Kai's group swarmed the rebel fighters from the North as Ryvil's group attacked from the East using the red mist as cover. The rebel pilots held as long as they could but being attacked from three sides they realized they would have to break off the attack. As Captain Kai watched the dog fighting unfold what had concerned him the most was that the battle had slowly shifted from the crags where the walkers were putting fire on the rebel fighters from below towards the West over the peninsula where the Rally-point was. Kai started to open his comm-channel when suddenly from above a hail of red laser fire poured into the ties from the East, from the red mist cloud the ties had been using for their surprise attack on the rebel fighters just moments before. Kai clicked on his comm “Onyx group turn and intercept!” Kai barked into the helm as a pair of ties fell flaming into the ground. Kai gritted his teeth and banked his tie to engage just as a pair of rebel fighters threw a hail of laser fire at him clipping the top of his statboard solar panel “Stang” Kai cursed as he turned away from the intercept vector, away from the newly arrived X-wing.

   Inside the X-wing joining the fray a scowl came over Luke Skywalker's face. He clicked on his comm noticing the jamming was gone. “Rogue Group! Pull up high and towards the West, all X-wing's form up on me we'll cover for the rest!”. Luke shouted into his mic.

The battle had naturally shifted west away from the ever creeping red mist cloud that was now again thick and opaque. Luke sprayed fire over a tie bomber joining the fray and sent it careening down into a hillside as it exploded and detonated it's concussion missiles and proton bombs inside it making a huge explosion that took out a nearby Imperial Troop Transport and topped an AT-ST. The ground fire from the AT-AT's and other ground troops had slowed but another X-wing and an A-wing were shot down during the fight before the rebel pilots had gotten the orders to pull up and out of the area. When Luke and the other fighters pulled up out of the fray they saw the large arrow-head interdictor off in the distance heading Northwest across the peninsula. Laying a volley of turbo laser fire at the smaller silhouette of the Harken's Threat in pursuit.


A few moments later Luke and the X-wing's had laid waste to half a dozen more ties sending them into hillsides or turning them into fire and scrap to fall in chunks to the grasslands. Inside the his interceptor Kai clicked switches and fought the control yoke to keep himself aloft. He turned on his comm channel “Remaining Onyx group head back for Rally-point Alpha be ready to reengage! All ground forces are to rendezvous at the fall back point.” Kai finished his words trying to hold them back, he had hoped they would repel the rebel forces but he had only delayed the inevitable. At Kai's orders the remaining ties only a half dozen left and himself banked away and headed towards the peninsula's coast.

 Watching the ties bank away and head towards the coastline leading towards the peninsula Luke smiled and clicked on his mic “That's our exit vector, Wedge where are you?” Luke shouted into his comm. “He's on the deck Boss! The imps clipped him and he ditched!” came the response from one of the other Rogue pilots. Luke gave a heavy breathe he was trying hard to control his emotions. He gritted his teeth as he heard the news of his friend and the anger started to creep into him again Luke swung his X-wing back on the ground forces now starting to disperse in the grassy hills. He flew until he found a well hidden AT-AT next to a jutting rock crag formation and unleashed a volley of quad laser fire into it, ripping through the rear of it's hull and launched a torp into the hole his quad lasers made blowing the walker apart from the inside in spectacular fashion sending shrapnel high into the air.
   A few beeps and blurbs from R2-D2 came over his cockpit screen and Luke gave it a second look “Really R2?” The droid responded with an affirmative.” Luke gave a sigh and opened his comms again. “Rogue Group head west over the peninsula and mark targets to take out. I'm going after Rogue 2 on the deck.” “You sure about that Luke? It's dangerous!” said one of the mon calamari pilots in a passing Y-wing. “I'll be fine, make sure to leave a few for me.” Luke said feeling the urge to suppress a curse back at the other pilot. Luke felt his hatred and his anger had become so intensified during this battle he could hardly focus.


Rally-point Alpha

During the multiple aerial battles going on Sergeant Atter had been coordinating ground forces from his position in the command center as Vishar was sending and receiving transmissions to and from the Tie groups and the Slipstream. A moment ago Captain Kai ordered the retreat of his forces which meant the remaining imperial personnel at the Rally-point started to scurry and prepare for an attack. Vishar was trying to reach Lt. Ryvil's interceptor when a tattered looking stormtrooper and naval trooper came into the command center informing Sergeant Atter that Lt. Sylvon had just arrived at the Rally-point and had a prisoner. “A fine time for procedures isn't it?” Atter scoffed “Get her in here and put a blaster in her hand we'll need every last trooper for this fight coming.” Atter backed back at the pair of men as they turned and left. Vishar had made contact with Ryvil's incterceptor when he heard something strange coming through the comm-channel. Vishar tried to make sense of it but it sounded like, chanting. He took the earpiece from his head and gave it to another tech in the control center who agreed. Vishar then turned to Atter who had no interest in how Lt. Ryvil's mental state had become at the moment. “We're about to be strafed and you bother me with that!?” Atter huffed. Get yourselves armed and get the Captain the position on the incoming rebels!” Atter yelled and Vishar and the other techs turned carrying out the orders.

A moment later a bruised and beaten looking Lt. Sylvon staggered into the command center. “I've returned with information for the Captain, sergeant.” Atter looked at the battered woman and shook his head. “So do we all get yourself armed the rebel fighters will be over us any second!” Atter spoke loudly so everyone in the command center could hear. A few moments later the sounds of torpedoes and bombs cascading into the supply depot's echoed with the sounds of dual and quad laser canons strafing the Rally point's vehicles and supplies drowned out the orders being shouted by sergeant Atter. “We need to go!” Vishar yelled as bombs dropped into the other shuttles and vehicles parked in the half circle around the rally-point. A moment later a pair of large explosions rocked the large titan drop ship and Atter turned to the other imperials “Everyone out now!”. Vishar and the rest of the crew had just cleared the door of the dropship to see a pair of red lasers tear the sands to their left up in a volley of laser fire. Vishar hit the ground and started to crawl away from the titan dropship. A few seconds later Sergeant Atter emerged from the titan with Lt. Sylvon in tow when over head a Y-wing launched a volley of torpedoes and blaster fire into the titan vehicle makeshift command base. It tore open the top of the pyramid shaped vehicle sending Lt. Sylvon and Sergeant Atter flying across the sandy ground. Atter came to a stop with a battered and bloodied face as the top of his head was bleeding and a chunk of shrapnel stuck in his large dark mushroom shaped helmet.
   Laying next to Atter was the barely responding body of Lt.Sylvon who had been the last to get out of the titan dropship. A piece of shrapnel from the explosion and blew into her back and tore into her shoulderblade and the sharp edge of the shrapnel protruded from under Sylvon's right collarbone. Vishar tried to stand to get assistance but the volleys of fire from the rebel ships prevented him.
   As the last pair of Y-wings's from Harken's Threat found their marks on the large titan dropship the pilots congratulated themselves “Wohoo!” “Got'tem!”they shouted across their recently unjammed com channels. Vishar looked up to see the Lt. Sylvon's blood staining the read desert ground and crawled over to her battered body as another man with no shirt and tattered trousers ran over to her and tried to pull on the shrapnel. Vishar screamed at the man who turned to him without an expression and tried to continue to extract the piece of metal out of Sylvon's body.

... to be continued...

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Re: The last orders of Captain Kai...
« Reply #59 on: October 13, 2021, 02:58:03 AM »
Great to see an update!

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